#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww awesomeee amazinggh suprrbbb update...thnx for pm me...manik toh sach mein drrr gea nandu frst night pr aisa na kre hehhehe...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superbbb
Nandu s getting more cute and cute
Loved the gajar halwa part
Manan are the cutest
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update dear
What's manik surprise?
Waiting for next one
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
Tc
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsomeee update waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was amazing update dear...
Mukti and Nandini teasing manik..
Road side romance...
Dj and dadu's sweet nokjhok...
Manan moments in the room...
Nandini's stubbornness on the road trip..
Manik's helplessness...
Everything was fab..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts...
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update...
loved manan cute fight...
dada n dj scene during gajar ka halwa is so sweet...
nandini is to gud...for her food n sleep is imp...hahaha ...bichara manik...
loved d update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
super awesome update

Nandini being foodie, eating like boss and then cabir ki comment..super awesome part

and poor Manik, he was worried abt whether he will get to sleep wid her or not..awww sooo cute he is

lovely

loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Manikz kid..
Manan romance..
Djz decision.
Nandu z foodie..
Luvd it.
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

hey.. faster than expected right..?? 😆😆

guys im little disappointed regarding the response... it is decreasing with my every update.. 😭😭😭

i put so many efforts for a single update.. i have to manage soo much time for giving one update in my schedule where i hardly get time to sleep..

please.. if you are not happy with the story tell me frankly i will stop it.. but after soo much of time investment in every part if the response is so low.. i feel so depressed...

khair.. chodo.. agar comment karna hai toh karo.. warna ill decide what to do next...

i have a surprise for you all at the end of the update.. do have a look.. im sure you might like it.. 😳😊

Happy reading... its a pretty long update...

PART 24A:

Nandini's POV:

"so bolo kya chal raha hai ??" preethi bhabhi asked me and I rolled my eyes

"bhabhi don't get any ideas.. jaisa aap soch rahi hai naa.. waisa kuch nahi hai.." I said in a not-so-interested tone and she slapped my arm.. from the last 30 minutes she was interrogating me and I was just giving her either one word answers or back questioning her something irrelevant. Bhabhi and me are very good friends. She is more close to me after my mom. She knows all my secrets also. I had to be careful about that.. my one wrong step and next moment all my stupid secrets will be out in front of manik.

"chal jhooti." She said and I frowned

"nai bhabhi.. sach hi bol rahi hun.." I said but she nodded her head in a NO and said

"I know you very well. Uska saman chura kae tune apnae paas rakh liya hai.. and I know that you have also read it.. toh bol kya chal raha hai tarae dimag mai.." she said poking my head with her forefinger. Now I was caught red handed. Do you all remember manik was searching for something in his cupboard but didn't find it.. yes.. I stole his diary.. I knew he had the habit of writing a dairy and when mukthi told me that he hides it somewhere very very secretly I had to find where it was.. with the help of mukthi I found out the key for that secret drawer and I found his dairy there. I made mukthi promise me that she will not tell manik about me having done this at any cost and she agreed. So one day when Mr.Motu malhotra was busy with his own work.. I read his dairy. He really wrote about me in it. He called me his "baby" "darling" and all cheesy names. I totally loved it. He infact planned our whole future. My god.. our marriage.. honeymoon...kids...and what not... this means he remembered me.. and to my utter shock there was my pic also in his dairy.. I don't know from where he got it.. but it was cute... he wrote my princess on it and stuck it in his dairy... I was literally blushing thinking all this when a fake cough brought me back to reality

"so.. care to explain.." preeti bhabhi was in no mood to leave me. I sighed and said

"yes.. he loves me soo much and mai bhi.. its just that he fights with me a lot and I also love it.. but still he is soo dominating at times. I want him to confess first and im waiting for that.." I said in one breath and she looked at me with wide eyes and next what she uttered took my breath away.

"manik.."


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Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago

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