CONNECTED HEARTS NOTE ON PAGE 13 (29 JUNE) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Hey!!!
Thanks for the PM!
Lovely start to the story!
Oooh suspense, can't wait to see what will happen!
Continue soon!!!:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
amazing start
nandu is fan of manik wow
loved abhi-nandu bond
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update. Manan's intro was superb. Abhi rocked.nandini is a fan of manik. Bro sis bond was mindblowing. Thanks for pm.
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Amazing update...
Nandini likes manik...
Luved it...
PLz continue soon...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome update loved it continues soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Manan's intro was superb. Abhi rocked.nandini is a fan of manik. Bro sis bond was mindblowing. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing
Stay blessed😊



thanks archu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update
Nandini is a fan of manik
Loved abhi and Nandini's bond
What is going to happen
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
CHAPTER 2:
They all went to jogging and were enjoying a lot in early morning weather of Delhi and they even returned the hotel before it was late.

(dont know y pics are not getting uploaded but giving u the links in the next post but see the bottle pic for sure otherwise u wont understand the chapter)


(Black is abhi attire and cement one is dhruv attire)


CABIR


MANIK


They were about to enter the hotel but manik received a call and he went to answer it and remaining moved inside the hotel.

They all moved inside and were shocked to see the scenario there.

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Nandini came out from her room all freshed and she went down

N: did abhimanyu murthy came back from jog??

She asked the reception member and yeah ur guess is correct nandini was in the same hotel in which abhi is staying.

Receptionist: no mam can o know who are u so I will I form him

N: I am his sister and no need to Inform him I will give him a surprise

She left from there leaving behind a smiling receptionist.

She was sitting in the waiting Hall for abhi and was turning magazines she found manik interview.

She read the interview and spoke

N: so u like red and see I am wearing red today


Nandini smiled and soon her smile vanished as she saw a old man feeling difficult to breathe and has collapsed on the ground unconscious.

Nandini rushed to him and now all the hotel members came there and nandini pushed all of them and came towards the old man.

She kept her hands on his chest and found that his body was bigger in size near the chest and it shows that the gas formed Inside his body was not going out and if it continues he may die.

N: can I have first aid kit now

The manager of the hotel went to get it but the old man situation was getting even more worse and she found a bottle there and she immediately went to the bottle and took the cap of the bottle.



She took the cap from the bottle and went towards the old man and took her diamond ring out and opened the shirt buttons of the old man and made a hole near his heart with her ring as the diamond ring can cut anything na.

Now she kept the cap on the hole and pressed it on his body and the gas stores in his body was going out with a sound.

Finally after 5 mins all the gas went out from his body and slowly the old man gained his senses

Man: thanks beta

N: it's my duty Dada and now how are u

Man: I am fine beta

N: yeah just don't take any stress and take ur tablets regularly

Man: kk beta

N: acha Dada no stress haa

Man: sure

Nandini smiled at him and helped him to stand and after checking his well being once again the old man moved and nandini was about to go but she felt a hand on her shoulder.

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As soon as abhi cabir and dhruv entered the hotel they found an old man going unconscious and they rushed to him and before they could do something they found nandini there and was shocked to see her here.

They were still in shock and they came out of their shock when she finished the treatment to the old man.

They went near to her and abhi kept his hand on her shoulder and as soon as nandini turned towards abhi.

He hugged her tight and she too responded equally. After sometime they broke the hug.

N: bhai

Ab: doll thum yeha

N: yeah came for an operation here and thought to surprise u did u like it

Ab: like toh kya I loved it and I missed u a lot

Saying this he kissed her forehead and then she turned towards cabir and ran in his arms and they broke the hug after sometime

N: bhai no 2

C: meri maa esa mat bulav na mujhe

N: kyu

C: arey it is not NIce na

N: it is nice haina dhruv

Saying this she looked at dhruv and he nodded his head and he side hugged her.

They were all having a happy time when their attention turned towards to manik who was standing at entrance shocked.




So here is the second chapter

hope u all like it

love

prathyusha

Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Black is abhi attire and cement one is dhruv attire--https://em.wattpad.com/9c0496c4faa56119d771bb0d88e7a6671cf1b1a9/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f7472304942304a417a6c6d3954413d3d2d3235323236303734352e313434623064633734373439393263342e6a7067?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280


cabir-----------https://em.wattpad.com/386fe56bf24fd3c97f80b1d8303d786d0e51e5f2/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f62483063617666784164596169413d3d2d3235323236303734352e313434623064643966373337326261642e6a7067?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280

manik:------------https://em.wattpad.com/4b7cc71d862d620e77ae73c296dde3aacb26aaf3/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f796b6f4c6137527754376b7161513d3d2d3235323236303734352e313434623064653039303363653238382e6a7067?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280

nandini-----------https://em.wattpad.com/2968048d9a5e9f018edf432a9af1bfc4c24253a4/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f743853376c73436c387a43564e413d3d2d3235323236303734352e313434623064656335336664313765372e6a7067?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280

bottle-------------https://em.wattpad.com/45ad5e1eec9a501ee5362e7d61e9b8c8c8c6d421/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f6841426d4f5145324756783158673d3d2d3235323236303734352e313434623064663066623963666262392e706e67?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280


here are the links
Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nice update
Thanks for pm
😊

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