MANAN FF : TWO BEAUTIES OF MY LIFE# CHAPTER13,14AND15UPDATED on 8 May! - Page 29

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

All was going to be as the " the best " but the heavens are still not with manan.

Lovely update Eku dear👏Loved the cabin, motherly scene that made maNIK realize his confession to be done.

Loved every thing going so well, with Bua not welcome with her tantrums of course.

But atching nandu with Kia, Manik took the scene as wrong and went away. Ran away instead. I wish he wud have stayed and wud have talked to nandu over Kia and...😳

Well fate has other paths to make us travel. Will wait for more dear. Luv ya❤️🤗

Thankk you bhabhi :))

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

Great update

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: KYYian

plz update

plz plz plz update

😭😭

I am so sorry dear for being late ... :(

Manik came inside Malhotra mansion. Fab4 were shocked to the core to see him in completely disheveled state. His suit jacket was hanging from his shoulder, shirt crumpled and face tear stained, and red swollen eyes.

They ran towards him. Cabir took him in hug.

Mukti : Manik what happened ?

Dhruv : Buddy talk to us, kya hua?

Aliya : Manik did Nandini do something ? Did she say no ? Manik don't worry we'll talk to her and convince her ok ? You stop crying.

All nodded in yes mean while Bua ji, Ram and Abhimanyu also came there.

Ram : oh my god, Manik what happened to you ?

Mukti : Uncle today Manik went to propose Nandini but now he came back in this condition.

Bua ji : I was telling you in the first place that marry my choice Veebha but no you wanted to marry some other stupid girl. Oh god what did that girl do to you Manik ?

Abhi : Mukti what's going on ?

Mukti : She is the same Nandini Abhi who is your PA. I swear Abhi I'm going to rip that girl's head for making my friend's condition like this.

Abhi : What Nandini ? Are you crazy ? Obviously she won't accept Manik or any other man Mukti

Cabir : Why ?

Abhi : Because she is not single she has a daughter

All : WHAT ?

Mukti : What the F*ck !

Aliya : such a Bi*ch she is, even after being engaged she kissed Manik. She had a daughter still she gave positive signals to Manik.

Abhi : Guys she is a single mother I don't know whether she is engaged or not.

Bua ji : Chi chi chi such a characterless woman. That means she was trying to stick that illegitimate child to us and give that child name of Malhotra 's

Cabir : guys we don't know the whole truth so stop making assumptions ok you guys have no right to question someone's character when don't know the whole truth.

Dhruv : You are right Cabir but whatever we can see is giving us this only conclusion.

Cabir : no it's not and tomorrow Navya is coming. That day I sent Navya Nandini's photos and she said she knows her and she wants to tell us something about her, till then let's first handle Manik.

They all made numb Manik stand and took him to his room. Cabir and Dhruv changed his clothes. Just then Ram entered the room.

Ram lovingly caressed Manik's hair : Manik I know there is something more that is bothering you son. Please tell your Dada what's the matter.

For the first time Manik moved his eyes and looked at Ram

Manik : I don't want to loose them dad. I don't want to loose both of them. They are love of my life. They are two beauties of my life.

Ram : Both ?

Manik : Kia is Nandini's daughter

It was like bomb on Fab4 and Ram

Dhruv : that means that day when Kia said her mother's name was Nandini she was talking about Nandini Murthy

Mukti : We are so dumb guys Kia always said she was Kiara Murthy

Manik : please leave me alone for some time.

Whole night nobody could sleep. Malhotra mansion was dead silent. Fab5 slept in Manik's room
Next Morning

As usual Kia came to Malhotra mansion. Janki Aunty's driver dropped her to mansion. +

Kia : Lam (ram) dadu, Manit,Cabu, Dlu, Muku, Alu

She was calling everyone like the way she always does but due to last night's drama nobody was awake except for Bua ji who came out like an angry bull when she heard Kia's voice.

Bua ji screamed : You little shit get out of this house

Kia was startled by her sudden attack.

Bua ji held her arm roughly : You little daughter of a bas***d, you and your mother want money right ?

She threw a bundle of notes towards Kia

Bua ji : take this money. I know such people who can stoop to any level for money and also train their children the same way. But we are high class people and you can never reach near our standards and if you and your mother play any stupid tricks i will throw you and your mother to jail.

Kia was crying badly she didn't know what was happening and for a 5 year child listening all these things was nothing but simply horrible.

Bua ji : tell your bi*ch mother never try to come near Manik and you never dare to come to this mansion.

Kia : Manit... Manit

Bua ji : Don't take name of my Manik from your dirty mouth. Go ask your mother what's the name of your father.

Kia was still standing there crying
Bua ji : You won't understand like this saying so Bua ji started dragging Kia and she threw her out of gates.
Kia's knee and elbow got badly hurt. She was wailing loudly. Some servants tried to help her but Bua ji threatened their jobs.

Kia didn't know way to her house. She kept crying and walking on the road. Suddenly she sat on the road near a temple.

An old lady who was friend of Janki Aunty luckily saw and recognized Kia and called her immediately.

Janki Aunty when saw Kia's state was horrified she picked her up and rushed to the Doctor.

On the other side Abhi was totally confused with the scenario and wanted to talk to Nandini clearly. He went to her desk where she was busy in her work.

Abhi : Nandini

Nandini : Yes Bhai

Abhi : Nandu what is going on between you and Manik Malhotra ?

Nandini : Bhai wo...

Before she could complete her sentence she received a call from Janki Aunty and next second her phone slipped from her hands due to shock.

Abhi got worried by seeing her sudden panicked form : Nandu what happened ?

Nandini could only whisper was "Kia" and next moment she ran out of the office to Hospital. She was running like maniac in hospital to search for her baby. She found Janki Aunty

Nandini : Jenny Ma what happened to Kia ?

Janki Aunty : I don't know Nandini. She went to Malhotra mansion in the morning and then my friend found her on the road.

Nandini gasped loudly and began crying. Just then doctor came out after checking Kia

Nandini : Doctor what happened to my daughter ? How's she ?

Doctor : Madam, are you her mother ?

Nandini nodded in yes

Doctor : How can you be so irresponsible towards your 5-6 years old daughter. She has gotten bruises which are deep which seem that they are formed due to sudden push by someone, and I'm say 'someone' and not by some vehicle because there are also finger marks on her arms. but more worrying thing is that she has gotten into some kind of shock. All these things clearly say Madam that your daughter has been in some way abused by someone.

Nandini felt like her body was falling numb.

Doctor : She is too young to face anything like that and such incidents many times leave scars on the mind of a person. Such situations might create fobias in person's mind in future which can ruin their life. Please try to get her out of the trauma.

Nandini fell on her knees crying loudly hugging Jenny Aunty. All this talk was also witnessed by Abhi who had worryingly followed Nandini. He was also in tears.

Nurse came and informed Nandini that Kia was awake and calling her Mumma.

Nandini dashed in the room and picked Kia in her arms and kissed her whole face. But Kia on the other side sat unresponsive.

Nandini : mera baccha ? What happened to you and who did this to you ?

Kia was sitting there unresponsive which made Nandini shiver with fear because never even had Kia ignored Nandini in her life.

Nandini : baby please talk to your Mumma

But Kia's next words froze Nandini at her place. The biggest fear of her life came in front of her when Kia expressionlessly asked her

Kia : Who iz (is) my fadel (father) Mumma ?

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I am so sorry for being late !
Just stuck with studies and all ... hope e you all will understand ..take care :)
Thank you for the support :)
If possible I will try to update I PLOMISH :P , or else I don't know when will I update ..I guess after exams .. I am really sorry for this irresponsible act but studies are much more important!

shocking and so sad update

that evil lady shldnt have treated kia so badly. that 5 year old lil girl wasnt at fault. how horrible lady!!!!

fab 5 except cabir is so impulsive.

emotional update

emotional manik super manik want both favourite beauties super and cabir and dhruv nice the stupid lady was so rude

Felt too bad for Kia's condition and Nandini who knows nothing as what happened to her Kia and who is after her turmoil.

read all parts in one go...
amazing...
beautifully written
loved it...
Thanks for the lovely writing ...n give full time to your studies
updates can wait...

First things first - give full time to your studies Eku, they are most important, okay. Updates can wait and so can we 😊