#3:MaNanSS: The Mafia and His Shimmer Epilogue(Last)/PG79/25th-June - Page 58

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superbb mind blowing update...
I m going to miss this story so much...
Happy endings...
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Posted: 9 years ago
U portrayed so well
one of the unforgettable stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful ending...


It was one of the best story..


Suprbbb update

Mind blowing...



Loved it...

I will miss this story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey di...first of all sorry ...ki yesterday comment nahi kiya...as i have already told u ki doc.ne mujhe 1 week strict bed rest bola hai and kall mom ne jab mujhe lappy ke saath pakad liya mujhe bahut dant padi ...par phir bhi somehow chupke i managed to atleast read your update but comment karne se pehele mom ne dekhliya...so aaj again i am back with the chup-chupke buisseness..he he 😉...ok so coming to the chappy...OMG!!what a chappy...just loved it to the core...aap awain hi mere fav writer thodi na ho...coming back to the update...hmmm so there are certain parts which actually touched my heart so much that it made me cry with happiness...and some made me laugh like hell...literally i was rolling on the floor...🤣...so here are some of them...


He really wanted to kill me with his cuteness..


"Say something shimmer?" He spoke anxiously and I smiled biting my lower lip..


My eyes held amusement which didn't go unnoticed by him..


"Oh come on it's not funny okay?" He spoke in an hell annoyed tone and I giggled..


"Baby am telling you! Come on accept the proposal!" He spoke sternly and I made a bad face..


"Aa looh! What kinda proposal is that? You are asking me to accept the proposal on gun point ? What kind of Mafia king are you?" I teased him mercilessly and he stared at me with a super cute puppy face. "Puppy face is not gonna work my Mafia man!" I spoke in a serious tone, showing him my finger and turned to walk away but suddenly I felt a pull on my arm in next second I was banged in his chest..


"I don't know how to propose okay! It's just I wanted to surprise you with something good! I thought you would like it! And I am still working on it! You know I surfed every website on internet! Tou mjy yai sab say best laga an--!" He was ranting and ranting like an innocent baby while I was staring at him with all 'awe' once again I thanked Jesus for my eyes. Suddenly an urge to kiss him aroused in my heart and before he could complete I tiptoed in next second mine lips were on his..

awww...so cute he is he he...i loved this scene where he is proposing or rather on the verge of threating her to accept his proposal ...sooo cute the mafia king doesnt know how to propose to a girl...and nandus ans awww...so cute...😳😳

2. Sto cercando un buon?(Am I looking good?)!" I asked nervously to Cabir as he made me wear my coat. I was wearing a very dark navy blue very close to black three piece and with a beautiful dashing white flower on the pocket.



"Perfetto(perfect)!" Cabir appreciated patting my back and I stared at my reflection in the mirror..


"Penso di aver bisogno cambiamento(I think I need change!)" I freaked out as I thought I was looking horrible..


"Non essere un dolore nel culo Manik!(Don't be a pain in ass Manik!)" Cabir scolded me smacking my head and I made a bad face..


I was about to say something when...


"One more word in Italiano and I will break each of your bone! Trust me you both won't be able to walk for your whole Life!" Abhimanyu growled from back and we both gulped the lump in throat.


He was the one to whom our italiano always frustrate...


"Sorry buddy! Look I can't afford a broken bone on my wedding day!" I pleaded turning towards him and he gave me a whatever look..


"Boss! You are nervous then a bride! Come on be a man!" Aryaman tried to cheer me up but it pissed me off..


"Shut up!" I mumbled with a bad face..




ha ha ha...that was really something...abhi got so frustrated with their italian ranting...awwwbut actually is kind of true when two people talk in some other language and you dont undestand a single word it is damn irretating u really feel like shooting both of them...trust me saying from my own experience...


3. "Wesy! Boss! What are the special plans for the wedding night? Honeymoon?" Dhruv's teasing comment reached my ear and I glared at him...


"You speak too much!" I said with a bad mode and started combing my hair..


"Oh boss! Please tell us na! Please please!" This time Aryaman pleaded and this caused me to laugh.


"Arya! You are excited as if you are my soon to be bride! And it's our wedding night!" I joked winking at him and his expressions turned horrified..


"Chi chi boss! Am not a gay! Am straight! Please avoid these kind of lame jokes in front of Nancy! She already has a doubt on me the way we boys gel up na! She accuse me of being a gay!" Aryaman told his 'not so pleasent' story and we all laughed our lungs out while he stood with a super bad mood..


We were throwing hi-five to each other and Aryaman was almost pulling his hair..


"It's not funny! It's a shame! Tum logon ki girlfriends ny jis din tm logon ko accuse kiya na then I will ask you all!" He spoke angrily stomping his foot on the floor and Cabir wrapped an arm around Aryaman's neck from side..


"See mate! Te ko sochna chahye that why Nancy accused you!? Are you really a gay???" He teased Aryaman with full heart and he stared at him with a puppy face..


"Bosss!!!" He whined like a kid looking at me for a rescue and I laughingly gestured him to come to me.


He came running to me and I patted his cheek..


He was also very young when he joined my group..


"Okay stop teasing my boy!" I said in a serious tone showing them a hand and all shook their heads with a small smile on their faces while Aryaman was showing them his tongue hugging my waist..


He was a sweetheart..


omg...!! gay like seriously...this was damn funny...i just couldnt stop laughing i still am typing laughing like an idiot rally cant forget that scene...like i leterally visualised the entire thing while reading...every bit of it...


4. Her trembling fingers gripped my left collar and I possessively covered hers with mine. I nibbled her lower lip playfully and she giggled in between causing me to hold her more close..


"Ti amo!(I love you!)" I mumbled between the kiss and she angled her head to deepen the kiss..


"Ti amo anch'io!(I love you too!)" She mumbled back and wait what!!!


Did she just speak Italian???


My eyes snapped open and she too opened her eyes. My eyes held shock while her were amused. She gave me a last peck and then backed off..


I was still staring at her shocked..


"What? Only you can speak Italian?" She said innocently and it caused me to broke in laughter. I took her in a side hug and she rested her head on my chest. We turned to our audience and friends to wave..


he he...nandini rocked and manik shocked...he thought only he can rant that he can speak italian but this time nandu surprised him...giving him a..."look i speak too"wala look...😃

5. "Welcome to OUR house Mrs.Manik Malhotra!" I announced spreading my arms around and she still looked around in amazement..


"Our?" She questioned still reluctant to believe and I nodded..


"Oh God! Jesus Christ?!!! It's ours! Tumhara aur mera! Hamara!! I love you Manik!!!" Suddenly she registered everything and she started shouting her lungs out in excitement..


I adored her as without giving me a hug or a kiss she threw her heals on the porch and run inside..


Wow? Seriously? No kiss? I thought she would come running in my arms like Kajol hugged SRK in DDLG..


oh boy...bichara manik saare sapne gattar mein chale gaye...he he...kahan bichara soch raha tha ki ddlj ke jaise nandini uske bahon mein daudte hua ayege aur kahan usse ek kiss bhi nahi mili...🤣



6. "Indeed it is! Because it's ours!" I whispered in her ear and she turned to me..


"Do I need to thank you?" She asked lowly and I shook my head. I gently cupped her face and pecked her forehead..


"Manik!" Her voice was a mere whisper and I found it seductive..


"Hmm?" I hummed staring in her eyes. She daringly held my hands and placed them on her back where the zip of the dress was...


"Take me!" She whispered back and I smiled at her cockily..


"With pleasure bella!" I whispered back huskily and backed off to turn off all the lights..


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Nandini's POV...


"With pleasure bella!" His voice was so husky that I felt my legs wobbling into jelly before I could grip him he backed off to turn off the lights. The dainty lights of the room remained on and I anticipated.


Now this will be the night I will see him! I will see us!


After turning off the lights he turned to me and I stood froze on my place when I saw him unbuttoning his white shirt. That was the moment when my breath quickened like as if I was running a marathon and he smirked. I walked forward and gulping visibly I backed off. Soon I found my back touching the wall and I stared in his eyes.


All I saw was love and desire...


He was done with unbuttoning and then I finally caught the full glimpse of his broad chest..


"There is no way out shimmer!" He spoke hoarsely in my ear and I almost fainted when his bare chest rubbed with mine covered in fabric yet...


"Man---!" I tried speaking but he placed his finger on my lips..


"No talking tonight agela de facio! I believe in actions! And tonight I will tell you by my actions that how much this night means to me! I will make sure that the only word escape your lips wil be my name!" He whispered once again and trust me my legs gave out. Before I could fall in a flash of second I was on the bed and he was over me..


"Permit me!" He spoke dangerously leaning closer to my lips and I gulped..


"Yes!" I spoke daringly and my chest heaved under him. Finally he pressed his lips on mine and yes!


Yes it busted everything around. My head blew away with the ferocity and I melted in his arms. I moaned in his mouth and he took that as an opportunity to slid his tongue deeper inside my mouth. Our tongues exchanged honey and my hands fisted in his hair pulling him as close as I could.


"Ti amo!" He mumbled between the kiss and rolled us over. Now I was over him and with a flick he had my gown zip undone. My hands roamed in his bare chest and once again I felt the uneven skin. I break the kiss but he didn't let me and in next second I was totally bare in his strong arms. Well he was a fast stripper..


The chill wind from the windows came rushing in and it sent tingle in my body along with Manik's seductive touch..


I snuggle in him and finally I found my head resting on the pillow and finally we were under a fluffy quilt..


I stared in his eyes as he tucked us in the blanket and he smiled..


"Manik!" I whispered cupping his left chin and he leaned in my touch kissing my palm..


"Aik request!" I pleaded and he caressed my forehead..


"Anything!" He mumbled back and I bite my lower lip..


"Will you please take it all very slow? I want to live every moment of this beautiful night!" I spoke shyly not meeting his eyes and his chest rumbled..


"Look in my eyes!" He whispered lovingly and I hesitantly look in his eyes. "We will take it very slow! Just like the way you want!" He whispered lovingly and I smiled before getting up a little to fuse our lips once again..


We kissed...


We kissed...


And...


We kissed...


Until our lungs gave out but he was in no mood to tear his lips away from my skin so he hungrily started kissing my neck and shoulder. He fisted my hair not harshly and arched my throat to his hungry devour. He sucked on my skin and I breathed heavily. His face dipped in my cleavage and I arched my back. I fisted his hair pressing him more to my sensitive skin..


His master skilled tongue flicked on my sensitive parts and his teeth followed his tongue. He grazed his teeth over my skin..


"Ahhh!" I cried in pleasure and he immediately came back to my lips..


"No ahhhss Nandini! No ahhs!! Manik! Just Manik! I want you to scream my name only mine!" He growled like a lion in my ear and I felt goosebumps on my skin..


His authoritative voice always scared me..


He liked being dominant and I had no objection with it though..


"Manik!" I moaned breathlessly and he smirked..


"Yeah! That's like my girl!" He spoke with a killing attitude and once again smashed his lips on mine..


Then it started again..


Tick tick clock and the night passed..


"Maaanniiikkk!" I literally screamed his name when the pleasure overpowered me due to his assault and it satisfied his male ego to the core.


"Yeah! You liking it ehh?" He was shameless in bed that I got to know tonight and it caused me to hide my face in his neck..


So many time passed and he made me scream his name nth time..


Then...


The moment was near and I helplessly scratched my nails in his back trying to convey what I wanted..


"Manik!! Please!" I begged him and I didn't notice when the tears escaped my eyes which Manik caught on his lips..


"Bella Shhh!!!! You are here! In my arms!" He whispered caressing my hair but it didn't calm me..


I needed release...


"Please! Yo-you kn-know what I wa--!" He didn't let me complete and I suddenly let out a scream of pain and pleasure when he claimed me totally unannounced.


Tears trickled down my eyes and he kissed me deeply to seal my muffle cries..


Soon he collapsed on me and his face rested in my neck...


He breathed heavily and I cried with silent tears a constant smile didn't leave my lips as my fingers racked in his thick mane..


"Tum theek ho?" His lips moved over my skin and I sighed in extreme satisfaction..


"Tumhray hoty huay bhala mjy kuch ho sakta hai hmm?" I spoke lovingly kissing his hair and he raised a little to peck my forehead..


Slowly he slid off me and fell beside me on his stomach. I stared at him and he smiled..


ok...so do i need to tell anything about it...as now my hal is like a red tomato...😳😳u made me blush like helll...ufff,,,,,and iss update ke promo mein wo manik ke lines padhte hi my gutter mind stated its process...

7. I sipped my coffee and Mia played with my fingers..


I stared at her cuteness and suddenly she saw Brownie passing by wiggling his tail..


"Wownieee!" She shouted and wriggled in my grasp. I let her go and she hastily crawled behind Brownie who was running away from her..


Yes he always runs away from Mia because she used to pull his fluffy hair and ears mercilessly..

awww...sooo cute..this part is just so adorable...he he..poor wowniee...sho cute...always trying to save his tail from little mia...😆😆





so that was all bout it...but i really liked it verymuch and plz di do comeback with another story soon...as your stories are my oxygen...
luv u...to the moon and back to earth...

your reader,


abhilasha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Di for such a beautiful story. U pen down every body's emotions so beautifully no words to describe it. I don't have words for describing the story. So just thank u and keep writing we are always with u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally its done ...
super duper update mawara i really dnt have wrds ...
( i am crying ) i am gona miss TMAHS very badly ...
i love the journey i love every characters i love ur writing emotions ...
every single thing abt this journey ...



come soon with again such story love you mawara (crying)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God its superbbb
m gonna misss this story like crazy
thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
I can't believe this journey has ended. It was one beautiful story.
Manik is so cute. His proposal & the nervousness of Nandini's answer. And then he admitted that he doesn't know how to propose but he wanted to make her happy.
The D-Day. Aryamaan's teasing session made me laugh. Manik & Nandini finally as Husband & Wife.
Their daughter. Finally Manik & Nandini's wish of a happy family was fulfilled.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oye hoye that was awesome man ...
Manik and shameless hehehe...
Awww mia is so cute and brownie runs way from her shit so cute loved it and thank u for the wonderful epiloge
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Posted: 9 years ago
i liked last part everything

the proposal

the wedding

the night 😉😉😉

the baby mia the most 😳😳😳😳😳

one more story over 👏👏👏👏👏


u r winning hearts dear ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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