A dark Manan SS 'Heart_Fidge ocean' part 3 on pg 13..3/6 - Page 8

This story is nice.
Completely different concept.
But so much confusing.
I'm not able to connect parts together.
Bcz there are running different phases altogether.
So I'm little bit confuse what is happening.
If u make it little bit clear. I would enjoy more,
Otherwise this story is realy something.
Next part soon plz.

so nice
superb
many things are happening
together. so many mystery
interesting very interesting
well penned

thanks for pm
continued asap
don't be so late

What a way of writing dear very unique

Wooww
awwweessoommee
luved it
Manan scenes r reallyy damn gooodd
flashback was awsm
but in present Manik did that wid Nandu n usse kuch pata v naa chala howww???? Its strange...plzzz explain dont skip beautifull scenes of Manan's lyf plzzz..add that in Manik's pov plzzz little
extain and Explain Manan makeout scenes plzzz

in past Manik was a bad boy sooo how he changed or may b not its not cleard till now...but he ignored that bitch in present sooo may b he changed...
Nandu is tooo scared of Manik whyy???
Is it for age differens or something elss at the same tym she also luv him very much hope Manik uska heart brk naa kare...Manan k relation kya h??? Lots of Qs...
Hope jaldi clear hoga,.
Want more n more n more more Manan scenes ...plzz explain all thr beautiful scenes plzzz