MaNan SS: when a monster falls for a mistery Girl/part-2 updt/page4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glimpse...!

If he is a monster thn she a innocent create of God...! If he is darkness thn she light..!
Wht will happen when this Monster & Innocent doll will meet...?
Is he really monter..?
Is she really a innocent child women...!
Sometimes
It's not necessary tht it's have to be real wht we see front of our eyes...!
Let's see
Who is the real monster...!

Should I continue ths story or not...?

Scroll down for characters update...!

Characters- page1
Chapter1 - page3
Chapter2 - page 4

Tanha_Urmi
Stay blessed..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey continue.. I will definitely read... concept is nice 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarFlies39

hey continue.. I will definitely read... concept is nice 😊


Tnx...😊 I will continue it soon...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting...
Wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Characters...!
Manik Malhotra : 21 yrs old a rude arrogant boy...lead singer of FAB5 & studys in S.P.E.C.E academy...!

Cabir Dewan : A prankster member of fab5 & a crazy fan of DEVILS...!

rest fab3 is same as show...& DuLiya is in a relationship...!

Nandini Arora : 20 yrs old...new comer in Spece...! she is full of life..simple yet cute doll...! A mistery she is...!

Abhimanyu Raychand : fun loving boy ! soon he will join in Spece...for some rsn..!

Navya Naveli : totally drama queen... ! soon she will join for some rsn...!

Harshad Saxsena : student of Spece academy...a playboy..hate fab5..!

DEVILS...!

devils express jst three name...! jnhe khabi kisi ne n dekha
fir v
they are world femous for their evil pranks...!

Nisha : evil Queen...! jst one wrd for her...! she is death for thm who try to hurt her friends...!

Arav : a devil bst friend of Nisha...! evil twin of Mayra...!

Mayra : another devil...!

Who are this three people behind the mask...? How disteny will be related thm with fab5...? Sach m ralated honge v ya n...? Well time will reveal tht...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well...I hv updated about the characters... Part 1 will be update vry soon...! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept
I just love mysteries stories
Do continue it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome c.s...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

A boy & a girl are laying on his bed. They are looking so scared but Their full concentration is in the laptop screen...!
but question is wht thy are watching in laptop...?
jis se dekke dar rahe hai dono ???
let's see...!

On laptop

we can a boy who is looking so scared . he is trying to find some place for hide himself..looks lyk he is trying to save his life from someone..!
but
from whom...?
suddenly a boy & a girl appear there..their face is covered by hood. but evil smirks are playing in there faces..!
Boy2 : tch..tch..tch..caught you..! ryt Mayra...?

Girl : yes arav...! (looking at a scrad boy ) you can run but you can't hide from Us Baby...!

Boy1 : plzzz leave me ! maaf kar do galti ho gayi hai age se aisa nahi karungi...!

Arav : Dude you rape a girl. we are proud of you...!

Mayra : now we wanna reward you something..! hope you will like it..!

Boy : I am sorry please leave me !
suddenly
A
voice said : but it's punishment time sweet heart...!

three of them turned & saw A person wearing black hood...there is a bracelet in tht person's hand which represent a letter "N" . & A evil smile in his/her face..!
the boy get more scread

Boy : Nisha...!
yes
the girl is Nisha the evil Queen !
Nisha : awww..you knw me how sweet . ( saying so she walk toward the boy & touch his cheek )
Nisha : time Up..no more hide & seek. Arav bring it on ...!

Arav came with some liquid in a bottle in his hand & trow it on tht boy's manhood...! & then turn towards Mayra...!

Arav : Mayra ...!

Mayra bring a lighter & give it to Nisha...!

Boy : plzz don't...! (he started to cry )
but
Nisha set the fire & throw it on his manhood...! He boy started crying in pain...fall on the ground...!

Nisha : Forgiveness is not our cup of tea bcz we are DEVILS...! & ths is the reward for raped a girl...!
then three of them turn towards the screen & said...!

Devil : don't mess with a innocent otherwise devil will come...!
thn
screen went bank...!

bck to the boy & girl jinki nazar ab tak laptop screen pe thi...!

Girl : yr Cabir...they are so horrible mtlb rape ke saza manhood jala Dena...!

Boy : Haa Mukti...tht was horrible but perfect reward for rape...! (saying so he shut the laptop trun towards Mukti )

Cabir : tujhe pata h mukti.. ye Jo Devils h Na ye kvi kisi innocent pe prnk ni karte only aise typ logo k sth krta hai..! thn live vedio banake net pe dal dete hai...!

Mukti : Haa yr...actually they are Angel in disguse of Devils for giving punishment such kind of people...!

Cabir : that's they are my fvrt...! ab chal Varna baba Monster ajayega ...!

Mukti : hehehe...chal...!

...end of this chapter...


Chalo Devils k sth sath Mukti or Cabir ka entry to ho gayi ...ab ye kon he re baba...?
okkk
tnx
bye
& don't forget to press the like button otherwise Devil a jayega..! 😆😆

Tanha_Urmi


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
D punishment was perfect...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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