MaNan SS - It's all started at Bus Up Part D on pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
bahot sara ghussa hu main tum pe

u make us wait for sooo long

😭

😭

ok chalo finally u updated

loved it

totally cute update

nandinis cuteness was the highlight of the update

sooo cutiepie she is!!!!!1 and so mature too

manik jst ag ka bulbula Vs sweet cute cool calm mature nandini...what a pair..lovely

cabir hahahaaha he was jst lattoo on nanvya..d way he was describing navya 😆

nandini in maniks lap part was awesome..how cute talk they had without taking care of getting up from the lap..😊😊😊

chainsmoker..thats my favorite song too..

loveliest update

i wont say update soon..tum update karti nahi ho..may be u r busy in ur personal life..its ok..

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Read your stories for first time...nut amazing loved it
Loll cabir and manik fight wow
Scary aliya
Cutie nandu...
Can't wait for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33


BAnner by me.
Like it or not ??

PART D

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The cute eye lock between Manik and Nandani got break because of shrill ringtone of Manik phone.

Manik and Nandani both came out of trance and start looking here and there.

When Nandani shuffle that's when Manik realize that Nandani is actually in his lap while he was holding her waist and Nandani hand is clutching his blazer in her tiny cute hands ... WTH Manik ,from when did you start finding girl hands cute??You are seriously losing it.

"Are you going to spend all ride back to Mangalore in my lap? "Manik speak in sarcastic voice to Nandani making her to blush furiously as she get up hurriedly from his lap muttering a quick apology and seating on her seat.

"Mannerless girl" Manik bit out.

In return Nandani glare at him," Monster"

And that's how the sweet moment between our MaNan ends.

After Sometime

"Aiyappa where did di put a water bottle" Nandani pout and search for the water bottle in her Di handbag.

"I think Di put it in Duffle Bag" Nandani speak thoughtfully after 5 minute of hard thinking.

"But Duffle Bag is..."Nandani look above her to find the duffle bag kept in luggage carrier.

"Haww" Nandani mouth got wide open seeing duffle bag position.

"Di have to put it up there" Nandani groan loudly as she glare at sleeping Navya

.

"Now what are you waiting for. Just get up and take the bottle from bag. Simple as that" Nandani mumble slowly as she starts to get up from her seat but she takes her seat suddenly.

"But what if I get up and driver thought that it will be wonderful to apply the break at same time and I again fall in that ma.. I mean monster lap" Nandani mumble thoughtfully but suddenly the thought of falling in Manik lap bring a blush on her face and she bit her lip to stop a smile coming on her face.

Manik gaze at Nandani from the corner of his eyes to find her looking above her and blushing furiously while biting her lip.

Manik lips lift up in smile seeing Nandani blushing and speaking to herself. She is soo cute that he wants to gobble her up.

"What? Have you lost it Manik" Manik speak to himself as he again turn toward window and start looking out blocking Nandani out of his mind.

Nandani look around thoughtfully. She want to have a water but what to do ?

She looks at Manik side to find him scowling outside the window.

"MOnster" Nandani speak as she look around again to find the boy who was with Mukti before.

"Now what to do .Should I ask his help but what if he is like that monster. Oh common I think there is only one piece like monster in this world. After making Monster Aiyappa also thought that what a rare piece I have made" Nandani giggle to herself ,but alas she know that in future that rare piece will be the reason for her smile ,her giggle, her reason to live, her life.

After weighting pro and cons of asking for help from Cabir Nandani finally give in and turn towards Cabir direction.

Manik notice as Nandani turns in his direction.Hm "so she is again going to start her cute antics. Let wait what she has to say this time. "Manik thought as he wait for Nandani to speak.

"Excuse me" Nandani speak

Manik give himself a victory grin and turn his head in Nandani direction to find her looking at seat in front him.

"What the h.." Manik mutter under his breathe.

Cabir was busy in his lalaland of Navya and him when suddenly Manik come like some B grade movie villain and try to separate him with Navya and Cabir was just going to give Manik a piece of his mind when a girl voice break his dream.

Cabir in frustration turn to yell at whoever disturb him but stop suddenly before some colorful words flow out his mouth.

Of course how can he yell at his to be Sali sahiba (Sister in Law) (; Right.

"Yes What can I do for you" Cabir ask in polite voice making Manik shock at Cabir politeness and Nandani grin as she make a right decision in asking Cabir help.

"Wo can you help me. Actually Na I want to drink water but Di put it in duffle bag which is placed there" Nandani speak in one breathe and point to duffle bag which is kept in luggage carrier in end.

"So can you take bottle from the bag .Please" Nandani said cutely while pouting in end.

Cabir smile to himself as he got the awesome chance to impress Navya sister.

"Yup Sure why Not? I will be glad to help you. "Cabir give a cheeky smile as he stand up Making Manik frown.

"Can't she ask me for help? I was sitting just beside her and she also know my name but Nahi she have to ask Cabir" Manik frown to himself.

Cabir was going to take a water bottle when just like Nandani predict Drive apply a sudden break and BAM

Cabir fall into Manik lap while in instinct Cabir clutch Manik blazer while Manik hand go around Cabir waist While Nandani eyes got wide open in shock seeing the duo.

Suddenly Cabir Evil mind start working and he gave an evil smile in his mind..

"Oh oh Manik I know you are desperate but com on this is bus" Cabir said to Manik while blushing in the end making Manik jaw dropped to the floor.literally.

"Are you out of your fricking mind Cabir" Manik asked in a shock voice as he try to remove Cabir hand from collar.

"Why Manik am I bothering you" Cabir whispered in Manik ear.

While on other hand Nandani was shocked to the core.

"Just Shut up Cabir." Manik glare at Cabir.

"Oh you are not going to shush me like you did with some Cutey before." Cabir wink at Manik while on the other hand Manik curse his luck as Cabir overhear everything.

"What happen Manik cat got your tongue" Cabir said.

"Yes Cabir you are right. You open my eyes. I didn't swing in that way but I can't disappoint my friend like that. So just for you I try to like you in that way" Manik speak up as he winds his arm around Cabir waist making Cabir shock.

Ok what the hell happen? What Manik is saying? That's not the part of plan.

"Hey devi Mayya ! Just because you are gay you can't force someone to like you. Chiii" Navya loud voice make Cabir scared out of shit while Manik give an evil grin to Cabir.

Cabir struggle to get up from Manik lap but Manik hold Cabir tightly.

"It's Ok Cabir you don't have to be ashamed. Don't listen to other I will try to like you" Manik said lovingly to Cabir.

"Manik leave me the hell alone" Cabir hissed to Manik as he tried to get up from Manik Lap.

"Next time remember this moment before playing with fire" Manik said to Cabir.

"Guys if you both are done then Cabir getup from Manik" Alia said in a bore tone making Manik remove his grip from Cabir waist and Cabir stand up hurriedly looking here and there.

"You guys are too much. No more drama from now" Alia said in a warning tone to Cabir and Manik and then turning in Navya and Nandani direction as they both look too shocked to the core said, "They are just kidding and Cabir is not gay"

Navya take a sigh of relief, while Nandani cutely ask," What is Gay DI?"

Making all four of them speechless. No one said anything as they all look at each other.

Finally Nandani said to Cabir" you didn't give me a water bottle. I'm thirsty"

"OH yes" Cabir said as he took water bottle out from duffle bag giving it to Nandani ,and avoiding eye contact with Navya.


"Thank you" Nandani replied sweetly as she takes her seat and Alia also go back to her seat and Cabir also take his seat but not before giving a glare to Manik while in return earning a wink from Manik.

After such a handful event Navya again go back to her sleep while Nandani start listening music.

She see a tweet where Zayn new song is out making her grin wider. It's no secret that Nandani Murthy first and last crush till now is one and only Zayn. She wants to share the new song of Zayn with someone to boost her crush, her Zayn amazing voice. Whenever there is new song by Zayn she makes sure someone listen to it with her while she praise Zayn after song is over.

But today no one is there to share the song as Navya is sleeping and she don't know anyone in the bus.

She looks around sadly but her eyes catch Monster Manik who is bobbing his head up and down on some song beat.

"Pshh Monster Manik" Nandani called Manik while poking his arm.

Manik looked at Nandani direction to find her grinning at him which actually scared him because come on we are talking about Nandani here and that too she grinning at Manik.

"What?" Manik asked her as he unplugs his headphone.

"Want to listen a song with me" Nandani asked cutely as she gives one earpiece to Manik.

Getting over his initial shock as Nandani seems to give Manik occasionally he take an ear phone from her and put it on her right ear.

The beat of I don't wanna live forever start playing as Zayn voice take over.

Been sitting eyes wide open behind these four walls, hoping you'd call
It's just a cruel existence like there's no point hoping at all

Manik look at Nandani to find her trying to lip singing the lyric with a wide smile.

Baby, baby, I feel crazy
Up all night, all night and every day
Give me something, oh, but you say nothing
What is happening to me?

Manik fell his heart accelerates as the song proceed. She is making him crazy.

I don't wanna live forever, 'cause I know I'll be living in vain
And I don't wanna fit wherever
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home

Manik run a hand through his hair as he looks at Nandani face. She is soo cute and innocent.

I'm sitting eyes wide open and I got one thing stuck in my mind
Wondering if I dodged a bullet or just lost the love of my life

Baby, baby, I feel crazy
Up all night, all night and every day
I gave you something, but you gave me nothing
What is happening to me?

The way she asks what is Gay. She is soo adorable and the ways she makes a conductor agree for them. So pure at heart.

I don't wanna live forever, 'cause I know I'll be living in vain
And I don't wanna fit (fit, babe) wherever (wherever)
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home

I've been looking sad in all the nicest places
Baby, baby, I feel crazy
I see you around in all these empty faces
Up all night, all night and every day
I've been looking sad in all the nicest places
Give me something, oh, but you say nothing
Now I'm in a cab, I tell 'em where your place is
What is happening to me?

Her laugh when she got the ice-cream from him and then she cried because he throws the ice-cream in USE ME (Dustbin (;). HE will never make her cry again.

I don't wanna live forever, 'cause I know I'll be living in vain
And I don't wanna fit wherever
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home

She fit perfectly in his arm. The feeling of her lips on his finger and the way she clutch his blazer. Her innocent smile, her calling him Monster. Such a cutey she is. And he just want to call her name until she come back to him. OK What the eff did he said.

I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
Until you come back home

As the song finish Manik remove the ear phone from his ear and gave it back to Nandani.

"Isn't Zayn is awesome. HE got such an amazing voice. I just love him" Nandani said with a grin as she goes in wonderland of Zayn.

While a sudden green monster wake up in Manik.

"Oh please Taylor is better. She got such an amazing talent of singing and writing" Manik said back as he praises Taylor.

"You are right she is amazing and I love her song. And so I love Zayn song" Nandani said with a bright smile making Manik more shocked then she has make him before.

I mean this girl surprised him. He thought she will start arguing about who is better and here she just got agree with him but also making sure that Zayn is also great. Just WOW.

"So you love Zayn Song." Manik ask her.

"Yes I just love his song" Nandani said with a wide smile.

"Do you have boyfriend?" Manik asked her suddenly making her shock.

Are you out of your mind Manik? You just ask her if she have boyfriend or not. Awesome.

"Umm No I never had boyfriend. You know I never find a guy like Zayn so I can make him my boyfriend. My boyfriend should have an amazing talent to write song and have a beautiful voice to sing it to me like Zayn and he also have to be good looking just like my Zayn and he also have to respect girl like Zayn and..." Nandani start blabbering while Manik heart start doing salsa because let say the truth that whatever Nandani want in her boyfriend Not forget like Zayn is all Manik got.

Which make him happy but he don't know the reason why?


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OK I dont know what did i write in this update (;
sorry if you find it crazy...
In love with Zayn...As you can see after reading the update...
So sorry for late update ..
Tell me did you like the banner or not??.I draw it .I know I'm bad at drawing but it came out somewhat good.
Thanks for all the comments and likes.😊
love you cupcakes😛😊😊

Peace Out
Ana😊



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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
The cover is awesome...really really good..👏👏👏

frst of all u r sooo late..too much wait karwaya for the update 😡

but its ok..

bang on update..full of cuteness, hilarious, masti and end of the update was too good

so when nandini said, excuse me..manik thought she is speaking to him..hahah poor guy got jealous

then manbir encounter was awesome..hilarious

nandini cant be more cute yaar..she dont know what is gay? 😆

but she is damn mature... d way she didnt argue abt zyan and taylor..really made me think..why we compare between two things or person or artists..really that was highlight of the update..hats off to u for showing nandini as cute and mature girl..

and uff her love for zyan...😆 boyfrnd ki har quality zyan jaisi honi chahiye...singer like zyan, handsome like zyan, good nature like zyan...

manik baba ke mann me laddoo foot rahe the when she said she didnt have boyfrnd ever..

lovely and amazing update

i was really rofl when cabir landed up on maniks lap and jsu imagine nandini ka face..omg 😆😆😆

and the way cabir said cutey...wooowww...

too good update

now plz update temptation...plz plz plz
Edited by KYYian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Omg manik and cabir haha rofl... Lived it..cute nandu... Amazing the qualities fit manik perfectly... Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Ohhh wow.
that was so long update.
I totally enjoyed it yr.

that was so fun...

manik n cabir oh god.
kitna ladte h ye dono.
hehehe.
ullui...


bossy alya I like her.
sweet..


Nandu n manik.
as usual best.
muahh.
Beautiful scenes.

waiting for next update eagerly

Thanks for it.

keep smiling.


glad that you like the update😊
next part is up
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: KYYian

bahot sara ghussa hu main tum pe

u make us wait for sooo long

😭

😭

ok chalo finally u updated

loved it

totally cute update

nandinis cuteness was the highlight of the update

sooo cutiepie she is!!!!!1 and so mature too

manik jst ag ka bulbula Vs sweet cute cool calm mature nandini...what a pair..lovely

cabir hahahaaha he was jst lattoo on nanvya..d way he was describing navya 😆

nandini in maniks lap part was awesome..how cute talk they had without taking care of getting up from the lap..😊😊😊

chainsmoker..thats my favorite song too..

loveliest update

i wont say update soon..tum update karti nahi ho..may be u r busy in ur personal life..its ok..


happy that you like the part c..
yup nandani cuteness ki shop hai😉
happy that you love the update and give such a long comment😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
this is cute
nandini is baby
her complaining with ayiappa haye

n that break thing
bs yahi toh chahiye tha

plss update soon

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