A dark Manan SS 'Heart_Fidge ocean' part 3 on pg 13..3/6 - Page 5

Don't end dis story...

Awesome update. Manan's intro was superb. Manik is a star and nandini is a school girl. This story is different and interesting. Curious to read further. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.

No Dear mid m chorne k bare m sochnaa v mat plzzz m begging u... Jo start kia h usse khatam krna hi h... N u r awsm writter yar plzzz essa mat karoo plzzz...

Avi confuusion h but slowlyy i know tum wo sabb clear karr loge i know..plzzz plzzz continue and complete plzzz
i just luv the concept..
Want to know Manan's relation n equetion in ths story plzzz
its interesting Nandu is a school girl Manik is star n spoilt brat... Why Nandu calling Manik as Sahib..?? Want to know all

just add heading which part is past n which is present..
Best to yahi hoga ..agar story Manan meet se hi suru ho fir sabb clear hoo jyegaa...plzzz dont giveup plzzz continue...itna sochk ye awsm story start kia esse choro mat..
Dont dissipoint ur readers plzzz just continue n complete plzzz

No Dear mid m chorne k bare m sochnaa v mat plzzz m begging u... Jo start kia h usse khatam krna hi h... N u r awsm writter yar plzzz essa mat karoo plzzz...

Avi confuusion h but slowlyy i know tum wo sabb clear karr loge i know..plzzz plzzz continue and complete plzzz
i just luv the concept..
Want to know Manan's relation n equetion in ths story plzzz
its interesting Nandu is a school girl Manik is star n spoilt brat... Why Nandu calling Manik as Sahib..?? Want to know all

just add heading which part is past n which is present..
Best to yahi hoga ..agar story Manan meet se hi suru ho fir sabb clear hoo jyegaa...plzzz dont giveup plzzz continue...itna sochk ye awsm story start kia esse choro mat..
Dont dissipoint ur readers plzzz just continue n complete plzzz
try to understand
plzzz continue plzzz

It's up to u

Thankyou for continuing this story
The chapter is too good 😊
Eagarly waiting to read how you unfold further story 😛
Keep writing

Parsaa update was good.
But I am getting confused what is happening when becoz you're writing story in three parts with different view points .
In one part manan are together
Another part Nandini is partying with friends
Another manik is behind some girl for revenge with his friends
So just clarify what's happening.
Continue soon

First of all.. plsss continue it. its nice... N back to update. update was interesting.. But manik n uske frndz us ladki k saath kya krne vale h :* Sooo Nandini is just comfortable with manik. she only talks with him.. so she is pretending to sleep. hmm may be manik was habitual of her ya phir something more. nandini ne sb cutting ko scratch kiya. hmmm. manik kissed her...hmm but why. its quite amazing. waiting for next update. THANks for pm.. !! Stay blessed !!

nice update... manik is after somegirl fr revenge.. but Whr did he found nandini?? he cares fr her.. I guess some unknown feelings...but maintaining his ruthless nature