Manan ss: Finding love[Chapter 4-updated]

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__Part 1__

She rang the bell for the hundredth time...she was standing in front of an old house which was once her or precisely, THEIR house...she was happy that she will meet him after three years but at the same time she was angry at him as how could he do this to her..?? She went to USA on a project which was supposed to be a one year project which unfortunately turned into three year project...but she was happy...when the first year started both were in contact but after a year he broke the contact all of a sudden...she was angry on him for this crime and she had vowed to herself that she will not leave him...standing in front of the door for more than a hour at this summer morning she was sweating profusely...she rang the bell one more time hoping for a response from the other side but all in vain...but a sound catched her attention...

Nandini bitiya aap kab aayi..??

Kaka,kese ho aap..?? She touched his feet...

Hum thike hain...aap kese ho aur aap kab aaye..?? he asked the same question again..

Meine yaha pe 1 ghante se khadi hun...koi darwaza hi nahi khol raha hain..

Meine bazaar gaya tha mujhe pata hota toh meine nahi jata...

Nahi kaka meine manik ko surprise dena chah thi...she said with a smile

Manik kaha hain..?? she enquired

He stood numb don't know what to do...he tried to change the topic

Aap pehle andar toh aao na bitiya...he opened the door...and took her luggage inside...

Nandu find kaka's behavior weird but still opt to be quiet...

Manik kaha hain kaka..?? She asked as she sat on the sofa...

Paani lau aapke ke liye...?? Again he ignored the question..

Nahi,mujhe paani nahi chaiye...aap bas yehe bataiye ki manik kaha hain..??

Abhi aap thoda aram kar...mujhe kitchen meine thoda kaam hain...ahain he tried to divert the topic...but now nandini was adamant to know about where is manik and what has happened in these two years of her absence...

Kaka aap topic mat change karo...batao manik kahan hain..? Nandini got up from where she was seated and walked towards kaka...

Mujhe nahi malum...he tried hard not to break down in front of her

Nahi malum matlab..?? She asked with an confused expression..

Voh aab yaha nahi reh tha...he was trying his best to control his tears which were forming in his eyes...

What..?? She was surprised as well as shocked...because she knows that manik cannot leave this house...this house was his life..

Toh abhi kaha reh tha hain..?? She questioned kaka

Pata nahi...

She again found that something was missing...in her absence manik has gone under something and she has to find out..!!

Achaa thik hain...aap ke pas cabir ka number hain..??

Haan hain na...

Do na kaka

Yeh lo...kaka gave the number to her...

She closed the door as she left and here the tears which he was controlling flowed down...saying-hey bhagwan nandini bitiya ko shakti dena us news ko jhelne ke liye...and he broke down

Whereas here nandini messaged cabir that she has returned back to india and coming to his house...as soon he got the message he got shock of his life he was numb at the same moment he messaged mukti,alya and dhruv to be in his house in 15 minutes

Navya...he shouted

Kya hua cabir..?? chilla kyun rahe ho..

Nanadini aa rahi hain...as soon as he told this navya's eyes got widen...she stood numb...she felt that floor is slipping from her beneath...

TING TONG...the door bell rang both looked at each other and then to the door...cabir walked towards the door and opened it...he was bit relived as he saw the three standing there...they entered the house..

Kya hua guys tum dono ka face tension full kyun lag raha hain..?? mukti questioned them while sitting..

Nandini is back guys..!! cabir said making all the three shock...these three were not expecting this...not at this time..!! they were worried...worried for her...worried for her reaction...how will they handle her when she will get to know about manik...all these questions were running in each and every mind...

"TING TONG" again the door bell rang all looked at each other than at the door they were nervous but at the same time worried for her...all signaled navya to open the door..she took tiny miny steps towards the door..and opened it having a nervous smile on her face...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the same story(I miss you) i have just changed the name! due to the closure of the topic i have to start with a new thread! really sorry for the misunderstanding! due to my boards i couldn't update it regularly! but now on-wards i promise i will update regularly! i hope you enjoy the story!

criticism accepted😃

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Nidhi.
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__INDEX__
Chapter 1 {above}
Chapter 3
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Damn Curious and Suspense filled Update dear.
Thanks for the PM.
Continue Soon.
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Amazing update...
Where's manik???
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Awsm amazing love it plzz continue nd update soon pm also
Thanks for this story
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Originally posted by: 92Sara

Damn Curious and Suspense filled Update dear.
Thanks for the PM.
Continue Soon.


thank you so much😃

will soon😃
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thank you so much😃
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thank you so much😳
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thank you so much
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