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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Where's manik???
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
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Originally posted by: Snehalokwani200

amzing

update loved it
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Originally posted by: Pinkypie

Awsm amazing love it plzz continue nd update soon pm also
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__Chapter 2__

Part: 2

Navya!!! Nandini shouted seeing her best friend cum sister in front of her after 2 long years!!!

Nandu!! Navya said and hugged her and praying to god that all will be fine

Tu itni tensed kyun lag rahi hain? Nandini questioned her breaking the hug

Nothing like that..andar chal.!! Navya said while diverting the topic

Omg!!! The fab 5 is here!! What a surprise!! Nandini said with showing her wide smile which was plastered on her face...!! She hugged everyone present in the room to assure that one and each person was there whom she missed these years..!! but where is he? All smiled seeing her excited..!! but some words which escaped from her mouth vanished their smiles

Guys manik kahan hain? Nandini asked while sitting beside navya...

Manik..is not here..mukti said in a-not-to -be-in-a-sad tone

Cabir you didn't called him? Nandini asked looking at cabir

He will not pick up our calls! Cabir said

Why? Fight hui? Nandini asked in utter confusion

fight toh hui thi...esi fight jiske baad naahi usne humara chera dekha nahi...naahi kabi call kiya!! Cabir said as his eyes filled with tears...

Woh tumlog se baat kiya bina nahi reh sakta...nandini said in assurance...

Woh esa kar raha hain nandini...who esa kar raha hain...mukti said while tears trickled down her cheeks

Meine jake usseh samjhaungi...woh jarur tumlog se baat karega...par can anybody tell me where does he stay?

Koi faida nahi hain nandini..woh kisi ki baat nahi sunega!!! Alia said controlling her tears

Of course who meri baat sunega..!! agar nahi bhi suna chah toh bhi usseh suna padega..!! nandini said while standing

He will not...he is not here to listen!! Cabir said shouting!!

But why? What is the reason!!! Where is he? Nandini said while letting out her frustration!!

He was kidnapped by harshad!! Alia said in a guilty voice...

What?!!! Kidnapped.!! Aur who bhi manik..!! I don't believe this!! Nandini said in a unsure voice...

He is nandini..he is...cabir said while sitting in a tearful state

I can't believe this!! You guys are playing a prank on me!! Are you?

Do you feel like that? We will do this kind of joke? And who bhi manik baare meine?! Dhruv said

You guys didn't find the need to search him? Nandini said in a devastated tone...

We searched him...and we founded him...cabir said not looking into her eyes...

Then where is he cabir? Nandidni said while she kneeled down in front of him

He is a breathing dead body nandini..!! a breathing dead body..!! cabir said while letting his tears more rolled down his cheks..!!

A breathing dead body...a breathing dead body...a breathing dead body...she was continuously murmuring these words...she stood up...went towards navya...she was walking like a lifeless soul...she is breathing but didn't wanted to

Is that true? She asked navya in a trembling vice

Navya shook her head in despair and nandini rooted in her place...tears automatically rolled down her eyes...where is he now? Nandini asked looking at cabir

He is now in the hospital which has been his home since two years..cabir said looking down...

Why didn't you guys informed me? Nandini shouted on them...my best friend was in coma...don't know since when!!! And not a soul informed me..!!!why? nandini shouted pouring her anguish...the guilty o not being here when he needed her the most took a troll over a heart...

We couldn't...we didn't had the guts to...mukti said in a low voice

Yaa right...didn't had the guts to..!! nandini said while flying here hands and smiling sarcastically

Nandini we were afraid for you..!! dhruv said!

Chuck that!! Tell me which is the hospital..?!! nandini said in anger tone

I all drop you...cabir said while taking his car keys...

I want to go alone...nandini said

I won't tell you the name of the hospital...!!Cabir said while walking out of the house...while nandini followed him...

He messaged navya..

"Be there in the hospital with all of them...will be in need"

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__Chapter 3__

She ran towards the receptionist wile Cabir followed her...

"Manik Maholtra" she asked the receptionist

"Room no.15 second floor" the receptionist replied

"Thank you" she said and ran towards the second floor...she searched for the room for a minute

"Room no.15 " she said to herself and walked towards the room making her heart strong to see him in that situation...while dhruv parked his car and all others came towards cabir and nandini...she took tiny steps towards the room while her heart was ready to come out of her chest...she looked at cabir and he just nodded telling her to go inside...

She opened the door and stepped inside the dorm but got a shock of her life...

"Cabir" she shouted...making him enter the room

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"You idiots...put him inside fast" the nurse shouted at her poor attendants

"Par madam he is too heavy for us to put him" one of the attendants said

"I don't want to listen anything...put him inside or you will be handed to the cops" the nurse threatened them...

"No!! we will do it"

"Better" she said while a wicked smile played on her lips

After many tries they successfully put him inside and the nurse sat opposite to him where he was lying and the two attendants sat on the drivers section and drove away!

"You are now mine MANIK" she said while holding his hand and kissing his forehead and laughed a evil one

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"Kya hua nandu?" cabir said while entering inside the room..she didn't said anything she just kept quite and pointed towards the bed where he used to lay

"Manik" he murmured as he realized he was not there on the bed his eyes started to well up while nandini stood there as there was no stopping of the tears from her eyes

"DOCTOR" shouted cabir making nandini stunned

"Cabir" nandini tried to decrease his anger

"Not know nandu! Not now" cabir warned her and walked outside banging the door while after sometime nandini to came outside

"DOCTOR" cabir shouted making everyone startled by his behavior including dhru.aliya.mukti and navya

They saw nandini silently crying and navya saw that her husband was ready to murder someone

Other three walked towards nandini to know what happened while navya walked towards cabir to calm him down...

"Kya hua nandini" mukti said holding her face

"Woh manik...woh" she tried o say between her sobs

"Manik what?" aliya questioned her

"He is not there in his room...he is not in his room" she said and sat down on the floor crying her heart out

"What happened Cabir? Why are u shouting?" asked the doctor who examines manic

"You bloody bas***d!!" yelled cabir making the doctor startled cabir catched his collar

"Cabir shant ho jao..please" navya pleaded to her husband

"Nahi navya...manik kha hain?" cabir asked the doctor in dangerous tone

"I don't know" said the doctor gulping the lump which had formed in his throat seeing cabir...

"Hospital tere hai na??" cabir asked making sure to be in a dangerous tone

"haan.."

"So where the hell is manik??!!" cabir left his collar and shouted

"He will be in his room" said the doctor

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Edited by __nidhi__ - 9 years ago

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