MaNan FS: Ajab manik ki gazab kahani (Completed) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: niti06

Why u making me laugh this much it was fab plus hilarious too hoddi baba bajarangbali manik ko anken dikha rage vo apne baramhchari bhakt ko sahi route par lane ki koshish kar rage he par nandhu har baar baar baar manik ka Mann basal deti he or use pass ooper dekne me alava or kuch ni haye touba nandhu manik me ooper vo bi towel me 😲 can I expect something something u know na what is my something 😳

THANK U...😳...AND I GET UR SOMETHING...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Sakshi196

Lovely update...its was so funny to see this bramhchari side of Manik...ab to bajrangbali ko chodd do Manik..
Manik ne bike se cliff se jump mara...full on filmy tha...
Haww raghav ne manik ko bhi mara or nandu ko bhi le gaya..
Bajrangbali plz help Manik So he will be able to save nandu from that jerk raghav
plz update soon...

THANKS DEAR...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
PART - 3

Nandini was sitting on bed with angry face muttering curse beneath her breathe. She wanted to escape..run but unfortunately her leg had been tied up with chain. Other than that she was provided with full facilities.

Raghav: " Baby..wese toh sab kuch rakh diya..phir bhi kuch chahiye toh banda hazir hai
Raghav entered smiling at her while she turned away her face with disgusted look.

Nandu:" Haa..chahiye mujhe..ek wish hai..pura karoge
She asked raising her eyebrows while he smirked and sat beside her with rose in his hand.

Raghav: " At you're service baby
He said while she gave a faint smile and pushed him away.

Nandu:" Jake..kahi mar jao..dharti ka bojh khatam hoh jayega.
She muttered while he rolled away his eyes and grabbed her neck harshly.

Raghav: " Kal saadi hai..chup chap man jao..warna Chacha Chachi haina tuhmare..arthi uthwa dunga..pahucha dunga tuhmare ush Manik kai paas
He whispered glaring at her while she smiled shortly at him.

Nandu:" Ohh Really..you think so..tch tch..tuhmari yahi toh problem hai..sochte aur samajhte wahi hoh joh possible hota hi nahi..koi nahi..jitna sapna dekhna hai..dekh loh..ek baar woh wapas aa gaya naa toh...boommm.
She whispered and gave a smirk while he angrily pushed her away and left banging the door behind.It was evening by now and Nandu was going mad by now. She had literally broked all things around. She shouted trying to get rid of the chain. She thumped her leg and leaned back closing her eyes. Meanwhile a guard entered inside and walked towards her.

Guard: " Sir nai khana bheja hai..khaa lijiye
He said while she gave a least bothered. She had still her eyes closed when she felt a pair of hands cupping her face.

Nandu:" How dare you..
Nandu shouted opening her eyes but then she saw Manik smiling at her. She blinked her eyes number of times while he made a what look and then she hopped into his arm.

Nandu:" Manik..tum yaha..Raghav nai dekha toh nahi..aur tuhme goli lagi thi woh..dard toh nahi hoh raha
She said checking him out while he held her arm's and stroked them with his thumb.

Manik: " Are mai theek hu..tum kyu yeshi bethi hoh..khana bhi nahi khaya kal sai..chalo khaa loh
He said picking up spoon of morsel for her while she held his hand and cupped his face lightly.

Nandu:" Tumne nai bhi toh nahi khaya hoga naa..pehle tum khao
She said while he laughed making her confuse a bit.

Manik: " Maine toh kabka khaa liya..thus thus kai khaya..tuhmare chakkar mai bhooka rahu..pagal thodi hu
He said while she angrily punched him and turned away while he bit his lower lip and made her turn again towards him

Manik: " Are majak kar raha thaa..chalo thoda sa sahi khaa loh naa..
He insisted and feeded her while she happily ate staring at him

Nandu:" Lekin tum yaha tak pahoche kaise..aur hum niklege kaise..Raghav kai aadmi chodenge nahi
She said while he stood up and broked her chain and gave a serious look to her

Manik: " Darta thodi hu unshe..
He muttered and she held his hand. He tied up their hands and rushed out of the room .Somehow they rushed out of the building only to see Raghav waiting for them. He was lying on his jeep singing playing with his gun while his army were beside him.

Raghav: " Galti hoh gayi..goli tere sar par thok dena chahiye thaa..galti hoh gayi
he said and stood up while Manik smirked placing Nandini behind him

Manik: " Right..mujhse bhi galti hoh gayi..pehle hi tujhe..aur teri paltan..sabko bajrang bali kai paas pahucha dena chahiye thaa
Manik said tightening the grip of her hand while Raghav shooted glares and hooped off from his jeep

Raghav: " Aaj..Nandini..yaa toh teri..yaa phir meri
Raghav muttered and signalled towards his men while Manik laughed rubbing his temple.

Manik: " Tch..Tch..Tch..mujhe laga tu Nandini sai pagalo wala pyaar karta hai..bada bhaukta rehta hai..baby yeh..baby woh..baby kai liye khud mard banke lad nahi sakta..inn choozo ki madad chahiye..yaar tu mard hi haina
Manik mocked him which shooted his ego hard. He dropped his gun and pulled off his jacket.

Raghav: " Thike..ladna hai..aaja..
he challenged him while Manik popped out his shirt buttons and pulled it away revealing his perfect 6 abes. He pushed away Nandini loosing the knot while she had tears in her eyes..Nandini gasped as she saw Raghav lying infront of her all coated in blood. She looked at Manik who wiped his lips and shrugged at her casually making her smile. She ran towards him and smiled while he gave a mischievous smirk.

Nandu:" Woh..mai
She blushed fumbling hard and playing with her fingers..she was about to utter when he placed her passport infront of her

Manik: " Tuhmara passport..ab tum US wapas jaa sakti hoh..koi Raghav yaa ushka aadmi tuhme nahi rokega
He said while she stared at him blankly. He clicked his fingers and she uttered
Nandu:" Aur tum..tum kya karoge
She asked while he shrugged and looked up trying to contact his bajrang bali jee.

Manik: " Mai..jaisa thaa..waisa hi rahunga..Bajrang Bali jee ghussa hai mujhse..tumhari wajaj sai..ab manana padega unhe
He complaint while she thumped her feets angrily.

Nandu:" Tuhmari Bajrang Bali ki toh..
She shouted making him shock. He blinked his eyes with jaw dropped while she again thumped her feets with irritated look and then placed her lips on him.

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oh...😲...kiss ho gaya...😲...ab nandu to manik ko like karta hain par manik...😕
janne k liye padhte rahiye AMKGK
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
what an update

superb

manik came back..what a relief...

finally righav ka kissa khatam

hahaha she kissed him..him...d Baal brahmchari...Hahahaha...poor manik ...ohh I meanslucky manik...he got such a dashing girl nanadini...Hahahaha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Superb update...
I love nandini's wish...raghav is really dharti par bhoj...
Bichari nandu...she was not even eating her food...yipppee Manik is back...
Manik also did not have his food just for nandu...how sweet...they try to ran par yeh kya villan to raste me par koi nhi when Manik is here no fear...Manik ne toh raghav ka ego hurt kar diya...lo ji raghav toh hoga dharashaayi...hoga kaise nhi manik h jo h...ye passport kaha se beech me tapak pada...haww bajrangbali gussa h Manik se...
Ye kya yaha toh kiss ho gayi..
Gaya manik ka bramhchari roop...im sure ab toh bajrangbali bhi khush ho jayenge inni cute love story dekh kar...
Update soon...iam waiting for next update...
Keep smiling


PS: thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Mind Blowing Update 😎 Ye Raghav na .. 😡 Hehehe. nandini ne shii khaa Dharti ka bhoj 😃 Hahah... Yipeee.. Hureee 😆 Manik aa gyaa... Aww. Both Care for each other so much na 😛 Hehehe .. Raghav to gya ab.. ab chapter close iskaa... Haha. Bajrang bali jee naraj h manik se 😆 Manik ka to contact hi nhi ho pa raha 😲. Hawww Kiss ho gyaaa. Hayeee 😳 Dekhte h ab nandini kya kregii. hehe manik kyaa krta h. or bajrang bali ji jra contact to kr do 😃 Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm. . Keep Smiling .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Thanks for the pm dear 😛 first of to you give me your mums phone number to ask her why is she not giving you food Jo tum chapy ki lines kha jati ho 😡 why why why you did this with mW yaar 😭 I to was waiting for the towel seen but your hunger spoiled it why kyun kiya esa 😭 😡 next time se ni OK 😊.
Now today's episode kya ta ye full package of drama ragav ka the end ho gaya buhaaa haaa haaa 👏 😆 so sad very bad for manik 😒 uska contact ho ni pas raha bajrangbali se naraz bi ho gaye vo to apne param bhakt bramhcharai manik se 😎 kya hoga bichare ka 😆 very wrong very very wrong timing passport 😡 todi der se ni a sakte the abi ana ta kya 😡 ye kya hua kisss 😲 😲 😲 nandhu tum to bramhcari par flaat ho gayin vo bi itna ke direct kiss 😲 😆 😎 what a lottery for manik yaar bin much mange use kya mil gaya what a luck 😳 OK so come back soon dear luv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
awesome update
manik saved nandu
but manik & his Bajrang bali ji r inseperable😆
he told nandu to go back😡
but but nandu kissed him😲😳
waiting for his reaction😆
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Wow Awesome update..
Finally Manik saved Nandu..
Too much of drama haha...
Nandu kissed him..
Can't wait for Bajrangi bhakt reaction..
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: KYYian

what an update

superb

manik came back..what a relief...

finally righav ka kissa khatam

hahaha she kissed him..him...d Baal brahmchari...Hahahaha...poor manik ...ohh I meanslucky manik...he got such a dashing girl nanadini...Hahahaha

THANK U FOR COMMENT...😳

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