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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys...how r u...

Main to mast hu...😃.

I got this os on Fb in this morning to maine ek hour k ander ander writer se es os ko publish karneka permission le li...So here presenting the os...

Don't forget to read the note @ the end...😳.

DOH LAFJO KI KAHANI( Part-1)

The poor vase got break down pieces as a bride threwd it away in full force. A 24 year old beautiful bride..looking breath takingly pretty in her red and green kanjiwaram with matching southern jewellery adding extra mark to it. But this bride wasn't happy at all with her so called Appa's forceful marriage of her to his own faithful bodyguard.

..Nandini Murthy..a girl full of passion..who aspired to became a known singer and rund NGOs keeping in secret. If her Appa would have known he would have probably snatched it away from her. Deeply in love with classmate Aryaman who left her in marriage day as her Appa threwd blank cheque on him and that jerk wanted this only. To teach his so called lesson to her daughter Durgeswara Murthy had forcefully placed Nandini on same Mandap yet with another guy who was his old loyal bodyguards son and a bodyguard himself..Manik Malhotra.

..She shouted and screamed and paced here and there. She wanted to die..give away her life but she can't. She didn't had a courage to do so yet she didn't had an option but to deal with her marriage.

..The door clicked open and Manik entered silently. She threwd a sharp glare at him. He silently dusted the cracked vase and left taking his pillow. She thumped her feet and sat on bed crying silently.

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..Next morning she woked up and found a tray of breakfast beside her. An omelette with glass of juice. A small note kept beside it. She angrily picked it up and it was written " Kal sai aapne kuch nahi khaya..khaa lijiye aur kuch chahiye toh bata diziyega "

.." Nonsense! ( She muttered and threwd away the breakfast angrily. She got fresh up and came out of room and saw Manik staring at her from kitchen. )

..He came up with another food tray and handed to her silently and left gesturing her to eat. She found another note and with irritated face she took the note
"Mujhe pata hai aapne ush breakfast koh haath tak nahi lagaya. Par ghusse sai apne aap koh itna takleef mat diziye. Please khaa liziye "

..She sighen and sat in nearby sofa. She started eating silently while Manik was peeping at her. He smiled shortly as he saw her eating calmly.

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..Nandini got shocked as she wasn't allowed to enter her Appa's mansion again. Pissed off she dialled him and he received it.

Nandu: " Appa! You can't do this to me. Mujhe waha nahi rehna aur apne mere accounts bhi block karwa diye..how could you Appa...

She shouted and heard deep chuckle from another side
Nandu's Appa: " Bahut paise waste kar liye un NGOs kai peeche aur bahut aesh kar liye. Ab Manik hi tuhmara pati hai and wahi tuhmara ghar. Raho wahi..I've nothing to do with you now

With that he disconnected the call and all relations with her. Tears escaped her cheecks as she never thought she would welcome this life ever

She returned back to his old and small house where he was waiting out for her. She ignored him and rushed to the room and settled down in bed. She was resting trying to calm herself down when she felt a pair of hands massaging her feets. She jerkly stood up and saw Manik massaging her bare feets with hot oil so that she could feel some relief.

Nandu: How dare you touched me! Door hatto samjhe

She shouted and pulled away her legs. He stood up and gestured her to apply but this loosed her temper more
" Ek baar bola samajh nahi aata. Listen if tuhme lagta hai husband hoh..kuch bhi kar loge. Then please come out of you're dream. Now get lost.

She had so much coldness in her voice yet he smiled softly and left closing the door behind

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Nandini went to the best lawyers she could attend and get rid out of this marriage. But in vain. She was deprived of money and her Appa's power. She was getting helpless by now.

She saw Manik chatting to his friends in their not so sweet home. She wanted to talk to him but at somw point she just hated his presence only. She just hated him.
Cabir: " Hi Nandini..I'm Cabir..Manik ka best buddy. Yeh hai Navya my wife

He said politely while she gave a least bothered to them.

Navya: " Hum aapko bhabhi bula sakte hai

Navya exclaimed and Nandu threwd a sharp glare at her. Manik looked at her and turned to Navya. He signalled her to keep quite and she made a O face.

Nandu: " Stupids..bade aaye bhabhi bolne wale...

Nandini muttered as she entered the room and locked behind her. She came out after fresh ing herself and saw ten thousand and a note lying on her bed. She rolled away her eyes and picked them up.

" Janta hu..Dus hazar sai aapka kuch nahi hota. Par please leh liziye..kaam aayenge aapke. Mai mehnat kar raha hu. Zitna ban padega..utna karunga aapke liye. Aur kuch chahiye toh bol diziyega please "
..She crumbled the note and threwd it away. She wanted to threw the money too but yes she needed them badly. With lots of hesitation she kept them inside her cupboard.

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Lawyer: Okk..Mrs.Malhotra I'll see upon you're case agar divorce hoh sakta hai toh...

he said with calm voice adjusting her specs while Nandini snapped at her.

Nandu: " It's Nandini only. Ish sadi koh mai nahi manti..please don't join his name with me. It suffocates...

She gritted her teeths and lawyer raised her eye brows at her and placed a paper infront of her.

Lawyer: " Manik kai signatures please..and you're too

He said and Nandini immediately signed on them. She kept the papers on her bag and left with not so surprised lawyer behind.

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Nandu: " Tum hamesha puchte rehte hoh naa..mujhe kuch chahiye etc. So today I wanna ask something from you..doge...

She asked with cold voice and Manik nodded smiling at her.

She placed the divorce infront of him and his eyes bulged in bit shock. Tears filled up in his eyes for moment but he immediately wiped them and signed on them without arguing to her.

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Lawyer: " Sorry..Ms.Nandini but phil haal aapka divorce nahi sakta. I'm afraid atleast 6 months tak

Lawyer said casually shrugging at her and Nandini thumped her hands on table.

Nandu: " What the hell. Please do something. I..I can't stay there. Ghossh ( She cried while lawyer gently offered her tissue. She wiped them and cursed her fate beneath her breathe.

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Nandini's anger raised to the peak when she found a gift and a note lying on her bed. She snatched the note and read out.
" Ab jab ki..hamara saath jyada lamba nahi hai sayad. Phir bhi meri taraf sai ek chota sa gift. Jyada kimti nahi hai par aapke liye ekdum perfect hai "

..She grabbed the gift and rushed outside. She saw him adjusting the bulb on wall. She went and threwd the gift on him.
Nandu: " Samjhte kya hoh khud hoh ! Yeh sab karke..mahan ban rahe hoh. Sympathi deh rahi hoh!

she shouted and he was about to uttered when she showed her hand.

Nandu: You're nobody for me. Let me clear today. Tum..tuhmara yeh ghar! Dum ghut tah hain yaha mera. Kaise adjust kar rahi hu..mujhe khud nahi pata. Ab aur apna husband wala natak dikhaya na..mooh tod dungi tuhmara..samjhe!

She shouted and left while he sadly collected his gift and wiped his tears.

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Navya's eyes felled on Nandini who was waiting for the public bus saving herself from the tough heat of the sun. She smiled and went upto her.
Navya: " Hi. Nandini..kaisi hoh?

She exclaimed and Nandini faintly smiled at her. Navya opened up umbrella and took her in shelter.

Navya: " Wese..bura mat manna..aapke papa..baap hai kasai..apni beti ki itni bhi chinta nahi

She said and Nandini ignored her adjusting her while she continued.
" Pehle tuhme ghar sai nikal diya..aur toh aur Manik koh naukri sai bhi.

She said and bit her tongue while Nandini jerkly turned to her.
Nandu: " Nikal diya..matlab...!!!!

She asked with confused face and Navya showed her teeths with frowns at her face.

Navya: " Wese Manik nai batane sai mana kiya thaa..phir bhi..haa woh kaafi pehle nikal diya kyuki tum ushki biwi hoh na ab. Nafrat karte hai tumse tuhmare papa isliye. Ab ghar toh chalana padega isliye Manik ab Cabir kai saath ushke garage mai kaam karta hai

She said and Nandini was deprived of words. How could her Appa could do that. Just because she was attached to Manik.

Navya: " Manik koh tuhmari bahut chinta hai..khoon paseena ek kar raha hai. Wese woh boxing bhi continue kar sakta thaa..par dimag mai chot lagi hai..boxing karna mana hai ushe...

Navya was blabbering while Nandini was lost in her own thoughts. How she wished she would just come under a car and die right there only. Her Appa had snatched everything away from her.

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Edited by manancraze - 9 years ago

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Doh Lafjo Ki Kahanni(Part-2)

It was her birthday but Nandini was just sitting lonely and crying silently. She was cursing the day when she came on this planet. She was missing her Amma who left her hands when she was just 6 years old.

Nandu: " I miss you Amma.

She whispered and wiped her tears harshly. Manik entered inside and knocked at the door. She looked at him and ignored. He again knocked and she got pissed off by now.

Nandu: " Kya hai..chain sai akele mai toh rehne doh...

She shouted and he got scared a bit. He slowly took out a small cake from his behind and smiled at her.
She stood up and he went upto her. He lit the candle and placed it infront of her. She was glaring at him with so much of hate in her swollen eyes. She pushed away the cake due to which the candle hit his hand.

Manik: " Ahh...

He hissed in pain as the flame burnt his hand hard yet she was mad on him.

Nandu: " Tang aa gayi hu tuhmare ish natak sai..band karo please. Tuhmare care..tuhmare notes..joh chahiye..seedha bol kyu nahi dete...

She shouted and he stared at her blankly.

Nandu: " bolo kya chahiye. Husband hone ka right...You want to claim me haina..then loh...

She shouted..grabbed her pallu and pulled away with sudden force. He jerkly turned away from her.
Nandu: " Kya hua..yahi chahiye na tuhme. Sabko meri life control karni hai..tumhe bhi karni hai..karo naa...

She shouted and started pushing him away harshly.
Nandu: " Karte kyu nahi..yaa ishhe jyada chahiye tuhme..bolo..speak up!

She shouted pushing him and finally he broke his long silence making her shock to the core.

Manik: " Aahhh..! Aahh..aa..Aahh!

He shouted but with no words. Yes..he had voice inside him but the voice were deprived of words. He couldn't speak. He was mute. God hadn't blessed him to speak like everyone did. But he never ever complaint in his whole life. He accepted it and lived on his simple life.
Nandini was staring at him with shock in her face. He knelt down crying this time and she too knelt before him.
Nandu: " T..T..Tum..b..bol nahi..bol nahi sakte...

She whispered and he nodded in no. Guilt formed inside her. How much she had hated him with no reason. She was blind infront of her Appa's hate which is why Manik had an culprit image in her eyes.

Manik: " Ahh..ahha..ahh

He gestured that he had no intentions to harm her. She found a bit difficult to understand him at first but he put all his effort to put what he was trying to speak.

Nandu: " Chup chap..meri nafrat koh jhelte aaye tum..kyu...

She asked and he gently yet hesitantly wiped her tears.
Manik: " Ahh...

He signalled towards her and she made a confused look.
Nandu: " Main ?

She asked and he nodded with smile. He gestured her and then to his heart. He touched her manglsutra and smiled.
Manik: " Aahh..ah...

He gestured her that she was his responsibility now. It wasn't her fault that she hated him. He knows she didn't hated him but hated the situation which took place which she didn't wanted to be.
Nandu: " I..I'm sorry..I...

She fumbled and he placed his hands on her mouth..gesturing her not to cry. She wiped her tears and he made her wear her pallu hesitantly.
Manik: " Ahh...

He signalled her to wait and left outside while she stood up and blankly waited for his return.

He came back with with box in his hands which had decorated items filled in it. He placed the box and made her sit on the bed gently.She smiled weakly as she saw him decorating the room with ballons and wind chimes. He placed her favorite Lilies everywhere and again rushed out and came back with another small cake in his hand and as usual a note in it. She chuckled and read it out.

" Mujhe pata thaa aap ish cake koh bhi phek doge. Lekin aapka birthday bhi hai. Chinta mat kijiye fridge mai aur cake hai.Aur please aapko kuch bhi chahiye aur bol dijiyega "
She laughed softly and he ruffled his hair shyly. She was laughing like mad and then started crying badly. He got panicked and knelt before her wiping her tears.

Nandu: " Mere itne nafrat kai baad bhi..thank you..thank you so much

She whispered and hugged him tightly. He hesitantly rubbed her back while she tightened his grip around him.

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Manik was working in garage happily and continuously staring at the tiffin which Nandini had specially packed for him. But his smile was for short duration. Navya came and said something which shaked him to the core.

Doctor: " Kafi bura accident hua hai..she's critical. Immediate surgery toh kardi par her stomach is still criticall

Doctor announced and this broke Manik to the core.
" It can affect her Manik. Dusri surgery ki liye we have to shift her and yeh jaldi nahi hua toh..she's in danger

He said and Manik let out tears falled through his chocolaty brown eyes.

Navya: " Kya hua Manik..kuch chupa rahe hoh...

She asked weakly and he nodded in no. Meanwhile nurses came to shift her. They dragged her away while he softly let her hand go from him.

" Surgery kai liye kamse kam 8 lakhs tak lagege. It's a major one..jyada waqt nahi tuhmare paas. Bacha loh apni biwi koh

Doctors statement echoed in his mind and he harshly wiped his tears and left out.

Cabir: " Pagal hai tu Manik..boxing karega..abe teri jaan jaah sakti hai yaar...

Cabir shouted but he nodded in no and gestured that he had to fight. He'll do anything to save her cause she was his responsibility.
Cabir: " Manik..soch leh..ekbar please

Cabir said calmly and he smiled weakly and stood up.
Manik: " Ahh...

He exclaimed and clutched his fists. It was do or die situation for him. Ready to die but he had do it. For her..her sake. She was his complete world now and he didn't wanted that world to break down. He composed himself and rushed out.

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The refri blewd the final ring and Manik was ready to put all in his effort. His rival started punching him but somehow he caught hold of him and started giving him back his best shots.

Nandu: " What?! Aur tum logo nai ushe jane diya...

Nandini cried as Navya couldn't keep up the secret. She screamed badly and Navya tried to compose her.
Nandu: " Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Mujhe ushke paas leh chalo jaldi

She said and Navya knewd arguing with her was of no use. She pulled off all her syrings and wire and hopped out of bed. Fumbling with her steps and catching her stomach she rushed out of her room only to find her Appa glaring at her.

Nandu: " I'm in no mood to fight with you. Mujhe apne husband kai paas kai paas jana hai

She said and rushed beside him while he snapped her back.

Nandu's Appa: " Zinda bachega..toh jaogi naah

He said coldly and Nandini frozed at her place. She knewd what wad going on that man's head. She turned to him and glared with all hate and curse she could hold.

Here Manik was coated in blood yet he was not ready to give up. His vission were blurred and strength were almost gone but still the only thing going on his head was to save her life..to save his world. Cabir was almost crying seing his condition yet cheering up for him.

Nandu: " How could you...

Nandini shouted and grabbed her so called father's coller. He glared at her but she tightened her grip.
Nandu:" Kaise kar sakte hoh aap yesha..kyu kyu kyu!

She cried but his expression didn't change. It was same cold like anything. She pushed him away with all her force and wiped her tears harshly.
Nandu:" Mark my words Mr.Durgeshwara Murthy..if anything happens to Manik. I swear..I'm gonna rip off you're head...

She warned and this time he gulped his saliva in fear of his daughters fear and hateness.

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THUDD! Manik gasped as he felled hard on ground. His stamena was all lost and moreover his brain was loosing its sense. He couldn't see anything nor had the strength to respond to any of the voices echoing around. He slowly closed his eyes until his ear caught soft yet broken voice of her.
Nandu:" Manik..!!!!!

He heard her call. Somehow fluttering his eyes he opened and saw a glimpse of her far behind the crowds. He let out his warm breath for a moment and tried moving his body which was still like statue. He was glaring at his rival who was ready to eat him up. With fierce lion look in his eyes he formed his position . She wanted to stop him but in vain..she somehow came out of the crowd and saw a huge guy falling right infront of him. She gasped loudly and and palmed her face.She saw him panting hard right infront of her. He had won. He had won the ultimate battle only for her. She went up to him and he handed her a note making her frown
" Pata nahi yeh padthe waqt mai zinda bachu yaa nahi par mai itna zanta hu ki joh bhi aap kabhi phir sai apni aankho sai aansu nahi nikalegi. Aapki sundar sundar aankho mai yeh moti moti aansu suit nahi karte nah. Agar bol pata toh doh lafz thai joh hamesha sai aapko kehna chahta thaa par kismat sayad mujhe yeh mauka kabhi nah deh..par agar deh toh woh doh lafz bas yahi honge ki mai aap meri zindagi hoh..sab kuch hoh..mujhe apna jaan gawana pyaara hai lekin aapki nahi..kyuki..."

Nandu:" Kyuki kya...

She asked with teary voice and he smile weakly.
Manik: " Ahh..( He gestured)
Nandu:" I..( She said copying him )
"Manik Ahh..( He gestured his heart and she too)

Manik" Ahh..( He gestured towards her and she smiled shedding tears at him. She ran and hopped into his arms while he twirled her around
Nandu:" I love you too ( She whispered and slowly closed her eyes as she loosed her conscious and fainted in his arms )

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..Nandini lit the candle and Manik was about to blow it when she stopped him. He made a confused face and she smiled at him.
Nandu: Pehle aankh band karke..wish mango

She said and he chuckled at her. She made a baby face and he closed his eyes to grant a wish.

..After 3 months of her surgery they were celebrating Manik's birthday. He was praying still while she smirk and immediately placed a soft kiss on his lips. He smiled and she blushed hard.
Nandu: " Manik..kya hai

Nandini complaint as Manik had closed her eyes. He took her to their bedroom. He opened her eyes and she gasped hard.
Nandu: " Beautiful...

she exclaimed as she caressed her paint beautifully painted on wall. Suddenly her mind got clicked of something and she turned to him
Nandu: " Ush din joh tum mere liye gift laye thai aur maine phek diya tha..woh kaha hai

She asked and he looked here and there. He went outside and came back with the same gift in his hand.Unwrapping the gift she found a small ring box in it. She chuckled and opened it.
Nandu: " Apne hatho sai banaya...

She asked softly and he nodded looking at the floor. She smiled and took out a handmade wire ring with small flower instead of diamond fitted on it.
Nandu: " Toh ab..apne hatho sai pehnaoge nahi

She asked and he walked up to her.She cried as he slid the ring on her finger. Though it wasn't high price. The value of it..the love filled inside it was very precious for her. She cupped his face and gently placed her lips on him. Kissing each other softly yet passionatly they broke apart
Nandu: " Thank you for everything..thank you for giving me this much love and care. Tum jante nahi tuhmare liye izzat aur pyaar joh mere andar bhara hai..kitna bada hai..thank you once again...

She broked and hid in his embrace.
Manik: " Ahh...

He uttered gesturing her that it was nothing he did for her. Though he lacked of money and power like of her Appa. But with his power of love care and respect for her there were more coming in their life which was very much worth for her and her worth of smile was enough for him.

AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER...!!!!!

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the OS
Manik loved nandu without expecting anything in return from her
N at last nandu even realized her feelings for him 😊

Take care
N Stay Blessed
😊