MaNan : Sajda Part 14 pg 39 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Goshh you're so quick...
Thanks for the link..
Will read it now 😃

Something went wrong with PM so posting the reply here...

Originally posted by: reet0143

hey cherry how r y my jaan?

first of all am really really sorry for this much late but what to do my health is not in my favour these days...kaan pakad ke sorry

thanks for the pm pumpkin

loved the update

awesome one seriously...

mujhe lag hi raha tha k nandu abhimaniyu ki sis hai,,,,,,,,

but abhi ne yeh pehle kyun nahi bataya mukti ko...

kitna difficult hoga unke liye apni family se door rehna,,,,,,,,,

song part was emotional

abhi bhi abhi ne mukti ko pura sach nahi bataya but kyu?

so nandu is also a officer and she already knew k abhi is here...

and that pandit mera bas chale to main hi tapka dalu usko...😆😆

but will love to see nandu in action...

manik is already going insane after nandu...he is following her ...wah...

let's see ab ye sab ke kya karte hai and pandit ki band to pakka bajne wali hai

eagerly waiting

update soon baby

u rocked once again

loved it

love u baby...keep smiling

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Amazing update..

The flashback is wow..

Ur penning it down perfectly babe..

Loving the story so so ,uth

Thank u for the update

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

:)

Part 6!

Present!

Manik smiles thinking about Nandini and Harshad smiles seeing this.

But Harshad wants to make Manik speak everything. So he speaks, "Wow sir.. Its so good! Phir kya hui?"

Manik comes out of trance after hearing Harshad voice and speaks, "Officer Harshad, first of all it is Kya hua na ki kya hui..Ok!"

Harshad smiles and says, "Oh yeah! I told you na I am very bad in hindi! Sorry!"

Manik smilingly, "Its Ok!"

Harshad : Now tell me what happened then?

Manik again smiles and starts, "Phir next day that party invitation!"

Flashback!

Next day Manik was doing push ups in garden, when his eyes fall on room which was Nandini's room opposite to his quarters. He stopped doing push ups when he saw Nandini coming out of room stretching her arms wearing her night suit. She reached near railing and again stretched her arms and starting giving water to plants, but Manik was not able to see her because of trees which were blocking his view.

Here Nandini after pouring water on plants, she goes inside in her room and took bath and got ready in fresh clothes wearing dark blue denims which she matched with white tank top and tied high pony, she applied kohl giving her eyes doe look and pink color lip balm. She got ready and went to kitchen to make herself a good breakfast.

Here Manik tried his level best to look at that figure but to his bad luck he missed it. After Nandini left he again started doing push ups.

Abhi too woked up and came out from room but stops seeing Mukti coming towards him smiling holding 2 mugs of coffee. After reaching up to him, she forwarded him one mug and speaks, "Good Morning Baby! Lets have early morning coffee date!"

After handling him the mug, she goes inside his room moving him aside. Abhi gets confused by her behavior and thinks, "What happened to her now?"

He asks her, "Good morning Mukti! Tell me one thing did you took it early morning?"

Mukti gets angry after listening to him, but controls her anger and speaks in sarcastic manner, "No OFFICER, I didn't! Why you asked me that?"

Abhi gets more surprised by this so he again asks, "Like this only! I thought tum itni subah uth gayi, coffee banayi, mere liye warna aksar main hi hota hu jo Manik ke liye uska orange juice aur hum dono ke liye coffee banata hu! Major change Mukti Vardhan. I liked it!"

After saying this, he sat on bed in front of her who was sitting on bean bag in front of his bed. After listening to him, Mukti speaks, "Listen to me carefully now Abhi whatever I am about to say is very very important!"

Here Manik returns in his room after doing workout. He sits on bed and starts to remove his shoes and cleans his body. He was about to go in washroom to take bath but stops remembering Nandini's face and smiles and sits on bed again and picks his cell phone and starts seeing her picture and with each slide smiles to the fullest and thinks, 'What you have done to me?'

Here Nandini after making breakfast comes in dining with her breakfast and was about to eat it when she receives a call and looks at screen and after looking the caller ID smiles to the fullest and shouts after picking the call, "I knew it, I so knew it..aap hi hoge jo sabse pehle mujhe wish karege! I missed you!"

From other side, "Acha ji..aisa kya? Hume to nahi pata tha ki aap humare call ka wait kar rahi thi? Chaliye ab aapne itna wait kara hai to hum aapko aur wait nahi karwayege.. Happy Birthday Bache! May god fulfills your every wish!"

Nandini smilingly, "Thank you Chief! Aaj main jo bhi hu aapke, abhi aur aapke stupid, donkey aur useless bete Harshad Saxena ke karan hu! May I know ki janab hai kaha?"

Chief laughs hysterically and speaks, "Officer NM becoming Nandini Murthy ha? Ya phir yeh kahe Nandini Murthy becoming Harshad ki Tintin!"

Nandini speaks, "Oh please chief! Your son's Tintin..forget it huh!"

Chief smiles and speaks, "I know child.. by the way janaab wahi hai jaha iss waqt unhe hona chahiye!"

Nandini : I so knew it.. Club right?

Chief : Nah! This time you are wrong dear!

Nandini gets confused hearing this and speaks, "Then?"

Chief speaks, "Beta.. remember one thing.. Waqt ko waqt do, waqt har lamhe ki uljhan ko sulja dega!"

[A/N : Guys.. this is my sister's lines... she says them often and I love her these lines so thought to add them here! ;P]

Nandini gets confused by Chiefs's statement and asks him, "What do you mean by this Chief? I am confused!!"

Chief clears his throat and speaks, "You will get to know soon my child. Right now I have to leave.. will call you later.. bye bache, party hard and concentrate on your case TK is in Manali! Take care OFFICER NM aka Nandini Murthy! Happy birthday once again, may god help you accomplish your goals!"

Nandini smiles and speaks, "Thank you Chief.."

But stops when she remembers something and says, "One sec Chief!"

Chief stops and asks, "What happened?"

Nandini : Chief.. I want to ask you something? Is someone else too came with Officer Abhi & Officer Mukti this time?

Chief smiles and says, "And here comes NM back!"

Nandini pouts and says, "Chief.. Please!"

Chief : Acha ok ok..no teasing! Yes NM, I have send my one of the best officers this time to trap TK. But how you got to know about him?

Nandini speaks, "I saw him in morning at Officer Abhi's place. Who is he?"

Chief speaks, "He is Officer Manik Malhotra! Best officer in our department. He is the one who solved DIG case!"

Nandini gives impressive smirk on this. Chief continues, "He is good friend of Officer Mukti Vardhan! After whatever happened three years ago, he and his family was a great support to Officer Mukti! He treats Officer Mukti just like his small sister and Officer Abhi as his own brother! They are a team from last three years, solves every case together, stays together!"

Nandini mentally notes everything about Manik. Chief again continues, "NM, in this he will be your backup. I know you always need a backup..and he will be your backup!"

Nandini frowns on this and speaks, "Chief? But?"

Chief understood what she was trying to say so he cuts her in between and speaks, "NM! Don't worry.. I hadn't told him anything about you. He don't know anything about you, he is completely a stranger to you and for him you!"

Nandini sighs in relief but Chief's next statement make her sad, "NM, They all are here for TK as you wanted. Nandini, you are like my own daughter. Your father was my best friend, he was like my brother. He took promise from me to take care of you and Abhi! He wanted both of you to be the best officers just like him. Promise me Nandini..you will take care of yourself and Abhi. And if I got to know you hadn't then I will withdrew this case from you and Abhi! Remember that, Okay?"

Nandini just hmm on this. Chief continues, "Nandini, one more thing..three of them..Manik, Abhimanyu & Mukti have come over as tourists who are very big fans of TK!"

Nandini : Fans? TK fans?

Chief : Officer NM, TK is not only mafia but also a famous classical singer, Remember?

Nandini closes her eyes and says, "Oh yeah! I remember."

Chief smiles and speaks, "Start eating almonds Officer NM!"

Nandini again hmm on this, Chief understood that she already started making plan so he speaks, "I think I should take your leave now! All the best and happy birthday once again. Take care. Bye!"

Nandini smiles, "Thank you chief. You too take care. Bye!"

They ends the call. Nandini after ending call thinks, Interesting! TK fans! Now I know what I have to do. Officer NM.. na na Nandini Murthy get ready! You have to throw your birthday party, after all today is your birthday!'

Nandini smirks and stood up and shouts, "HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME!"

Present!

Somewhere in a dark room in which one small lamp was on, a girl is sitting on floor holding a photo frame. She was looking at that frame with all love.

At same time, dark room gets open and a young lady comes in holding tray full of food. That lady sighs in relief seeing that girl (who was holding frame) is again sitting in dark room holding same photo frame!

That lady keeps tray on table and sighs in disbelief and waits for girl to react. That girl saw everything from corner of her eyes and smiles and says, "Don't look at me like this. I know you are here!"

That lady smiles hearing this but controls her smile and speaks sternly, "I know that. Here is the food eat it before it gets cold!"

Girl sitting on floor stands up, keeps frame on table and starts eating food. That lady looks at girl lovingly and forwards her phone to that girl and speaks, "He is coming back! Look what he has send for you!"

Girl stops eating and stands up and leaves the room.

That lady sighs and speaks, "Come soon!"

Here that girl comes in garden and looks around. She feels cool breeze, she open up her hands wide and thinks, 'Thank you!'

That lady comes in garden looking for that girl and shouts after seeing her in garden, "Nandini!" and runs up to her after taking shawl in her hands. After reaching up to her and draping shawl around nandini, that lady again shouts on her holding her from her shoulder as Nandini was about to fall, "Are you crazy? What do you think what you were doing?"

Nandini in lady's arm, "Thanking god aur kya!"

That lady sighs and says, "Oh really! Like this after knowing, what condition you are in? Great Officer NM.. oh I am sorry I mean Nandini Murthy!"

Introducing Jennifer winget as Mansi Malhotra!

Yes that girl in dark room was Nandini and that lady was none other than Mansi.. Manik's elder sister.

Mansi gives her bad look and says, "Now C'mon, get in.. Its cold here you will fall ill. Come, you need rest.. You are not fully cured!"

They moves inside the house again, Mansi makes Nandini sit on couch after making sure that she got settled comfortably. After making her comfortable, Mansi brings her food tray and starts feeding her like baby and speaks, "Nandini, why don't you understand..you are still not fully cured! You need complete rest..and what you do..you sit on cold floor, goes outside without draping shawl around you, don't take meds on time, don't eat eat on time..and.."

Nandini while chewing, "Blah! Blah! Blah!"

Mansi gets angry and says, "You! You know what.. forget it!"

Mansi starts to move but Nandini stops her by holding her hands and says, "I am sorry Di! Please don't go! I promise I will take care this time..pakka se! Nandini promise!"

Mansi smiles still backfacing her but controls it and speaks, "Nah! I don't believe you, you always says like this but every time you broke them! Last time too you said this but you again fall sick!"

Nandini again tries, "Sorry na Di, I am saying na this time I will take care of myself ache se!"

Mansi looking at her, "Pakka promise?"

Nandini like kid, "Pakka promise. Ab maafi de do!"

Mansi smiles and says, "Okay! Chalo maaf kia but last time ha!"

Nandini : Okay! Last time!

Mansi again sits and starts feeding her, after feeding her and giving her medicines Mansi speaks, "Nandini, I have to leave for Mumbai.. if Manu got to know that I am here and I know you are alive..he will be very angry."

Nandini : I know Di, after all your brother is not less than monster. Huh! Monster Manik. I still remember my birthday party, kinna khadoos tha aapka bhai!

Mansi smiles and says, "Nandini, I have to go!"

Nandini sadly, "Tussi ja rahe ho, tussi na jao! Please!"

Mansi : Nandini, I will come back soon with your ACP Manik!

Nandini gets tensed and says, "But will he be happy after seeing me like this?"

Mansi too gets sad and hugs Nandini who started crying after looking at her condition and thinks, 'Rabba! Please don't take so many test! Show them way!'

Here in flight Manik smiles and thinks, 'When this flight will land?' I am coming my Aiyappa Girl!'

Screen freezes on Manik smiling face and Nandini crying face.

Hello peeps!

Here is the update. Enjoy. I have changed the plot a little, now I will show both present and flashback.

Pardon me for any mistake.

Will be waiting for your feedback.

See ya!!