MaNan TS: Main Jeena Teeray Naal! LastChap/Pg28/11th-June

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's a been a year to me on writing this forum! Oh God! Can you imagine! A whole long year! 12 months! It's a long duration! Why Iam I here? The reason is you guys! You all gave so much of love to me! Starting from TUM MILE! to THE MAFIA AND HIS SHIMMER! Everything! Thank you guys! I reall don't have enough words to say how much bless I feel! Love you all!
Happy Anniversary To Me!
Here goes the new TS!



Title Song:

'Main Jeena Tere Naal
Jeewan Din Chaar Pave Jeewan Sau Saal,

Tere Kadman Vich Mar Jawan
Duniya Dewe Misaal,
Main Jeena Tere Naal

Jeewan Din Chaar Pave Jeewan Sau Saal,

Kite Ne Waade Jhoote
Khaiyan Ni Kasman,
Asaan Nayi Maniyan Jag Diyan Rasman

Ral Ke Kataniyan Dhupan Chawan
Sehniyan Thandiyan Tatiyan Hawawan
Rab Vi Soche Asmanan Te
Jori Bani Kamaal,

Main Jeena Tere Naal
Jeewan Din Chaar Pave Jeewan Sau Saal,

Man Aye Channa Mainu Apni Wafa Te
Teri Main Dori Sutti Apne Khuda Te
Dein Gawahi Guzariyan Sadiyan
Zinda Raiyan Mohabbatan Sachhiyan
Mar Jaande Ni Aashiq Mar Ke
Mera Nayi Khayal,

Main Jeena Tere Naal
Jeewan Din Chaar Pave Jeewan Sau Saal
Tere Kadman Vich Mar Jawan
Duniya Dewe Misaal
Main Jeena Tere Naal
Jeewan Din Chaar Pave Jeewan Sau Saal,'
(Singer Shreya Ghoshal)


Translation:

'I want to live with you,

Whether it be a day or hundred years,

I will die in your feet,

As I want to be an example of love for the world,

I didn't do any ambiguous promise,

I have taken vows,

We didn't care about the world,

We will survive through all the thick and thins,

God will also think sitting far in the sky 'Ahhh what an incredible couple!',

I want to live with you,

Whether it will be a day or hundred years,

I am very proud of my faithfulness,

I have given your rope to my God!,

The world stands and knows that true love never dies,

Do the lovers die after death?? Nahh! I don't think so!,

I want to live with you,

Whether it be a day or hundred years,

I will die in your feet,

As I want to be an example of love for the world..!'

(Translation credit goes to me phew! It was a tricky task!)


The title signifies A promise! A believe of what a lover has in other! A trust one gain from other when they are tied with the knot!


He 'likes' her because his mother showed him her photo one night when he was hell busy in typing some important document...


"Maano! Maano suno na!" His mother nagged!


"Kya hai Mom! Can't you see am busy! Aur kya ya ap mjy Maano Maano bulaty rehty ho! Please my name is Manik!" He sounded so irritated..


"Acha acha! Mr. Manik Malhotra! Now shut this laptop and listen to me carefully!" Mother had an authority in her voice which forced him to shut the laptop lid.


"Here see this picture!" Mother showed him a picture of a girl and he irritatedly look at the picture but his eyes froze. He stared at the picture and without hesitation he said a big fat 'YES'...



He tried contacting her but she refused to talk or meet him...



He was ok with that thinking that she must be some shy typical Indian kinda girl who was hesitant to meet her future husband...



He waited...



Though he wasn't much patient man but he held himself...



Then the marriage date got fixed...



Haldi...



Mehndi...



The functions were individual in families so again not for once he got the chance to get her glimpse. Nor she tried to meet him...



And finally...



He reached her house with the baraat! To take her with him...



He saw her coming towards the mandap but damn her face was covered in embroidered dupatta...



She sat beside him and the rituals started...



Seven sacred vows...



Vermilion...! He saw her face finally and he was dead. She was a beauty.



But something was missing!



Yes the smile was missing!



And next he noticed tears glistening in her hazel orbs! It upset him! He was worried, shocked, and sad!



But in spite of all that she was an angel who was his now!



She didn't look at him though he desperately wanted her too. He must have kept staring at her angel face if his mother hadn't nudged him to tie the nuptial chain and continue with the ritual..



He immediately tied the chain and lost her sight as the dupatta was back on her face!



And then..



"Yeh vivah saphal hua! Ab ap dono pati patni hain!" The pandit announced loudly and they were tied with the most strong at the same time weak knot of all...

To be Continued...

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Sab say pehly how's the banner???? Myny khud banaya!

So my lovelies! How was it? Typical ghesi peeti kinda story but held uniqueness! As you know it's my story so I promise you all that it will be filled with loads of beautiful, sweet and innocent emotions! How's the song? Just Google it listen to it! Trust me it's so so amazing! It always gives me goosebumps and a chilly sensation! You all gave a superb response to my last two shot and I am hoping for the same response here too! :) Bring it on!

Do comment your suggestion what you feel about an arrange marriage?

Is love marriage more successful or arrange is good? Which one hold more importance?

Come on am waiting!
Love, Mawara!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy anniversary mawara...

The translation ...omg..hatsoooffu..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy anniversary marawa ...n it's awesome...plzzz like other stories of urs it should also have a positive ending...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy anniversary...di...
This concept is interesting...you are writing this so definitly it will be amazing...i m so excited...
About marriage...i like arrange marriage...everything is new...i find it challenging...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy anniversary di...
Awesome update...
I personally like all of your stories...
And that too...
Continue soon di...
Waiting eagerly...

ONCE AGAIN HAPPY ANNIVERSARY...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations
And celebrations
😆😃

M so happy for u
That u have completed 1 year
N m more happy for myself
That I came across ur stories
Love each of them to the core

This one is a ain so interesting
But m just afraid what if nandu is in love with someone else😭
Or worse what If she is nt nandu 😆

Sry cnt help but assume
So plz continue soon
N update that vampire story also



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Posted: 9 years ago
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you are just awsmmm i mean you litterally sound like a real writer i mean u should try your luck in writing trust me you are really amazing ..

your every stories they are awsm whether its is TUM MILE .. DHEERE DHEERE .. HEAT LIGHTENEING (my fav) .. MAFIA AND HIS SHIMMER (for this story i have no word the way u portray them just mindblowing and waiting for the epilouge yaar plzz update soon am really impatient yess :p)..and how can i forgot SUN SAATHIYA (i think maine uss story ko 50 times read karliya hai frm start to ending :D) am crazyy abt ur stories .. and your song selection trust me girl agar tumne movies likhna start kardiya na specially love stories they aree gonna rock like seriouslly housefull ho jaenge :D...

and ek or story thi na umm may be uska naam MOH MAYA tha i mean hai than KISI DA YAAR NA VICHRE than MUJHMAI HAI TU (uff my another fav storyy) .. hats off to u girl u r really a god gift.. god bless you .. your writing have magic .. yess !! :)


and a big heartyy CONGRATILATION AND HAPPY ANNIVERSARYY.. thats really awsm its been 1 year woww awsmmm CONGRATULATIONS :D :)

coming to your new ff... its woww so much of suspence :( though i love it .. heyy but you have to update soon pretty plzz suspence kill people really and thats why i hate suspence :D aree meri age hi kya hui hai marne ki i dont wanna die this soon abhi mujhe captown bhi jaana hai :D soo u can understand na soo plzz update soon ;) forbidden love + dheere dheere+ mafia and his shimmer epilouge plzz soonn

love ya :)
thanks for this awsmm ff's
and again congratilations :)
happy anniversaryy :D





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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats dear you deserve every bit of it you are really a awsm writter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayiee..! new story..!
So happy I am..! :)
N congrats for completing one year..!

D concept of ur stories r simple..! Bt they indeed hold uniqueness..! + dat super Mawara touch..!
So unknwingly story blockbuster ho hi jati h.. :D
Happy Anniversary Mao..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ek naya story...so nice concept mawara...😃...main dua karti hu k yeh ts ss or ff ban jaye...😆...it has lot of potential.
Cont soon.

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