#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

PART B :

I was running behind bhabhi in the whole house because she scared the shit out of me... when I told her what I feel for manik she just signalled me that manik was standing behind me at the door but actually no one was there. At one point of time was got soo soo scared that he heard me and bhabhi was having the fun of her life by teasing me.

"bhabhi stop.." I yelled again but she showed me her tongue and ran away...arghhh... I was about to catch her but at the right moment rishu bhaiya came and saved her by standing in front of me covering her. He held me by shoulders and said

"kyun marae biwi kae peechae padi hai.. go and deal with your manik.." he said and winked at me and I groaned.. ssly... I started hitting him playfully of course I was NOT blushing... why would I ..huhh motu monster kahika.. holding my hands rishu bhaiya hugged me and kissed my forehead and said

"beta tu khush hai naa manik kae saath..??" I loved it when he used to address me as their kid and they treated me also like one.. I nodded my head in a yes and hugged him more tightly and said "I miss you all so much there.." and tears formed in my eyes.. this was the routine whe I was at home... me and bhabhi used to talk about everything and anything when bhai was busy in office and when he came home we 3 used to sit and talk our hearts out. I really missed them in Mumbai... not that im not happy there but still this was what I was used to for 20 years of my life.

Night at dinner table :

"beta yahan around 10kms there is a water fall.. why don't you all go there tomorrow..." appa suggested at the table. I was least interested in their convo because after a long time Amms and bhabhi were feeding me like old times.

"sure appa... Hum sab wahan kal morning start ho jayangae and we will return by evening then.." manik said being the good boy.

"rishu car aur driver arrange kardo inkae liyae.. otherwise they will get tired because of the journey.." appa said and bhai nodded in a yes.. aww how cute were they both.

Everyone was enjoying the south Indian food specially cabir.. hehehe.. we both were foodies in the gang and manik was also one but still me and cabir stood in first place.

Same night:

Me Aliya mukthi were sharing one room and abhi manik cabir and Dhruv were sharing another room.

We all girls were talking about something when there was a knock on the door. I frowned thinking who it would be and opened the door to find abhi standing there along with Dhruv. I smirked at raised my eyebrow asking them what and the ever shy boy Dhruv replied with a sheepish smile

"vo.. we both were thinking that... you know Aliya and me.. vo.." he was looking here and there and was trying hard not to blush but was blushing.. so cute.. I pulled his cheeks and said turning towards Aliya and mukthi who were eagerly waiting for me to tell who was there on the door

"girls.. your boyfriends have come.. and I permit you to go and come back safely.." I said in a dramatic way and mukthi rolled her eyes. She slapped my shoulder and immediately hugged abhi and he kissed her forehead and winked at me and left. After the couples left I was alone in my room and I was just lying on the bed and was playing with my teddy talking to him about manik and me... you know teddy was my favourite.. I couldn't take him with me last time but now I will make sure he comes back with me. I was cuddling my cutie teddy when suddenly I felt two hands encircling my waist and I gasped.. it was manik. He pulled me close to him and our bodies were so close that even air couldn't pass in between. He tangled his legs with mine and kissed my shoulder and dug his face in my hair and whispered in my ear

"meri itni yaad aa rahi thi toh you could have called me.." and nuzzled more in my neck and I held the teddy more tightly. I was holding my teddy and manik was holding me.. hehehe.. he pulled me more close as I was giggling because of his feather kisses.

"chodo uss teddy ko." He ordered and I frowned and slapped his hand which was around my waist.

"how dare you say that.." I too replied in the same tone.

"nandu.. you cant cuddle a teddy bear.." he said in an irritating tone and I turned to face him with the teddy still in my hands. Now my cutie was in between us.

"why cant I .. I love him .. so I will cuddle him.. and you cant order me to stop doing that.." I declared and started playing with my teddys cheeks and his cute nose. Manik frowned more and said pulling it from my hands

"no you cant.. you can do all this only with me..not with this stupid teddy bear.." he was about to put my teddy on the table beside my bed and that was it for me. I pulled it back with full force..kept it aside and before he could register what I was doing I held his both hands above his head and I was sitting on his stomach. His mouth was open in a perfect O.

"nan.." he was about to say something but what I did next was enough for his voice to ditch him. I leaned close to his face and brushed my lips with his for a little time. I kissed his forehead his eyes his cheeks and finally came to his lips and gave a slight peck. He closed his eyes in anticipation and I giggled seeing his condition. And before he could register anything I jumped off him and walked to the balcony locking the door behind. And when he understood what happened he got up groaning In frustration and started searching for me.

"open the door.." I heard him shouting and I giggled but didn't turn to look at him.

"nandini.." he called me again and I turned to him and raised my eyebrow smirking.

"please open the door.." he said in a pleading tone and my eyes were locked with his and as if I was hypnotised and walked to the door and opened it. He came towards me and in the next second I was pinned to the wall and his lips were on mine. He was kissing me harshly biting sucking and smooching.. and finally after a good 20 minutes he broke the kiss and said resting his forehead against mine

"never.. never ever tease me like that.." he said in a warning tone and I nodded my head in positive. He lifted me up from the ground and carried me to the bed and he laid down beside me and we both slept cuddling in eachothers arms.

scroll down for next... picture abhi baki hai marae doston.. 😆😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part C :

Next morning :

Everyone was ready by 6 as we were really excited to go to the waterfalls. Mom and Amms packed lots and lots of food stuffs as on our way we will not find hygienic food. Preethi bhabhi and Rishu bhai also wanted to come with us but I don't know why they dropped that idea in last minute. Yeah they had to.. bhabhi was feeling dizzy all of a sudden. Mom scolded her for not taking care of herself and also bhai for ignoring bhabhi's health. Bhai immediately glared at preethi bhabhi and said

"badi maa.. I told her to rest because she was not well from 2 days but no.. madam ko aur bhagna tha.. she was saying "rishu I am fine.. don't worry..." bhai imitated bhabhi and she slapped his arm angrily.

"no more arguments preethi we are going to the doctor and that's final.." bhai declared and the next moment picked her up in his arms despite her shouts to leave her.

It was a 3 hour drive to the waterfall and we took a break in middle for breakfast.

Everyone was super happy seeing the breath taking view of the water falls. Soon we all were in the water splashing water and playing. It brought soo many old memories back. I used to come here with here with my friends and we used to stay here for a while like a picnic with our families and wow.. I missed this place so much. Manik came close to me and pulled me close by waist and my eyes widened in shock as everyone was around.

"manik.." I said looking around and he kept his clod finger on my lips and nodded his head in a no. I was just looking deep into his eyes so was he.. I just wish he says those 3 magical words.. now I was desperate to hear those words from his mouth. And suddenly pulling me from my thoughts he gave a tight peck on my lips taking me by surprise and my cheeks turned red instantly. I hugged him tightly hiding my blush and heard him chuckle. All of a sudden water as being splashed on me and manik from all the sides and that's when I realised that all our friends were surrounding us trapping me and manik in middle and were splashing water with so much force that I could hardly keep my eyes open.

"stop it guys.." manik said holding me more close but they paid no heed and kept on throwing water on us.

"saloon... humhae yahan chod kae tum dono romance kar rahae the naa.. ab bhukto.." I heard cabir saying.

"haan.. ek dusare ko aaisae dekh rahae the ki agar ek baar eyes blink karanagae toh they will vanish.. wah bhai wah.." mukthi seconded cabir.

"buddy this is not fair.. yahan hum sab milkae fun karnae aayae the aur tu khud akalae mazae lae raha tha.. very bad.." now it was Dhruv

"bilkul besharam hai yeh manik.. chodo math usko.." abhi also was teasing us

"guys.. common more faster.." Aliya said and I was just holding manik more tightly.

After a long and never ending session we all came out of water and sat on the mattresses for eating something as everyone was dead tired. We had our lunch amidst a lot of chit chatting and we laid on the mattresses to rest for some time before going back. After an hour we got up and were getting into the car. Cabir sat beside the driver and me manik and abhi steeled on the last seat and finally it was Mukthi Dhruv Aliya.

I don't know when I dozed off because of the tiring day. By the time I woke up everyone in the car was sleeping and cabir was snoring lightly.. hehe .. I giggled a little and I was resting my head on the window with manik in my lap and abhi on his back.. abhi is definitely going to have a very bad back ache. Aliya was on Dhruv's lap and mukthi on his shoulder. He was almost sandwiched between the two girls. I smiled looking at their crazy sleeping positions and then my looks went to the little crazy big stupid idiot donkey monster sleeping in my lap wrapping his hands around my waist and his face dug into my tummy. He was looking like a baby.. pouting slightly and frowns on his forehead don't know what he is thinking even in his sleep. I slowly ran my fingers through his hair and surprisingly his frowns disappeared and he had a small smile on his face, which reflected on my face too. I was running my fingers in his hairs and he relaxed under my touch and snuggled more into mu tummy making me shiver at his touch. By the time we reached home it was 8 .. we quickly freshen up and had our dinner telling amms amma appa bhai and bhabhi what all we did.. and thank you Aaiyappa my friend kept quite about our private but not so private moment. And finally we all retired to our rooms to have a nice sleep. ( me mukthi and Aliya in one room and boys in the other).


do check my new story : ( a sequel of Mom Dad and We 😃😳) first part is up.. have a look...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4758356/manan-os-mom-dad-and-we-continues-v-imp-note-page-3-05-03-17

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keep smiling..

take care..

loads of love..

neeraja... 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
It was amazing update darling...
Such a notorious one is nandu, she stole his dairy, so bad girl..
How sweet is Manik is he even jealous of that teddy of Nandini..
They both are really cute.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesomeee amazinggg suprrbbb prt
Beautifull lovely manan...thnx for pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the PM!
So glad you've updated after ages!!!
Beautiful update!
Loved it!!
Haha love Preeti Bhabhi teasing Nandini!
Awww manan are sooo cute!
Love the teddy scene! Hehe manik jealous of it!!
Nandini is adorable but I love the way she teased him!
Their kisses were sooo hot!
Awww everyone watching manik! Haha!
Awww manik.. little cutie sleeping lying in Nandini's lap!!
Excited for the next part!
Continue soon!!!:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
super awesome

funny cute hot and passionate update

lovely talk betn nandu and her bhabhi..the teasing..hahaha..and dont her bhabhi knows about manan engaement? 😲😲 she was asking the qstns as if manik is nandinis bf and nandu has hided abt the same...

teddy fight was soo cute and romantic..i even imagined, teddy, manan baby holding teddy, nandini holding their baby and in last manik holding his personalized teddy, his nandini and all r standing in a row 😆..what a lovely scenario...

loved the water fight..poor manan got caught..😆😆

superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Manan moments love it...
When Manik will tell those magical words...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
So nandu know about manik's feeling
I hope they confess to each other soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeyyy
Loving this a lottt
Loved the way Manik wrote about Nandu in his diary
These two are smiply sweethearts
Guess more fun awaiting
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wat a beautiful update
Manan nd der cute lovely romance
Manik's pure love and his care love for nandu...:.
I really want manan's confession...
Plz update new part soon

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