MaNan TS: Main Jeena Teeray Naal! LastChap/Pg28/11th-June

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Ress...

Yayeee... I am first...

Unress...

Take a bow sweetheart...

Gorgeously beautiful story...

Such a Heartfelt one...

Starting ... Nandini 's past it was so horrible...

Poor girl kitna suffer krna padha usse...

Manik was so shuttered jab rishab ne usse bataya...

Loved the way manik took care of her... he assured her...

Manan moments were beautiful and lovely...

Finally Manan became one... it was blissful...

Pregnant Nandini and her cravings... that part was so cute and adorable ...

Little bundle of joy... Reyansh... he was so cute ...

Loved this story to the crore...

U describe each and every scene so beautifully...

U nailed it yrr...

Thanks for sharing...

Keep writing...

keep smiling...

stay bless...

lots of love...

Edited by Cute_Inaya - 9 years ago

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Admi hai ya janwar,
Itni chhoti si bachi ko maar ke proof kya karna chahta tha?
Awesome story dear,
Love the language they used to interact with each other, it was so different and too good.

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mehek.kwatra97

@mehek.kwatra97

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Emotional bt awesum
Finally nandini aur manik ek ho gye
Love the updaye
Family movements was awesum

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

awsm stryyy diii...

beautifulll...

nandu suffrd a lot...

end ws beautiful...

lvd it...

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Mao TS ka mtlb 3 shot b hota h..!
tum hmesha 2 me khatm kr deti ho..!
not fair..! :(

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mananluvpani

@mananluvpani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Superbbb fabulous story...
Manik me nandu KO kitne ache she Handel kiya use heal kiya...
Finally manan ek hi Gaye n reyansh me unke love KO complete kr diya...
Tysm for this beautiful story...

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naziasiddiqui

@naziasiddiqui

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Awsmmm

superbbb

amazinggg

mindblowinggg

excellent

fabbb

nice update

loved it very much

Cont soon

Waiting

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88RUPALI

@88RUPALI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Hi dear

Its awesome n superb update

Nandini's past was scary

How can any father behave like this

How much pain her father gave her

But i am happy she got manik as life partner

At end they are happy family

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

this was so beautiful
finally manik healed her

Sleeping in his secure embrace and waking up in his arms...

Starting the day with a forehead kiss from his side and an assurance that he was with her..

The morning with a lot of teasing as he never let go off her dupatta..

Disturbing her so many times when she must be fully into a novel or a book...

He was becoming her habit...

these lines were my favorite
manik was so patient with her...
he let go off her insecurities

the lines when nandini told about her past made me cry

reyansh was so cute...he can;t have tootie...and he is doodi baby...aww

loved this ts mao

thanks for writing