#2 Manan- Unacceptable Relation(Chapter 104 on pg no.42)(23-8-2017) - Page 9

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Hi guys...

It's a platinum jubilee for this story Unacceptable Relation.


CHAPTER -75

At one of hotel room in which the Khuranas were staying-

Soha entered the room in full anger and saw a man standing at the window with his back facing her.

Soha went straight to him and turned him around.

Soha - Harshad...Are you mad? Tum kya soch rahe the????
Tum Manik ko open challenge de rahe the. Iska Matlab jante ho???

Agar mai time pe lights off nahi karti to pata hai kya hosakta tha???

Agar tum Nandini se badla Lena chahte ho to u have to be careful.

Harshad - Nahi Soha Ab bas. Bahut bhag liya. Us Nandini ko to mai sabak sikha kar rahunga. Uski wajah se mera poora career barbad hogaya. Itni aasani se to nahi Jane doonga mai usey. Aur mai Kisi se nahi darta. Na hi Manik se aur na hi Kisi aur se.

Soha- Haan but we have to follow our plan. Tumhe Nandini se badla Lena hai aur mujhe Manik chahiye.

So we have to team up and stick to our plan.

Harshad - What plan???

Soha - Offo Harshad tum itni jaldi bhoolgaye. You have to help me in getting Manik and then Nandini will be all alone. Fir tum apna badla lesakte ho.
But now that you have ruined everything, toh I think tumhe Kuch din ke liye kahi chale Jana chahiye take Manik convince hojaye ki Nandini safe hai. Then we can strike with full force.

Their conversation was disturbed by Mr.Khurana.

Mr.Khurana- Soha tum yahan Harshad ke room me.

Soha - Haan Dad actually wo Harshad India wapas jaraha hai.

Harshad -Yes Uncle mujhe Kuch zaruri kaam hai to mai nikalta hoon.

Saying this Harshad left.

Soha - Dad apne to mera birthday gift diya hi nahi.

Mr. Khurana - Kal hi to itne saare gifts diye the tumhe. Meri gudiya ko aur kya gift chahiye???

Soha- Daddd... Stop calling me gudiya and all Ok. Ab mai bachchi nahi rahi. Mai badi hochuki hoon.

Mr.Khurana laughed heartily and said- Acha baba. Ab batao kya gift chahiye???

Soha - Mujhe Malhotras ka project handle karna hai.

Mr.Khurana- What??? Par Beta it's an important deal and u don't have any experience in such matters.

Soha - Please Dad let me handle it. I want to prove myself and this is an excellent opportunity. So please don't say no. Please please please...

Mr.Khurana thought for a while and said- Okay. But I don't want any mistake from your side. So better be careful.

Soha - Yes Dad I will handle it well. Don't worry.

Mr.Khurana- Ok then. Once we reach India we will get the paperwork done.

Soha - Thanks Dad. Love you Dad...

Saying this Soha hugged Mr.Khurana.

Mr.Khurana - Love You too Beta.

With this the two of them went away to their respective rooms.

In Soha's room-

Soha entered her room with a huge smile on her face.

Soha self thought- Thank God finally Dad Maan gaye. Ab Manik ke kareeb Rehne ka bahana to Milgaya hai mujhe. Is cheez ka mujhe 2saal se intezar tha.

Soha took out her mobile and looked at Manik's pic.

Soha - U know Manik jabse Maine tumhe Dekha hai I just can't take my eyes off you. Agar Nandini hamare beech nahi aati to aaj hum saath hote.

Mai Janti hoon ki tumhari aur us Nandini ki shaadi kin halaat me Hui thi but don't worry tumhe zyada din tak usey jhelna nahi padega.

Mai tumhari help karungi to get rid of her.

You know how much I love you. I can't see you with anyone else.
Tumhe paane ke liye mai Kisi bhi hadd tak jasakti hoon. That's how much I love you.

Saying this, Soha kissed Manik's pic in her mobile.

In the meantime,

In Manik's car-

Manik and Nandini were on their way to their home.

Nandini was lost in her thoughts.

Manik looked at Nandini and couldn't bear the fact that Nandini was so silent or rather in fear because of Harshad.

Manik - Nandini kya soch rahi ho???

Nandini - Kuch nahi Manik.

Manik - Fir tum itna chup chap kyu ho? I don't want to see you in this state.

Nandini - Matlab???

Manik - Matlab tum aise bilkul bhi achi nahi lagti. I want to see you in your chirpy self.

Nandini smiled weakly

Manik - Comeon u can do better. Thoda aur Haslo. Hasne pe tax nahi Lagta. So why this kanjoosi???

Nandini smiled more.

Manik - That's better. Aise hi haste raha karo.

Nandini was back to being herself as she didn't want Manik to stress himself more.

Nandini - Waise Manik ek baat bolu???

Manik - Haan Bolo na.

Nandini - Aap na us Soha se dur hi raho. I don't like her.

Manik thought to tease Nandini a bit.

Manik - Kyu??? She is not that bad. Infact she is an interesting character. I like her.

Nandini - What do you mean by you like her? Manik what's going on???

Manik - What??? Nothing is going on. Mai to bas genuinely praise kar raha tha.

Nandini - Manik I don't want you to praise any other girl except me . Be it genuine or fake. Do you get it???

Manik controlled his smile and said- But Nandini... This is not done. Ajeeb zabardasti hai.

Nandini in her anger filled tone pointed her finger at Manik and said- Don't you dare take Soha's name infront of me. Get this straight once and for all.

On hearing this Manik started laughing and said- Omg. Tum bhi na Nandini. Mai to bas mazak kar raha tha. Do you think I will think about anyone else other than you. Never Nandini. I just can't you out of my mind even for a second . So how will I think of others.

You are and will always remain the love of my life. No matter what.

Nandini on hearing this looked into Manik's eyes and said- Manik...

Manik -Hmm...

Nandini - Close your eyes.

Manik looked at her confusingly.

Nandini kept her hand on Manik's eyes and pecked his lips lightly.

Manik opened his eyes and saw Nandini blushing.

Manik held Nandini's hand and pulled her towards him with a jerk.

Manik - Nandini I think I have to teach you something.

Nandini - What???

Manik - On how to kiss ...

Nandini - Manik I think we should go now. Ghar pe sab wait kar rahe honge.

Manik - Not before teaching you my love.

Saying this Manik fused his lips with Nandini's lips and started kissing her slowly and gently.

There was no urgency in the kiss.

Manik poured all his love in the kiss.

His hands carelessly travelled all over Nandini's back.

Nandini pulled Manik more towards her by placing her hands in his hair.

Nandini without breaking the kiss laid down on the car seat with Manik below her.

Then she bit Manik's lower lip and as soon as Manik's lips parted,she entered her tongue and explored his mouth.

Manik held her waist tightly and let her lead the kiss.

The slow and gentle kiss eventually turned into passionate and wild kiss.

Manik's hand entered Nandini's dress and he was about to remove the dress when Nandini remembered suddenly about the morning incident.

Nandini broke the kiss and sat straight.

Manik - Kya hua Nandini???

Nandini - I'm really sorry Manik... Wo actually...

Manik understood her inner turmoil.

Manik - It's Ok Nandini. I can understand. But don't worry about anything. I am always there for you. No one and trust me when I say no one can harm you as far as I am there.

Manik cupped Nandini's face and said all this.

Nandini - I know Manik. And I trust you. I shouldn't have thought about it when we were...

Manik - It's Ok. Just forget it. Let's go.

Manik and Nandini then drove back to their home.



Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

And on this special event on completion of 75 chapters, I have given a comparatively bigger update.

And I am expecting bigger comments.

Hope you guys will give longgg comments.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Awesomeee amazinggg update
Aawww Manan car mein romance...soha ki chuttni bnane ka mnn krta hai manan ke beech aayegi...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Awesome update...pls give more Manan romance...hate soha 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
👏

congrats

kya baat hai bold nandini 😛 kiss n all haa
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Awesome
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys...

I am presenting you with another update...

Sorry for the delay guys...



CHAPTER -76

Manik and Nandini reached home.


As soon as Pia saw Nandini, she hugged her tightly.

Pia - Nandu tu theek to hai na???

Nandini - Haan Di mai theek hu Ab.

Pia -

Waise hua kya tha tujhe kal raat ko???

Pata hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tujhe us halat me dekhkar...

Aur kaha chalegaye the Tum log Subah subah???

Arjun intervened And said - Offo Pia... Kitne sawal Puchogi Ab. Nandini ko saans to lene do.

Pia looked at Nandini who was all lost again.

Pia - Acha fine... Let's have breakfast... Maine Nandu ki Saari favourite dishes banayi hai.

Nandini - Di mera Mann nahi hai. Mai baad me khaloongi...

Saying this she was about to leave when Manik held her hand and stopped her.

Manik - Aise kaise Mann nahi hai??? Pia ne itne pyar se banaya hai to how can you say so...

Nandini - But Manik...

Manik blinked his eyes in assurance to her and said- Nandini... Chalo Kuch khalo... Waise mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai.

Nandini- Ok fine...

Pia - That's like a good girl...

Nandini - Pia Di bachcho ne khana khaliya???

Pia - Haan kha to liya...

Nandini - Waise Kaha hai dono?


Pia - Appa ke sath hai unke room me.

Nandini - Mai dekhkar aati hoon.

Pia - Theek hai tab tak mai table set karti hu...

Manik - Nandini mai bhi chalta hoon tumhare sath...

Saying this Manik and Nandini went to Vishnu's room.

The sight infront of them startled them.

The whole room was a mess.

Aarav-Khushi were running all over the room and Vishnu was running behind them to catch them.

Though they were playing but the condition of the room was such that there was a tsunami in the room some time back.

Nandini - Appa...

On hearing this, Vishnu looked at Nandini and Manik and smiled.

Vishnu - Arey Beta tum dono yahan ???

Nandini -Appa Pehle aap bataiye ye kya horaha tha yahan .

Nandini pointed towards the mess.

Vishnu stood beside Aarav and Khushi (in a straight line I.e., First Khushi,then Aarav and then Vishnu)

Vishnu - Kya horaha hai??? Kuch bhi to nahi... Hum to bas khel rahe the. Haina Bachcho???

Nandini - Khelrahe the??? Halat dekhi hai kamre ki.


Nandini looked at a vase which was broken into pieces now.

Aur ye vase... Ye kisne toda???

Nandini asked strictly...

Khushi pointed towards Aarav (who was towards her right).

Aarav pointed towards Vishnu (who was towards Aarav's right)

And then Vishnu pointed towards his right...

When Vishnu turned towards his right,there was no one and the kids giggled on Seeing this.

Nandini - Aap logo ko mazak soojh raha hai??? Itna mehnga vase Tod diya aur aaplog has rahe ho???

Appa aap bhi inke sath milgaye???

Vishnu - Nandu Beta baat to sun...

Nandini - Kya baat sunu mai. Bahut bigad gaye ho tum dono. Ye sab mere lad pyar ka natija hai. I should be more strict now. Warna tum dono sudhroge nahi...

Aarav-Khushi - But Mummaaa...

Nandini - What Mummaaa huh??? Koi aise karta hai kya???

Aarav-Khushi looked at Manik for help who was now shocked with Nandini's changed mode .

He didn't dare to speak as Nandini's strict mother mode was on.

Manik through his eyes asked them to say sorry to Nandini.

Aarav-Khushi held their ears and said- Sorry Mumma... We won't repeat it again. Sorry.

Nandini looked at their innocent faces and melted immediately.

Nandini extended her arms and Aarav-Khushi ran to her and hugged her immediately.

Aarav-Khushi - We Love you Mumma...

Nandini - I love you too Bachcho...

Manik winked to Aarav-Khushi and they winked him back with both their eyes( as they didn't know how to wink properly).

Vishnu patted Manik's back and whispered in his ears- Thanks Beta tumne bachaliya. Warna Nandini se daant khani padti mujhe...

Manik just smiled on this.

Nandini then broke the hug and said - Aarav-Khushi and Appa ye sab Jo mess create Kia hai usey aap teeno milke saaf karoge...

Vishnu said - Haan Haan hum karlenge saaf. Manik tum aur Nandini befikar hoke jao.

Manik - Let's go Nandini. Pia aur Arjun wait kar rahe honge breakfast table pe.

Nandini - Ok. Ek minute...

Appa apne breakfast karliya na...

Vishnu - Haan Beta Maine Bachcho ke sath hi karliya breakfast...

Nandini - Theek hai...

With this Manik and Nandini left the room.

As soon as they came out of the room, Nandini heard the sound of something falling down.

She immediately rushed inside and saw a flower pot which was now broken into pieces lying on the floor .

Manik too saw it and palmed his face with one hand...


Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.






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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Very cute..now what happened again 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
cute update

nandini ka new shade, strict mom...

loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
😆

arav n khushi 😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
it was awesome update...

and amazing...

and strict nandu ...
Waiting for next update eagerly...

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