A dark Manan SS 'Heart_Fidge ocean' part 3 on pg 13..3/6 - Page 7

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bangfarju

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Posted: 9 years ago

very interesting
one part is past
one part is present and present mai
bhi one part is nandini's flashback
iska matlab present mai bhi past wow
well penned but why nandini shocked
to hear her marriage? and how manan
are together? so much confusion.

plz plz update soon
thanks for pm

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aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow... damn awsum update..luved it... though a bit confusing.. bt still mazza aaya padne mei.. plzz pm me

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Uff i am so confused
Ek taraf MaNan ki cute scenes hai ...
Dusri taraf nandu is wid her friends
And manik going to take revenge from a girl
Yeh kya ho raha hai
Plzz btao na
Thnkz 4 the pm

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ankurparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice story after long time forum became green green (hara bhara ) with ur story but only confusion is which is past and present. Their are three part
1.manik and his friend
2.nandini aur navya
3.manik aur nandini
Yaar thoda to clue do. Very nice story plz update soon

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..paarsaa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

banner added on page 1 do tell me how's it??

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shaan...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update...

Manan's convo was nice...

Flashback was nice...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

Edited by shaan... - 9 years ago

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ROOP0605

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing

interesting

thanks 4 PM

waiting 4 next part

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..paarsaa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22
Bit bg with exams..

mere end ho gaye ...yeee

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow!!Awesum stry dear...

Read both prts in a go together...

d concpt ws really suprb..But i am seriously confused dear..

Cnt understand wt s happening...

May b read in bsy na..I will again read it in calm mind...

Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Cuming 2 updates, little bit confusing...

Manik s playboy...In sum scenes manan momnts r so cute...

I think Manan momnts r in past...Now may b nandu s for revenge or sumthing...

Manik vid friendz 2 teach d grl her a lesson...

Is dat grl is nandu???Evn though it is litle bit confusing,D concpt is really suprb...

Eagerly waitin 4 d nxt updates,..Hope d confusions will fade off...

But u penned it awesumly dear...U r seriously n awesum writer...

Do continue...Waitin 4 nxt update dear...

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zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome part
I may be lte in commenting bcoz my sister n nephew had come. So plzz dnt mind.
But sooner or later i vl surely read it plzz dnt stop pm

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