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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:

It was morning 5 and a boy was continuously trying to wake a lazy head who was not in a mood to wake up as they need to go for jocking as they have to keep themselves fit.

But that sleepy head is not in a mood to wake up as it was their fault routine to wake him in a unique style and the boy who was trying to wake the sleepy head pulled the duvet from him and this irritated the sleepy head
And he spoke

Sleepy head: arey abhi sone do na mujhe

Yeah the boy who was trying to wake the sleepy head is abhimanyu murthy the vice captain of indian cricket team and he was getting daam pissed now as this sleepy head is getting on his nerves now.

Ab: manik utho aur varna don't blame me later saying I dint wake u

Yes the lazy head was manik who can do anything for his sleep.

M: nahi abhi mujhe sone do na

Ab: listen if u don't woke up na then u will not be fit and u will be out of team and can't play cricket for some days

These words were enough for manik to woke up him and he sat with a jerk

M: no yaar I can't afford to loose cricket in my life it is the most important thing in my life

Ab: isiliye toh bola and now just go and fresh and we need to leave and even cabir and druv are ready and waiting for us

M: yeah just give me 5

Ab: kk I will be downstairs come fast

Manik nodded and went to washroom and abhi went downstairs to meet cabir and druv.

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A girl was sleeping on her bed and she was ready to wake but waiting for a call to wake her up as her daily routine.

Soon her mobile started to ring and she took the mobile which was just beside her in her hands and answered the call.

Girl: morning abhi bhai

Ab: so meri nandu uth gaya

Yes the girl was nandini only the most successful doctor in Mumbai and she was a little sister of abhi

N: haa

Ab: arey go and fresh na

N: haa did u all woke up and ready for joking

Ab: yeah and now need to go bye bacha love u

N: bye bhai love u too

She disconnected the call and looked at her wallpaper which was the pic of abhi and manik and our little nandu is a big fan of manik as he is a good player and a good human being.

N: good morning manik

Saying this she went to freshen.

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Abhi disconnected the call and at the same time manik entered the place where all were waiting for him

C: u should come after 30 mins na

M: kyu??

C: vuski baad sab log uth jati and we cant reach hotel back

D: haa manik baba we are in Delhi now not in Mumbai na

M: yeah so now let's go fast

Ab: u move just give me 10

M: kyu???

Ab: mukti ko call karke avunga

M: I am her bhai so at least don't do this all in front of me

Ab: isiliye toh Maine bola ki u go first

Manik shook his head in disbelief and all the other three moved out for jocking.

But little manik knew that this day will be the life changing day for him and this will be a dreadful and a memorable one to him.






SO here is the first chapter

do tell me how is it

pms tomorrow with others

love

prathyusha


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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
suspence suspence suspence

i hate suspence

plzz update nxt xhappy jaldi jaldii am little impatient actually am impatient

this ff is really unique i love it

plzz update soon

by the wayy awsmm chappy love it
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awsmmm


Superrr


Aww nandu said good mng to his pic

Lovely sis bond

Again suspense

Hmm intersting


Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Lovely update"...
Abhi n Nandu ka bond is damn cute

Looking Frwd to c how manikas life is going to change

Conti soon
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice start...
Nandu like Manik...
Waiting for next...
Update soon...
prathyushaeluri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kyaramalhotra

suspence suspence suspence

i hate suspence

plzz update nxt xhappy jaldi jaldii am little impatient actually am impatient

this ff is really unique i love it

plzz update soon

by the wayy awsmm chappy love it
:)




thanks a lot dear
prathyushaeluri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Awsmmm


Superrr


Aww nandu said good mng to his pic

Lovely sis bond

Again suspense

Hmm intersting


Coun sooon




thanks a lot jamuna
prathyushaeluri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Lovely update"...

Abhi n Nandu ka bond is damn cute

Looking Frwd to c how manikas life is going to change

Conti soon
:)



thanks a lot dear
prathyushaeluri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow nice start...
Nandu like Manik...
Waiting for next...
Update soon...



thanks a ton pari
prathyushaeluri thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazinggg start
Lovd it
Continue soon


thanks a lot dear

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