Manan TS: Dil hai Tumhara part 3 B

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Hey guys presenting new manan OS with a unique thought
I hope its good...




There is a huge party in the 5 star hotel. the hall is decorated beautifully with white and blue color combination. every one is congratulating them. she is dressed in a white color beautiful sleeveless sari. and he is dressed in black jeans white shirt and black court over it.. they are looking just perfect as usual..

Shaina: You both are just looking perfect together.




Congratulation for another successful film. You know guys jab mene SRK and KAJAOL ki jori dekhi the mujhe laga tha is se ache jori pher kabi nhn a sakti. But i was wrong. Agar pichli century ke best jodi kajol or SRK ki the to is century ke best jodi Manik or Nandini ki ha...


Manik: aww thanks Shaina you know kabhe kabhe muje lagta ha k fans ko hamari itni aadat na par jae k wo muje or Aliya ko real life men accept he na karen.

Nandini: you know shaina fans ne humen ek nam dia ha. Manan.

Shaina: yeah mene parha twitter pe.

Amit: you are right Shaina they are the best couple of this century.
Shaina: its all because of you Amit, you created this couple.

Amit: no no shaina not all. Actually its all about destiny, it was their destiny to work together.
Manik: no Amit today our jodi and flims are famous because of you.

Nandini: he is right.

Mahbeer: hey guys there is a request from Manan fans, they want a dance of Manan in the success party. I hope you are not going to disappoint them.

Amit: hey Mahbeer ask DJ to play tum he ho.

They both move towards the stage.

Bg song plays. They both dance together.

Shaina: amit ye real men couple hote to kitna acha hota na.

Amit: yeah but we cant ignore the fact that he loves Aliya.

Shaina: i dont think he loves her.

Amit: i can see in her eyes she loves him.

Shaina: if they really love each other then the question is why are they sacrificing their love?

As they end the dance everyone claps for them.

The party is over.
Nandini goes to her car.
Nandini: omg the tire!

Manik: what happened can i help you?

Nandini: no. I will manage.

Manik: so how are you going to manage?

Nandini: i will call my driver and will ask to him to bring another car for me.

Manik: what? Do you know the distance between your home and this hotel is of 2 hours. What will you do for next two hours?

Nandini: Manik I

Manik: just keep quite and sit in my car i will drop you.

She sits in the car. They both leave from there.

Shaina to herself: you both have to realise the feelings for each other that why i punctured the tire and cut the pipe of petrol in Manik's car.

After some distance of driving car stops.

Manik: what?

Nandini: what happened?

Manik: no petrol in the car.

Nandini: now?

Manik: lets go by walk.

Nandini: seriously?

Manik: you think i am joking?

Nandini: no but its raining.

Manik: so what? It will be a fun lets go.

They both are walking in the rain.

Manik: lets dance.

Nandini: now?

Manik: yes. He starts singing aj rapata jaen to. He also starts dancing. Nandini smiles while seeing him.

As he finishes the songs she starts singing.

Sanson ko sanson men. She holds his arm. He is looking hot his buttons are open. They both start dancing romanticaly. In that situation they dont know what they are doing they are lost in the romantic moment. He grabs her from her waist and starts kissing her neck and tries to kiss her.

She tries to go away but he grabs her arm and pins her to the wall. They both have a eyelock. Finally the both kiss eachother. They dont know how much time they were kissing untill the became breathless




To Be Continued
Edited by LoveyDoveyNeha - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
love it
continue soon
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awesome update
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Wow lovely dear...
Par yeh alia ka kya loocha hain...kya kar rahi hain yaha...jaldi hatao...and love the intense moment of MaNan. Cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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wow..
nice start...
Actually liked it.

waiting for complete part.
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Awesome update...
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Yaar continue soon,
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Amazing update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly 4 d nxt part...
Take care...
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Though not so many people are reading my Ss
Chaloo hum ye soch ke hi khush ho jate ha
At least forum wale OS to parhte ha... 😛


Part 2 A promise can change your whole life

Morning:
Nandini wakes up wearing only a white color shirt. she finds Manik sleeping beside her hugging her tightly. she smiles on the love of her life. without disturbing his sleep she releases her self from his clutches. Actually he is not sleeping he is just pretending.
She gives him a kiss on his forehead. she goes to the bathroom.
he wakes up.
Manik: what happened last night was not good. how can i do this?
how can i betray her. she trusts me.I promised Aliya that i will marry her how can i do this? i should talk to Nandini.
Nandini comes to out of the bathroom she goes downstairs where Manik was sitting on the sofa...




She goes to him and sits beside him.
Nandini: good morning.
Manik: good morning.
Nandini: last night was the best night of my life. i never thought our relation will come to this state. but i can not remember anything. why?
Manik: because you were a little bit drunk.
Nandini: shit how can I!
Manik: Nandini thats okay.
Nandini: no its not Manik. ( in a guilty voice )
Manik: Nandini nothing like that happened between us last night.
Nandini: what!!! but we were sleeping together in that state you were wearing only a pant and i was wearing only a shirt!!
Manik: we were just sleeping together..




Nandini: well its good nothing happened you dont know how much i was feeling guilty.
Manik: Nandini i cant take it anymore.
Nandini: what!
Manik: you know someone is in my life. you know i never break my promises you very well know i cant betray her.
Nandini: so you are going to leave me just because of a single promise!
Manik: Nandini please dont take it in that way. (pleasing look)
Nandini: so why you came so near?
Manik: we have not crossed our limit.
Nandini: and what happened last night? that kiss?
Manik: we also kiss each other in films remember?
Nandini: how can you compare that kiss with these kisses?


Manik: try to understand Nandini..
Manik: we kiss in films because its our passion, but that kiss was because we love each other.
Manik: Nandini i dont want to talk anymore.
Nandini: Manik please.
Manik: i am leaving for shoot.

On the sets:
Manik is in his vanity nandini comes there.
Nandini: i want to talk to you.
Manik: Nandini please this is a public area dont create a scene.
Nandini: you think i am creating a scene!
Manik: yes you are.. why dont you understand i can not betray her.
Nandini: what about me?
Manik: there is a better man in your destiny i am sure.
Nandini: but i love you.
Manik: i am leaving do what you want to do.

out side Malhotra mansion



its raining heavily. Nandini comes there. she grabs his arm.
Nandini: how dare you Manik? you cancelled the projects we were doing together.
its a big loss Manik.
Manik: yes i cancelled. i dont care about any loss.
Nandini: how can you do this?
Manik: its my life nandini.
Nandini; manik please marry me. ( while crying )
Manik: are you mad?
Nandini: yes i am mad in your love.
He holds nandini by shoulders. his grip is very tight.
Nandini: its paining manik.
Manik: listen to me nandini its the last time i am talking to you on this matter leave me alone just go, go away from my life understand.
he leaves her with a jerk.
Nandini: okay i will never come here. i am leaving understand.
but you will come to me. you have to come to me.


To Be Continued...


Hope its nice and don't be sad next wala is going to be hottt

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