ek haseena thi ( a dark love story)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Siddharth and dhruv were in their farm house and was talking about random things
As they were talking someone rings the bell **ting tong **
Dhruv went towards the door and opens it up bt their was no one

Sid: who was it
Dhruv: no one
Sid: that's y I was thinking who can be here as this place is far from any place people hardly come here
Dhruv : yeah lets bottomsup
Sid : sure

They started drinking bear one by one as they were drinkinh someone people came n points gun on them sid
pushes one of them bt that person points gun on his ace and on dhruvs head

Sid: who u r
Thise person : ur enemies just shut and take out ur all clothes
Sid: wat
One of them : u think u r best ha lets see take out ur all clothes
Sid : I am not
That person : if u don't than I m killing ur friend I m just counting till 3 1, 2
Sid: ok ok I m taking out my clothes
One by one he takes out his clothes and was standing in his inner wear
That person : who will take out this

Sid takes out his inner wear and was standinh naked their

One of them : dhruv takes this and tie his hands and legs
Dhruv : who r u y r u doing this to US
That person : till now I didn't do anything with u u want me to do same will u like manik if not than tie his hands and legs to different corners
Dhruv went towards sid n handcuffed him

One of the person :now hold his ... and squeezed it tightly
Dhruv started crying as he don't know wat was happening
Another peron tears of dhruv clothes

One of the person : squeezed it or I will kick in between ur legs
Dhruv squeezed maniks ... and Sid was in acute pain

Later thlose people tie handcuff dhruv like sid face to face and beaten them very badly and after beating them they left them tied up their

One of them : if u again try to do that u know wat we can do now

And they left them their naked tied up


Later manik and cabir , aliya came n saw them invery state
Manik : sid , dhruv whho did this to u both sid , dhruv
They were not able to say a word as they were badly beaten and manik n cabir uncuffed them first aid them and dressed them up

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shaan... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The situation's kind of scary if it were to really happen. But you'd probably need to write with more clarity, possibly change the font, group sentences properly etc. Would make it easier to understand. This is intriguing. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Author note : as getting fine response for the story I have decided to continue it bt as the scenes are bold I want u to tell me when to stop the story part1 already uploaded





PROLOGUE


This story is about a boy who falls in love with a girl to save her from bad place he decided to take him far away from them bt as one say bad things don't go far so same thing happens here too




Part 2

Manik was tensed as he can guess who did these thing to them he was tensed n was roaming here and their in tension , cabir come to him and told him he is thinking right those people are them only
And they both remember wat happen few years back

Few years back
Manik , siddharth , dhruv, cabir and aliya went to party club which was organized in goa where they got to much drunked that they were not in their senses , and they all slept their only , a girl takes manik with her and as manik was too much drunked he didn't not say anything an Wenger along with her

At morning when he wakes up he saw his all clothes were gone and he was tied up naked on bed and some girl was sitting on the bed
Manik : I think u r taking me wrong I m not that kind of guy u r assuming
That lady : I don't think so u look perfect , ur body , ur muscles everything is just perfect u should work for us we can make u rich
Manik : I don't wantbto be rich by doing dirty things did u got it so now just leave me and let me go
That lady: one who enters here never go back be it's women or men

That lady gently put her hand on his balls and was moves it slowly slowly
Manik : u sick women leave me just leave me

That lady : u call me sick ha u call me sick
She punched on his balls until he passes off

As he passes off that lady went outside and told her people he is not agreeing to work with them to which everyone told like others he will to do the work four men went inside the room and puts the bed upside down in such a way that his hands and feets should bare his body weight

Later manik opens his eyes bt he was in acute pain because of that , that lady again enters and ask him again and manik again told her the same and that lady attach some kind of shock device on his balls and told manik u have 24 hrs to think to rethink about ur decision and told him that he cannot do anything so jjust hpjoin them as after half half an hr he will get painful current automatically through this device which will help him to take decision quickly and she left

After half an hr
Manik r got the current and he was in very bad situation , some other girl saw him crawls towards him and saw automatic current machine n she somehow diffuse it
That girl: u cannot do anything these peolle r very bad they bring those people here who they think r fit for this place spiffy they agreed to work than it's fine and if not they die painful death
Manik : I don't need ur suggestion I m not going to do anything dirty
Thatvgirl : believe me just say yes to them and I will help u to get out of thisnplace
Manik: y u don't tell police about this
That girl: we cannot as before police can come here they make us dissapear as we never exist
Mankk : ok thanks for ur help ur name
That girl : nandini
Manik : nandini

Later manik agrees to that lady and that lady leaves him and told him his work

Like this days gose on and on and nandini some how contacts manik friends and they got to know about him next day nandini told him the route from where he can go to which he said thanks for helping
Manik: y don't u come with me we will go far from here that they can never btrack us down
Nandini: I can't as now I m one of their zee members that's I can't as if I they will search for me like maniacs
Manik: I dont care about it as i know u r not wrong person like them give her a chance and left these all behind and run away with him
And they both went from their
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I dont what to say. This would be damn scary if it really had to happen. But it's kind of funny how these people try to destroy the one thing that can actually do the real work for them 😆
Love how the story is going. But it's pretty hard to understand at certain places.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey just read the story.. N this looks really intersting but scary at the same time.. Imagine this actually happening to u
Really liking the concept
But at some places.. I kind of loose the flow I mean I can't understand what u r trying to say.. Plz be a little more elaborate..
Hope u don't take it in the wrong way.. But it's just that I really wanna enjoy the story so gave a suggestion

Thank u for sharing the story
Will be waiting for the update

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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N yes special thank u to Archana Vinod for recommending this story
:)

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