THE STARS MAY BE FALLING. [Prologue Updated] | September 3

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THE STARS MAY BE FALLING.



"This entire planet is your home. Staying in one city your whole life would be like never leaving the bedroom..."



This story is not complete lovey dovey, infect this is more then romance. as you guys read my 1st FS "MY FIRST SHIVER" so here i am again with something adventures, romantic, drama.


as you all read the name of story above "THE STARS MAY BE FALLING"



[HOW IS BANNER?? I myself try to make this and come up with this, i don't know how is it]



The story of two person who is from two different places two different college meets on a adventures trip of HIMALAYAN.


"You don't meet people by accident. There's always A Reason. A Lesson or A Blessing."



Manik and nandini also come here for adventure trip leaving there boring and painful life for sometime.


"The story of two people who lives in different cities and don't know at all.
when they went on a trip unknown to each other that there stars are start falling for them and they are going to start a new life very soon.

on that trip them meet like strangers but when they return we can say "THEY ARE NO MORE STRANGERS"
They are other half of each other."


here they ignore, fight and at last fall in love with lots of ups down and most important when they goes back they goes with smiley faces and with lots of memories to cherish till they meet again. and that time for FOREVER. because that time there stars will already fall for them.



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This is a new concept story.
i hope you guys like, FEEDBACK IS MUCH NEEDED. so please give it.

Thank YOU
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😛PROLOGUE😛

I put my faith in your promise

That you'd be here soon

Don't doubt it darlin',

The stars may be fallin'

I'm still coming for youI can hear your whisper

Every doubt screams where are you

And every moment waiting makes the day

Harder to get trough

Don't give up darlin',

The stars may be fallin'

I'm still coming for you

Hold on

Hold just a little longer

Hold on

Hold just a little longer

Hold on

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"Are you sure about it?"

"I'm sure."

"Just Kiss me."

[COMPLETE DETAILS WILL COME IN CHAPTER]

After Complete Love making Manik and Nandini is sitting in front of fire in a single Sheet. Nandini's head is resting on manik's heart and she is caressing and doodling on manik hand. And manik is just looking her doll with pure love. Both are at peace.


Suddenly nandini ask when she notice something.

"What Happened here?"

"That was for talking back."

She moved her finger on next place

"Here"

"That was for not answering"

And she moved her finger on next mark but can't able to ask more.

"That was for disrespect."

She again moved on next mark and without looking in maniks eyes.

"I don't remember what that was for."

She looks another side and tears start coming from her eyes.


Manik know that she is hiding herself so that he can't see her tears but how can he let cry his doll for which she is not responsible.


He cups her face and makes her turn towards himself.

"Hey"


"It's OK. They don't hurt anymore."

Both are looking in each other eyes and they clearly see how much pain in their eyes. They are crying for each other's pain. Yes manik also crying but the difference is tears are not coming outside.


They again kissed for removing their pain and sleep takes over them there only.



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Thank You

FEEDBACK IS MOST WELCOME. i don't know how is it but need your eggs and tomatoes desperately. and DON'T FORGET TO CLICK ON LIKE BUTTON THAT IS MUCH NEEDED. it will take only 1 second.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting concept
loved the prologue
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very much eager to read further.. it s so intetresting😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You😃
will give update soon😊
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Originally posted by: rockstarlover

interesting concept
loved the prologue
cont soon

Thank You😃
I will update soon😊😊
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THANK YOU DEAR😃😃
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Originally posted by: DGalWdCrazyness

very much eager to read further.. it s so intetresting😊😊

Thank You
you will not disappoint😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually liking this concept ..
loved the prologue ..
I really wanna read it.

so eagerly waiting for updates.
Update soon.. 😆

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