MaNan SS - LET'S MAKE A NIGHT TO REMEMBER - PART 6, PG 26 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sunnymunny

You going a great job
Keep it up. And if possible do make this story an ff as you are really good at writing ...will enjoy reading this new concept
Thanks
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Thank you so much sunny :) Is that your name by any chance?

I'm trying my best to make this story richer and more detailed. Hope it is good enough to tease your senses 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod



Hmm. Good guess! Let's see how close you are in the upcoming parts😛

The one thing I like about Manik here is exactly that. He wasn't quite the monster she saw at night.😆Well, that's good isn't it? Most of the time it doesn't settle down that fast, especially when it involves intimacy issues.

Thank you so much for your words of support dear :) Do continue to follow this story and put in your thoughts too :)



Yeah definately I wanna read more.
And yeah u r absolutely right intimacy issues are realy sensitive between a couple. No one can tell better than me bcz after all I'm married. 😉 😆
And yeah I loved Manik character at one side he is so impulsive and realy like monster and in morning how he handled her that was realy surprising and this soft side of him made his character more strong and charming.
So give us next part soon.
I will wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq



Yeah definately I wanna read more.
And yeah u r absolutely right intimacy issues are realy sensitive between a couple. No one can tell better than me bcz after all I'm married. 😉 😆
And yeah I loved Manik character at one side he is so impulsive and realy like monster and in morning how he handled her that was realy surprising and this soft side of him made his character more strong and charming.
So give us next part soon.
I will wait.


Aha! You're married! So that makes it easier to understand 😉😆

I'll be back soonish. Doesn't matter if the votes, views and comments run low. What matters is that there should be a few good readers like you and all of you out here. 😛 Someone who participates in the story and of course enjoys it. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod



Thank you so much sunny :) Is that your name by any chance?

I'm trying my best to make this story richer and more detailed. Hope it is good enough to tease your senses😃



No.. .imy name is Gursheen
And about the story it's a totally different idea rather then all that cushy mushy stuff
Yes definitely wanna read More of it
Update Soonish
Edited by sunnymunny - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod


Thank you thank you thank you so much my love. ❤️ That is really sweet of you :) I could sort of see you too, applauding ;)

I'll be resuming the other story as soon as I'm done with this one. 😉 So tell me. What do you think is happening in the other one? Who could be stalking Nandini? Madhyam? Some pervert? A serial killer? Manik himself? Or is it something paranormal? Let me know your thoughts on what lies ahead. 😛


You know what... Genuinely speaking... Then I don't wanna think. I don't wish to get my hopes high on who could the stalker possibly be because if my guess comes out to be true...if that matches with your imagination, then it seems too predictable and not getting it right is like a disappointment. So, either ways, I don't find it beneficial to think of the possibilities!

So sincerely, I will wait until you continue the other story and enjoy the surprises or bombs, may I say, that you will upload on us.

All the best to you. Keep writing such amazing pieces!!
God bless you!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jus nw finished readin d whole SS! I jus luvd it!! 👏👏 Though d whole SS ryt frm d start was kinda dark & depressin, it was full of emotions. I cud literally feel d scene playin in frnt of my eyes & i cudnt stop cryin @ parts.. ❤️
Felt so bad fr nandini.. esp on her bday wen Manik said all tos cruel things2 her & she cudnt evn retaliate & jus kept quiet..😭😭
Bt yes.. Manik has a point too. Esp wen he feels guilty, I cudnt stop pitying our cute monster.😭But Seriously Monstu.. U shud control ur gussa! 😛😛
& jus LUVDDD d part in d end wen she gets uncomfy tinkin hez tryin2 to. . . but he instead makes her feel relaxed by wrappin her gently in his arms.. twas an AWWW moment fr me..

I hav no idea y Nandini feels awkward wen its HER MANIK who cums close2 her. No matr hw much I tink abt it, i jus cant get it. (Yes m 18+ but I knw nutn abt stuff lyk dis 🤔 ) Bt woteva reason it is, i hope she can get outta it & b able2 give him his happiness 😳😳😉
( d nly thing dat i felt awkward abt, was Nyonika! haha!😆😆 I jus cudnt accept her as a +ve char no matr wot.. it feels so weird to accept it😆😆 )

& abt U.. Absolutely amazin wrk!!! Keep writin!! Awsm 👏👏
Cant wait 4 d next update!! PLEASEEE update soon dear.. 🤗
I wish I can jus get in2 ur head & get2 read d next update.. hahaaa! 😆😆
I jus cant wait 2 c how Manik wud deal wid dis & wot he has planned4 his soulmate's bday! I know he'd surely cum up wid sm vry cute surprises. Cant w8 to read Manan moments..🥳

& one more req.. I know dis s jus an SS & shud end soon, bt stl if U can, then pleaseee try & continue it fr as long as U can. Im not ready2 let go off it dis soon.. Pleaseee! My humble req 😃
Edited by RebeccaSweety - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
You are too awesome girl. I loved the story so far!
Continue soon :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RebeccaSweety

Jus nw finished readin d whole SS! I jus luvd it!! 👏👏 Though d whole SS ryt frm d start was kinda dark & depressin, it was full of emotions. I cud literally feel d scene playin in frnt of my eyes & i cudnt stop cryin @ parts.. ❤️
Felt so bad fr nandini.. esp on her bday wen Manik said all tos cruel things2 her & she cudnt evn retaliate & jus kept quiet..😭😭
Bt yes.. Manik has a point too. Esp wen he feels guilty, I cudnt stop pitying our cute monster.😭But Seriously Monstu.. U shud control ur gussa! 😛😛
& jus LUVDDD d part in d end wen she gets uncomfy tinkin hez tryin2 to. . . but he instead makes her feel relaxed by wrappin her gently in his arms.. twas an AWWW moment fr me..

I hav no idea y Nandini feels awkward wen its HER MANIK who cums close2 her. No matr hw much I tink abt it, i jus cant get it. (Yes m 18+ but I knw nutn abt stuff lyk dis 🤔 ) Bt woteva reason it is, i hope she can get outta it & b able2 give him his happiness 😳😳😉
( d nly thing dat i felt awkward abt, was Nyonika! haha!😆😆 I jus cudnt accept her as a +ve char no matr wot.. it feels so weird to accept it😆😆 )

& abt U.. Absolutely amazin wrk!!! Keep writin!! Awsm 👏👏
Cant wait 4 d next update!! PLEASEEE update soon dear.. 🤗
I wish I can jus get in2 ur head & get2 read d next update.. hahaaa! 😆😆
I jus cant wait 2 c how Manik wud deal wid dis & wot he has planned4 his soulmate's bday! I know he'd surely cum up wid sm vry cute surprises. Cant w8 to read Manan moments..🥳

& one more req.. I know dis s jus an SS & shud end soon, bt stl if U can, then pleaseee try & continue it fr as long as U can. Im not ready2 let go off it dis soon.. Pleaseee! My humble req 😃



Oh wow! Now your comment was an absolute feast to my eyes. Thank you so much Rebecca ❤️ Thank you so much for the kind words and support. Love you.
I'm so happy that you have liked this story and were able to connect with it.

In the upcoming chapters, we're going to see what's bugging our dear Nandini. :)

And Nyonika was weird to start with. 😆 To be frank, it was a bit hard for me to digest her character in the show. I mean... how can any mom be like this? Do such mothers really exist? I know that there are moms who neglect their children for the sake of business, job, whatever. But that was pretty confusing. I guess she just got weirder in this story 😆

I'm working on the next part now. Honestly, if you try to breach into my skull and extract the next part, you'd probably get lost in a fog. Because that's my present state now. Confused and weary. 😆

By the way, what kind of surprises do you think he has in store for her? 😉


Edited by Archana_Vinod - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

You are too awesome girl. I loved the story so far!

Continue soon :D


Thank you so much dear ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is another beautiful story by you 😊
Concept is quite unique and sounds too realistic..

It seemed to be a bit depressing kind of story in the start, but the last part you wrote..that was out of the box, i really didnt expect Manik to make the first move in solving their issue. This is was seriously something different and it brought a smile on my face... 😊
MaNan here are quite adorable and I am really looking forward to the upcoming chapters..

Do continue soon with this amazing piece of creativity 😉 😊

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