PAINFUL LOVE - Manan ff (CHP 3PG-6 )9/7/16

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Painfull love

This is story about two people manik and nandini who are deeply in love with eachother but one day their life got fully changed reason u come to know in the story but their love for eachother never changed after bearing so much pain for eachother also they never leave eachother hand becoz they have promised each other if they will live than they will together if they will die they will die together. This is story is painfull and a dark story.. but romantic and itense love of manan so.. join the dark love journey of manan..

Prologue


One boy and a girl standing at cliff holding eachother hand



"I love.. u.. Manik.. "the girl shout n her voice echoes

"I love. U.. nandini.. "manik shouted n his voice also echoes

Than they looked toward eachother with so much love in their eyes for eachother

Than manik cube nandini face n come close to her lips n she close her eyes in response n she also move close to his lips n their lips met n they kisses eachother softly by sucking eachother lips n their kiss is showing how much they love eachother

"Manik.. i will miss u.. "nandini said sadly after they break the kiss

"And i will miss so.. much.. "he said pecking her forehead

"Don't be sad sirf ek hi din ko toh bt hai.. "manik said as she is feeling so sad

"Tumhse ek pal bhi dhur nhi rha jata u know na.. mere shase chlti hai toh sirf tumhri vjha se.. tum mujhe dur chlte jade ek toh aisa lgta meri jindgi thm si gye hai u r the only reason of breath "nandini said all this emotinally looking deeply into his eyes n tear fall from her eyes

"Okay i m not going bs don't be sad mein tumhre chre pr ek bhi asu nhi dekh skta tumhre face pr sirf smile hi achi lgti hai.. aur mere tumhri kushi se jada kuch imp. Nhi hai isliye jis se tum sad hogi ush jis i will throw thing aur jo tumhre chahre pr ek bhi asu layega voh jeene lyk nhi bachega.. "manik said n nandini hugged him after listening his word

"I love.. u.. " she said n manik peck her head n said "i love.. u.. more.."

After 1 year

"Leave me.. plz.."one girl screaming sound coming from one house

On stair one man is taking one girl on his shoulder the girl is screaming to leave her but it clearly vissible that the girl screams r going in deaf ears

Than he take her to room n throw on the bed . The girl crys in pain by hiding her face on bed

She now looked toward him n her eyes got widden as she got scared the girl is non other Nandini

She got scared as the person standing in front of him start unbuttoning his shirt

"Manik.. plz.. don't do this.. plz "she screams but she knows there is no use

"Why.. tum kise ke sth bhi dance kr skti ho besharmo ki tahra aur mein apni bewi ke sth ek rt bhi nhi guzar skta.. "he shouted while coming toward her removing his shirt

"Manik.. i m sorry babu.. " nandini said cryingly moving back

" i don't want sorry i want u... only " he said coming close to her and she is only crying..

" tumhe aapna.. bnane ki kasam khae hai.." he sing the song dangerously near her ear n she shivered coz of scardness

" manik... plz... i love u don't do this.. plz.. " she said cryingly but manik slap her coz.. he got irritated with her screams but after that nandini start crying loudly as blood oozed out from corner of her lips

"I don't wanna listen anything.. now be good wife ?"he said coming top of her by pinning her both hand on bed n she close her eyes tightly n more tear felt from her eyes

wht suddenly happened to manik before 1 year he can't able to see a single tear in her eyes now he is only the reason of her tear he is giving her pain.. u wanna know wht the happened manik in this 1 year so stay connected with the story..




Chapter : 1




One girl entered in house she is non other nandini Mahlortra

She gasped as her husband manik mahlotra suddenly comes infront of her holding her neck tightly from hand n hold her arm digging his nails n he shout "where were u.. mein tumhra 5 min se intzar kr rha hn.. aur tum bhr ashqui kr rhi hn.. apne pati ko cheat kr rhi ho.."

Nandini is trying hard to remove his hand from her neck "MA... ma.."she trying to call him but he is squeezing her neck becoz of anger

"Answer.. me.. got dammid "he shout now removing his hand from her neck n she start coughing n start breathing heavily

"Ab bolti.. kyo nhi.."he again shouted more loudly ignoring her condition

"Ma.. manik.. mein maa ke ghr gye thi.. traffic tha late ho gye.."she said difficulty caughing in b/w n he is only looking at her with blood shot eyes

"Khana le kr ao.. now.. "he said n she looked at him having fear in her eyes

"Vo.. voh.. khana bana kr nhi.. gye thi.. "she stammered becoz of fear than manik anger roses after listening this n he slapped her tightly with pressure that she fall down near to table n than she put hand on this forehead n she see the blood on her finger n tear start falling down from her eyes n he come to her

he comes toward her holding his hand make her stand n she looked toward him with crying eyes n he warn her "Agli br se tum mere ghr se meri bina permission ke ghr ke bhr per tk nhi rahogi.. vrna u have to pay more worst than this.."

"I m sorry.."she said in a low voice

"Now i want dinner in 10 min. and from yr hand only.."he said pulling her away n goes to his room n servant r seeing the scene by putting their head down they r very pitty for nandini condition

Nandini cryingly goes to kitchen n collasped on floor n start crying forgetting that manik gave her time for making the dinner

"Mam.. sir.. ne apko 10 min tk kahna bnane ke liye bola aap bna ligiye vrna voh apko aur datenge.."one servant came n said putting hand on her shoulder

She get up wipping her tear n start preparing dinner n her wound is paining but more than that her her heart is crying after seeing her love treated her like animal

She went to room taking his dinner n put the food on table n she take breath of relief as manik was not there he is taking shower

"Nandini.. My.. towel.."she listen his shout from bathroom n immidaitly take the towel out from cupboard

She knocked the door n manik open the door n pulled her inside holding her hand n take her under the shower

"Manik.. kya kr rhai ho.. chodho mujhe "she said trying to get away from his grip

"Don't move stay still otherwise u have to face the consequences.."manik said dangerously near to her ear n bite her earlobe n she dig her nails in his shoulder n he got angry

"Don't move yr.. hand "he said removing her hand from his shoulder by squeezing it n she hissed in pain

He start kissing her lips madly by roughly fisting his hand in her hair n he oozed out the blood from her side of lips but he don't care now he only want her to fullfill his desire n tear start falling down from her eyes n she fisted her hand n he leave her hair b/w the kiss n her hand travel downward n from her back his hand travel inside her top n he unhooked her bra she want to stopped him but she can't as she knows she has to face her more anger than he tear her bra n it's fallen down now wht he want he get that her bare breast n he grabbed that n start squeezing digging her nails in them n nandini is only crying in pain as it's hurting her

Than he break the kiss n she is breathing heavily n trying to catch breath n than his eyes fall her nipple as her top is white so it became transparent n than he immidiatly after toring her top n attacted toward her nipple n start chewing sucking n bitting them without any care n lit bit blood oozed out from her breast n she is only crying in pain closing her eyes

Than he went out taking towel n he start crying loudly n collasped their only under the shower only

"Why.. this happening mein bhut pyaar krti ho manik isliye mein ushe chodh kr bhi nhi ja skti.. aur manik bhi mere bina mr jaega.. mein chakr bhi kuch nhi kr skti sb kitna acha tha phle i want those day back.. "she crys n holding her knees n start thinking about past

Flashback

One girl is setting in front of mirror in beautiful blue color langa n looking at her phone again n again as she is waiting for someone calls desperately

"Oye.. hoe nandu aajaega tere sajan ka phone.. aaj teri mandi hai kush rhai na.."one of girl standing back of her said

"Mukti i was worried manik.. ne aaj subha se ek call tk nhi kiya.."she said worriedly making sad face

"Nandini.. don't worry cabir ne btaya he is busy in meeting today tu tension mt le.."navya her other friend said n nandini just hmmed

Than his phone beeped n she immidaitly see the msg it's of manik n she open it n a smile came on his face "i m sorry my shona i was very busy today but i have a suprise for u.. meet u with in 10 min.. "

"Oh.. oh.. toh agya.. tere sajan ka msg jara smile toh dekho iske face pr"mukti said teasing her n navya laughed

"Hum abhi ate.. tu apne pyaar ke khyalo mein rhai.. "mukti said n they left from there

Than she listen the knock on window n she immidaitly went toward window n open it

"Manik.. r u mad tum yha kya kr rhia ho.. pagal ho agr tumhai kuch ho jata toh.. "nandini start his lecture n manik trying trying come inside

"Stop.. Nandini ise phle mein yha se gir jau.. tum mujhe upr ane dogi.. "he said n she smiles n take him upward

"U know.. mein kitna dr gye.. ek call tk nhi kr Skte itne busy Thai.. tum apni shona ko bhul gye.."nandini said slapping his chest n manik making her stop and laughing

"Sorry.. shona.. u know iss project mein kitna busy rhaita ho.. mein tumhne mujhe humhri marriage ke time yeh deal cancel krne se mana kiya tha.. "he said n nandini made sad faces

"Acha.. first let me look my shona property.."he said n looked from head to toe

"Aww.. u r looking dam beautiful.. ek dm perfect.. "he said n nandini smiles

"Kl kb hoga.. from tomorrow hum fir kabhi ek dusre ka itna itzar nhi krna padhega.. fir toh we will there for eachother forever.. oh god manik u don't know how much happy i m.. kabhi na socha kabhi mein kisko itne pagalo ki Taraha chahaugi.."manik said looking deeply into her eyes by cubbing her face

They start coming close to eachother lips n about to kiss eachother but than there is knock on the door n nandini pushed manik

"Nandini. Open the door.. "somebody said from outside bagging the door

"Manik.. go.. plz.. "nandini said pushing manik toward window

"Shona ek kissi toh dedo.. "manik said holding her arm

"Manik.. plz.."she said pleading voice

"Okay.. bye.. "he said pecking her cheek n jumped outside the window n goes downward throw pipeline n nandini is looking at smilingly

And than after reaching downward n he smiles n nandini give flying kiss n he catch in his hand n hide in his heart



Index

Chp1-pg1
Chp2-pg3


Sohere.. first part guyz.. it's a very different story.. not revenge one anything manan in true love each other there is big big reason in manik that's type of behavior one thing u come to know from next part why nandini is not leaving manik.. N hope so i get same response as before.. N i will soon post my other story too..

Love Mehak




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nroy195 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept ..
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for the PM!
Welcome back, missed you on here!!
Ooohh I'm loving this new story already!
Very nice concept!!
Excited to know about Manan and their relationship!
Hmmm and Manik's behvaiour?!!
Continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am already reading it on wattpad dear
Loving it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey mehak
Kidhar ho madam thnku for pm n. awesome story
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Great start
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Smthg new and different
Update soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start
it's different
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue...
Excellent update...
Flashback was so adorable...
Y is manik behaving like a jerk???
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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why manik s behaving like this

when h e loves her so much wht made him change like this ??/

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