A dark Manan SS 'Heart_Fidge ocean' part 3 on pg 13..3/6

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A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Its confusing

plzzz
atleast heading do kahase kaha tak present n kahase kaha tak past h???

desperatellyy waiting for Next parts

plzz write little simple means from the starting of Manan plzzz
want more n more n more more Manan plzzz

plzz update Next ASAP
update jaldi

Want to know Manan ka relation kya h???
Plzzz add more Manan
Manan ko alag mat karnaa

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soothu

@soothu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Manik...spoiled brat..that girl need publicity..so she blamed manik misbehsved with her...my head is spining..

Pain in heart???

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parthsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Its too good so confusing but m sure u hsv planned well

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MSIKura

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Great story concept. Hard to imagine what is what which brings up the high curiosity level about the story.
Like it very much.

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SONIAGHOSH

@SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Awesome Update love it continue soon

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..paarsaa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: parthmanikniti
heu i read ur all stories...and I am commenting for the first time. ...I love ur Jane tune kya khi and this story so much pls update soon pls. ...

its Jane kya tune kahi !!😆

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

this was amazing
manik is spoil brat😉
and who was that girl...😲

but he cares for nandini😲
a lil bit confusing
but i know you will clear this confusion soon

thanks for pm dear
continue soon

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..paarsaa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

I started writing this story as dark only bcoz u guys want it !! now I update ch1 but instead of commenting u guys are keep sending me PMS to clear confusion ...OK I understand its confusing but tell me what do I do? bcoz gir me dark story is like this i never read any dark story ...pehle hi am not good writer upar se I started its making new story ...😕 ...if u guys are not okk with this so tell me I will end this !!waise hi I am very mody ...mera mood hota hain to likhti hun warns nhi ...writing is not my passion its just that I am testing my abilities ...so olz tell me should I cont or end ..bcoz it will save my one hour to think and write ...

Thanks ...