PAINFUL LOVE - Manan ff (CHP 3PG-6 )9/7/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Loved it man. It was just amazing.
Why manik is behaving
That way very excited to knowp
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
i already a big fan of this story in wattpad...
loved the all parts...
its a very painful n unique love story...
tysm fr the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.. well written. Loved this story at wattpad. Thanks for pm.
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part : 2

In whole a big party is going on dancer r dancing as today there is mehandi and sangeet function of one of the richest business tycoon Mr. Kapoor's daugher

Everyone looks at the stair as navya and mukti coming taking nandini downstairs . She is Looking like fairy comes on earth wearing blue lehanga with light make up n light weight accessories but looking so pretty n the glow of love n happiness making her more beautiful and attractive .





Nandini's Outfit

She reaches downstair n her mother Mrs. Priya Kapoor hugged her


Sakshi's Tanwar as Priya Kapoor

"Haye.. my baby is looking so beautiful.. "she said pecking her forehead

"Thank u.. mom.."nandini said smilingly n than Priya make her settle down

Than navya mukti start dancing with some more girls n nandini is smilingly looking toward and some girls are applying mahendi on her hand but she is lost in her own lala.. world

"Manik.. missing u.. pta nhi kaise rituals hai.. tum mehandi mein nhi aa skte.. mans r not allowd and ladhka ladhki shaddhi ke 2 din phle dekhte nhi"she thinking all this in her mind as she very desperate to meet him

Than only 3 lady in Saree arrived at party by putting veil they r looking very odd

Than 3 of them goes in center n remove their veil n it's revealed that they r not lady they r mans

"Manik.. tere pyaar ke chkr mein humhai kya kya bana padhega.. "cabir said making irritated faces

"Abe.. kha ja rhai.. hai.. tu.."cabir said holding manik from behind as he going toward nandini

"Cabir jiske liye aya uske pas ja rhau... "he said pushing him away n putting veil start going toward nandini

"Yeh pka apni shaddhi tudwa kr rhaiga aaj.."cabir thinks in his mind

"Aur issko dekho.. humsha apne crust ko dekhta rhaita but never dare to confess... "cabir said seeing the third lady i mean man in lady get up he is abhi n he loves mukti secretly than cabir goes to him

"Alia.. tum bhut late ho i m angry wid u.. "nandini said her cousin cum best friend Alia arrived late in party

"Sorry.. na.. nandu dekh kl mein pure din tere sth hi rahungi.."she said n take nandini for a hug n than nandini eyes fall on lady who is manik

She looked at him confusingly and on the other hand manik smiles

Manik sit beside nandini n hold her hand everybody is busy in dancing she immidaitly comes to know that in lady get up is only her manik

"Manik.. tum yha kr rhai ho.. plz.. jao yha se. "She said in low voice to him but he nodded n holding her hand sees her mehandi n she blushes

Priya about to ask about the lady setting beside nandini suddenly nandini stand up n says "mom aap bhi dance karona apki beti ki shaddhi hai.."

"Oh.. my bacha.. i will do na if u also come.."she said n take nandini for dance

nandini n her mom start dancing n manik is looking at her only n nandini is also dancing looking toward him

But suddenly she stop dancing n looked toward her hand n her face expression got changed

"Mom.. it's burning.. "she start crying loudy holding her hand n song got stopped all look toward her

Her mom about to say something by touching her face but than all got shocked seeing manik in lady costume

"Shona.. wht happened? "Manik asked cubbing her face n she is just constantly crying n all were very tense

"Manik.. it's burning.. my hands "she said b/w her crys n manik immidaitly holds her

"Somebody bring water.. "manik shout n tear also felt from her eyes after seeing his love crying in pain

"Manik.. plz tumhai bhi pain hoga.."she stopped manik as he removing her mehandi from his hand but he ingorned her n removing her mehandi n than somebody brings water n he dipped her hand in cold water n than she feel relax lit bit

Than after that he make nandini sit n all guest leaves from there except nandini's close friends n relatives

Now manik is putting ointment on her hand with blewing air n Priya is setting beside nandini by putting hand on her shoulder

"Mom i want take some rest "nandini said when manik get up after Appling ointment on her hand

"Aunty mein le jata.. hn.. "manik said n Priya nodded than he take nandini to her room

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Nandini is setting on bed silently than he give her water

"Shona.. "manik called her putting hand on her face

"Manik.. kl humrhi shaddhi hai n today meri mehandi bhi spoil ho gye.. "she said n again tear felt from her eyes

"Again tear shona u know when u crys mujhe kitna dard hota hai.. "manik said wiping her tear n nandini didn't say anything n manik looks at her worriedly

"Are.. mujhe toh lga yha khubh gane bhajh rhai honge.. itni shanti kyo hai yha "Mr. Ram kapoor Nandini's father said entering in house when priya n alia mukti n navya cabir n Abhi setting in whole with worried expression


RAM KAPOOR AS NANDINI'S DAD

"Are.. kya hua sb thik hai.. na aur nandini kha hai.."Ram asked from Priya n she tell everything

Ram immidaitly rans toward her room

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Manik out her head from his lap on pillow after picking her forhead as she slept

As soon as he open the door see Ram infront of him with having tear in his eyes as he can't see her daughter in pain

"Uncle relax.. she is f9 she is sleeping now.."he said assuring him that she is f9

Next day they got married n promised eachother to never leave eachother hand in situation

Manik's mom dad leaves in abroad as they having their business there but manik's having his own business in India becoz of work they left as soon as after marriage

Manik take nandini in room holding in his arm when they reached manik's house after marriage

They spend their first night manik promised her that he will make love with her after marriage only . Manik today also asked if she want they will not do but today nandini didn't stopped him n manik claim her

Next day

"Manik.. i m so happy we got married "nandini said when they were setting at dinning table n having breakfast

"I love.. u.."manik said holding her hand & than peck her knuckle n nandini blush n manik start coming toward her lips

Than only they listen their friend cabir voice from the door n nandini moves away

"Are manik nandini ab toh sudhr jao ab tumhri shaddhi ho gye hai.. ab tum yeh sb room mein bhi krne ka time hota hoga.."cabir said n all laughed n nandini's face becomes red like tomato

"Cabir just shut up mein apni wife ke sth jo bhi karu.. tu kyo bich mein aa rhai hai.."manik said angrily

"Cabir jane de na kyo tang kr rha hai bichari nandini ka face dekh kitna tamatar ki taraha red ho gya.. hai.."mukti said n looks toward nandini

"Guyz.. tum sab betho mein tumhre breakfast lekr ati hn.."nandini by saying this left from there

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After they all do breakfast together n than they all left

"Manik.. no office today "nandini said when manik has to go urgently to office to attend imp. meeting

"Shona... dekhna in 2 hour i will be back don't be sad haan.."manik said cubbing her face

"Okay.. ab jldi jao jldi jldi vapis ao.."she said n manik pecking her forehead after giving side hug he left

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Manik comes after 2 hour at home n see nandini is setting in whole reading magazine

"Miss u alot shona.."manik said encircling his hand around her neck n peck her temple n she smiles

"Miss.. like hell that's good na mein bhi todhe dino work with u.. tb toh humhe ek pal ke liye bhi ek dushre dur nhi rehna padhega"nandini said n manik leaving sit beside her

"U rest mein achi coffee bna kr lekr ati.. hn.."she by saying this left from there

She came after making coffee n give him but next she get biggest shock

"Itni gandi coffee kisne bane ke liye bola tha.."manik shout in anger throwing coffee infront of her

She shivered becoz of his anger as for the first he shout on her like this

"Ma..nik.. wht happened.. "she asked putting hand on his shoulder

"Don't touch me jakr ek achi si coffee bna kr lekr ao.."manik again shout with force jerking her hand

Nandini wents in kitchen in a shock "wht happened him suddenly he never shout on me.. voh unnecessary toh voh kisi pr bhi shout nhi krta.."

"Nandini.. coffee.."manik shout loudly from outside

Nandini made coffee but she is hell shocked becoz of manik this kind of behavior

She give coffee to him n stand beside her about to say something but before her manik shout "wait.. nandini u just clean it now... "manik stopped the servant from cleaning the floor n asked nandini to clean the floor

"Manik.. "nandini called him in disbelieve

"I said clean it now.."manik again shout n her eyes become teary n she bend on knees n start picking up the broken pieces of cup n servant also leaves from there n tear felt from her eyes

"Shona.. wht r u doing.. get up.. "suddenly manik said n nandini get again shocked n remove her tear

"Ramu kaka.. "manik shout for servant n make nandini get up

"Shona.. why u r cleaing the floor kisi servant ko bola leti.. "he said making her sit on couch

Nandini is hell shocked sudden again n again change in his behaviour

"Shona.. baby.. kya hua.. why r u so sad.."manik asked cubbing her face n she immidaitly hug him from his stomach

"Shona.. say something kya hua.."manik asked caressing her hair

So.. here is next part.. confusion confusion n this confusion is going to clear at the end of the story with lots of drama n don't guess becoz yr guess didn't going to work here.. hehe.. n chlo.. now do big wle comment.. plz.. n howz nandini outfit n nandini's parent

Love Mehak

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update.. well written. Loved this story at wattpad. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing
Stay blessed😊


Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Sperbbb mind blowing n painfulll part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
welcome come back
but dont send me the pm
becasue I read it on wattpad
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
whts with manik
dual personality ?


???????????????????????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
superb
amazing
interesting
mysterious and interesting
plz plz update fast
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Superb...
Its intresting and mysterious...

Loving the Story..

pls update

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