#8:MaNanFF: Dheere Dheere! LinkToThread9/Pg1/29th-June - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome p,z pm me when u psot next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Take a bow genius. Your are brilliant.
MaNan's beautiful romantic morning .. Awww.. How cute are MaNan babies.. They are so adorable .. Total bliss and pure magic..
Nandini and tiger part was very sweet.. Nandini is adorable darling .. Jack and nandini are Pakka Tom and Jerry .. Hehe..
The guys baby sitting abeer was so cute.. Cabir and abeer surely have deep deep connection..
Abeer in hospital.. Ayyo.. Cabir's baccha ?? Kaise kab ??
God .. I am super excited for the next part and I know it's going to fabulous as always ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...but.. abeer is cabir's son?? how come ds is possible.. plz reveal d mystery soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update.
Jack is amazing. Every time ready to fight.
All friends are cute and totally different in nature.
Superb update.
There are two faviourite scenes in this story which come first in my mind whenever I think about dheery dheery.
1st when Manik misunderstood about nandni and dhruve and he saved her from some drunkers. After that their all the convo at manik's home in his bedroom after clearing all misunderstandings. At that moment their dialogues their cozy rumance with pain. That was amazing.
2nd their first make out. That was different.
Bcz there are many hot updates but that was little different. U described very well. Manik's passion intensity and nandu's nervousness but still she surrendered herself to him. That was amazing according to me.
Infact ur story all to all is treat to read.
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Posted: 9 years ago
ITNA SAB KUCH HO GAYA?! MAIN KAHAN THIII?!!

Seriously Mawara... The story is going just beautifully.. Nandini and Tiger are real siblings... That was the shocker!! And then Manik ka accident and Nandini's condition was so heart wrenching ki i cried like a little baby! And then the scene with Manik's dad! Chii! How could he stoop so low? How could he be so inhuman to hurt his own blood? His own son? Disgusting!
But Nandu ne bhi achha sabak sikhaya! The way she handled the lesson was mindblowing.. I didnt know she could be so mature.. But great job Nandu!

And then how beautifully she pacified Manik also... I love Nandu and Jack scenes they are seriously hilarious! Jack the driver! Hahahaha! It was really beautifull what she did... Do you have some special love for cherry blossoms? :P vaise i find them extremely beautiful so i would totally understand!

And yeh last update toh superb!! The lovey dovey scenes in the beginning... Hayye *dreamy sigh* but i also thoroughly enjoyed the rest of it... The cute way MaNan go to everyone's place to speak to them... And Jack toh... Ufff! Hes like a 5 year old baby to me, i dont understand how he manages to behave like a kid everytime.. But good he does, makes me laugh like hell!

And Abeer toh cutie pie forever hai! Super cute darling hai..love the father-son bonding! And badi nicely you included MaNan scenes in between...i like it! :P but i dont know why Nandini got so offended.. It wasnt an abuse! Sometimes people go with the flow of emotions and stuff happens, sometimes mistakes happen.. But its not an abuse! But im really looking forward to other people's reactions.. I think Nandini is gonna be super pissed with Navya for not telling her the truth, but what im really waiting for is Cabir's reaction...obviously eventually everything will be fine and CaVya will get married too (hopefully). But i really wanna know Jack's reaction to this, to permanent entry of Abeer in the group :P

Well great job Mawu baby :* im loving this story in every aspect!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Promo!


"I don't know what to do with you Navya! Manik was right! He was right! I fought with him for you! When he guessed this I accused him of abusing my friend! Oh God Navya! Why!? Main kis moo say jaoan ge un k samny! Myny tery liye un ki insult kar di! Aiyappa!!!" I cried scolding Navya to no extent and she just sat there all ashamed..


I was such a bad girl..


I talked to Manik so rudely...


I got so hyper!


Why! What he must be thinking of me?

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"Am sorry! Please! Just for once listen to me! It was a mistake!" Navya pleaded holding Cabir's hand and once again anger flared in his eyes.


I never saw my buddy this much angry in ages.


"Mistake?????" He roared jerking her hand away and she sobbed. "Dare not to call my son a mistake!!!" He again shouted and Nandini's grip on my hand tightened while everyone else stood almost numb.


"He is my son too!" Navya was sobbing and sobbing..


"Yes! But tell me one thing! Why!? Why on earth you left the next morning when I told you to bloody stay!!!" He again shouted holding her arms and she look at him aimlessly. "Kahan kahan ni dhoonda myny tmhy!!!! I went to that bar every night kay shaid tm aa jaoa! We both knew whatever happened that night was more then s*x! Then why! Why did you leave me? Why you left me abandon of my own son? Why you didn't let me provide the facilities which he deserved being my son!" He shouted again..


"Am sorry I was scared!" She wailed and I saw disgust on Cabir's face.


"Scared? I am feeling like killing myself whenever I am imaging the deprivation which he must have faced! The pain you went through while giving birth to him! How much you suffered! I wasn't there for you both I never was!! Why you did this to me Navya why? Me itna bura tou ni tha! Didn't you see the love in my eyes I had for you? I don't know what to say...! You broke me! You broke me!" Cabir spoke and spoke non stop slowly losing his grip on Navya's arms and backed off.


I saw tears in his eyes and he walked out. While Navya fell on the floor just crying. Nandini and other girls rushed to get her while I gestured others to run behind Cabir. He needed us...

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Isshhh! Bohat emotional ho gya yaar :( Nandini ko bht punishment milna chye! She talked so rudely to Manik and about CaVya tou am with Cabir!

Let's have a pole! From Cabir's word what do you think!

Are you in TEAM CABIR Or TEAM NAVYA! Guess! And write below! Waisy I myself in TEAM CABIR! Do let me know yours!

Love, Mawara...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Since v dnt knw wat reasns navya hd..
so 4 d tym being m in cabir's team.. :D (Party badal skty h kya? ;) )

Bt evn cabir is ri8..
hw mch they suffrd bcoz of navya..! :(

Hmm.. Lets c..!

Nandu ko pnshment!?
I guess anthr cute fight is on d way..! ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional
am with cabir
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome promo...
I am in team Cabir
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Posted: 9 years ago
emotional promo...
cabir is broken...
at present m with cabir...
nandu is right on her place she dont knw anythg abt navya past ...
whtever navya tld she believed her...
eagerly waitg for update...

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