A dark Manan SS 'Heart_Fidge ocean' part 3 on pg 13..3/6

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parthsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Great parasa update soon n pm me plzzz

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Cooki

@Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

It's awesome update dear..
The story is unique...
Nandini is care taker...
Manik is always rude but now talking to her politely..
She is harassed..
She wants to be with manik...
What will happen!??
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..

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bangfarju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

wow
superb prologue
interesting,mujai toh much
samajae nahi aya a hoa kya?
plz update soon
thanks for pm

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zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nice prologue...
Waiting to read more.
Thnx for the pm

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shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

woww ..parsaa new story
loved the prologue
nandini is kid
and manik is her boss😲
a new concept
and dark story
can't wait to read further

thanks for pm dear

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soothu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Sahabji..thats unique ...

Waiting for update

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..paarsaa..

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: A12609z
Plzzz plzz start the story from Manan plzzz
fir story k continue hote hi sab clear hoo jayegaa
CS add kar do to or v acha hoogaa

meri story me character skatch hota hi nhi hai ..
n don't worry I will maintain my track record do teen month laga he ramzaan eid kya bakra eid tak first chapter update kar hi dungi !!
keep support me like this 😆🤣

Edited by paarsaa - 9 years ago