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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAP 6 A:

Nandini was about to go but manik grabbed her hand and start walking towards hill. Manik and nandini both sat on ground. Nandini turned her face away. Manik waved a chocolate bar in front of her. Nandini looked at the chocolate, she was about to take it but manik take it back.

"promise me you will listen to me and I will give you this chocolate" manik said in serious tone and asked her with his eyes and she nodded in yes.

"your dad wanted to tell you everything but i stopped him because muje tumhare bare mein sab pata tha...main aur tumhare dad nhi chahte the k tum kisi bhi darr mein apni zindagi jio..your dad asked me for help so I helped him to protect you..in sab mein hum nhi chahte the k tumhe koi taklif ho that's why we didn't tell you" manik explained her lovingly and she looked at him.

"ok..now give me this chocolate..." nandini said cutely and forward her hand to him manik nodded his head in disbelief and gave chocolate to her.

"its okay maine aapko aur papa ko maaf kiya but first and last time..next time se ku6 bhi chupaya na to I won't forgive you easily dekh lena" nandini said eating her chocolate cutely.

Manik dropped nandini to her home. First nandini didn't talk to her father to trouble her. After that she demand big chocolate boxes and then she talk to him.

She was thinking about something in her room. After sometime she went down to her dad's study room and she saw that her father was busy in some work so she sat in front of him. he looked at her from his file. He noticed that she wants to tell something to him.

"sweetheart, what happened? Ye time to aapke tv dekhne ka hai aur is time pe aap dad k sath aur wo bhi studyroom mein? You wanna say something?"

"no...no... dad I...I... m here because I wanna give you company. Aap akele akele work nahi kar paoge so...so... I want to help you."

He noticed that his princess is hiding something so he closed his file and said, "baat kya hai nandu? Aur is baar koi juth nahi only truth."

"ILOVEMANIK" Nandini said in jet speed tone without stopping and closed her eyes. Her father couldn't understand what she wants to say.

"nandini relax. Muje ku6 samaj mein nahi aaya isliye aaram se bolo kya kehna chahti ho kyunki mein yahi hun kahi bhaga nahi ja raha hun" Her father calmed her.

Nanidni composed herself and take a deep breath and said "daddybear I..i love manik.." nandini closed her eyes in fear. Nandini lost her mother in childhood. Nandini always everything share her everything with her father first. She opened her eyes and saw that mr.murthy was sitting in front of her.

"SORRY papa if I hurt you but mein yeh baat aap ko batana chahti thi par himmat hi nahi hui itni badi baat maine aap se chupai aap jo punishment denge wo mein le lugi bas aap naraaz mat hona pls papa" she said holding her ears and mr.murthy smiled and removed her hand from ears.

"I am not upset with you meri jaan..balki I am so happy that you love him..i like your choice..or rhi baat na batane ki to I can understand k tum aise baat apne papa se krne mein hesitate krti ho..chahe koi bhi girl ho wo hesitate karegi...but I am happy that you share with me..." he said and open his arms for her. Nandini immediately get up from chair and hugged him tight.

"baccha I want to discuss something with you but..." mr.murthy said and nandini broke the hug and she looked at him and sat on chair again.

"you know na how manik is? He is very strict man you know na usse pasand nhi hain aur baccha aap to bahot hi zyada naughty ho to fir aap adjust ho payegi manik ke sath??" mr.murthy raised his eyebrow and asked her.

She was in her deep thought after sometime she said "don't worry pappu I know how to handle him? aur don't worry wo mere sath adjust ho jayege.." she said cutely nodding her head and ran out from there.

"bechara manik..." mr.murthy said with helpless tone and looked upwards ad sighed.

Malhotra mansion:

A lady in her 50 she was checking some photos and approving some of pics. She was none other than Nyonika Malhotra. she was finding a perfect wife for her son manik Malhotra. who can handle him and his temper. Other girl in her twenties come with glass of juice and gave it to her and sat beside her.

"mom aap kitni bhi try kr lo manik aap ki nhi sun ne wala..wo phir se sabhi girl ko reject kr dega" she was none other than mukti Malhotra. elder bahu of Malhotra family. wife of abhimanyu Malhotra. abhimanyu Malhotra is a elder son in Malhotra family. he is cousin brother of manik.

At the same time 3 men enters in the house. Mukti give water to everyone and sat with them.

Vikram Malhotra : elder son of Malhotra family and father of abhimanyu Malhotra. he is very strict person. Manik is a carbon copy of his bade papa. He is handling Malhotra industries.

Kartik Malhotra : commissioner in Mumbai police. Loves his family a lot very naughty and fun loving person. He respects his brother so much and pamper mukti like his own daughter because in Malhotra family no one has daughter. Best friend of mr.murthy. {I don't have any idea about post of police department so if I am wrong pls forgive me..}

Abhimanyu Malhotra : one and only son of vikram Malhotra. very kind, soft heart and fun loving person. He is carbon copy of his uncle. They both trouble manik a lot.

Dhruv Malhotra: younger son of Malhotra family. everyone loves him so much. he wants to do something by his own that's why he is staying in London doing job as an architecture. He married to alya. Alya is a choice of mukti and Nyonika. He is practicing in London, soon he will join his business.

Aryan and anu: 4 years old cute twin babies of mukti and abhi.

Padmini oberoi:

A sister of vikram and kartik. Bua of abhi, manik and dhruv. She has no kids that's why she loved them like her own kids.

Now the head of the family:

Shekhar singh Malhotra :

Grandfather of Malhotra kids...retired business man..loves his family a lot..so cute and fun loving..you can call him he is more naughty than anu and Aryan. No one can live without him. his family is his life. He wants manik to be settled in his life. He wants very naughty wife for manik.

"So choti maa apne phir se "mission manik ki shadi" shuru kr diya haan?" abhi asked him and everyone laughed on his question.

"abhi wo kbhi ruka hi kaha tha muje to kbhi kbhi lagta hain k shayad manik jab se iss duniya mein aaya hoga tab se Nyonika ka wahi mission hai jo abhi tak uske ladle bte ki wajah se incomplete hain.." kartik said sipping his tea to tease her.

"aur wo kbhi pura hoga bhi nhi..." everyone turned and saw manik was standing there. Nyonika glared at him and manik came near her and sat beside her and put his head on her shoulder.

"ek baari mil to le sirf mere liye pls beta tu itna nhi kr skta mere liye..?" Nyonika was trying to blackmail him with her emotional face. Everyone was enjoying that scene because its their regular scene.

"mom..kitni baar ek hi face aur dialogue dikha ke aap muje blackmail karegi mumma its not gonna work mom..." manik said cutely and make a puppy face.

"manik apne decision pe hi rehna shadi krke apne freedom gawa doge tum" abhi said wiping his fake tears and Nyonika slapped his shoulder.

"so main tumhari freedom chin rhi hoon haan?? Room mein aao batati hoon tumhe main freedom kya hoti hai?" mukti glared at abhi and warned him. he make a puppy face.

"dad wapis kab aa rhe ha?" vikram asked Nyonika because he went to shimla to meet his friends.

"in two days unka to mann hi nhi ho rha wapis aane ka wo to maine baccho ka naam liya to jat se maan gye bas do din mein aa jayege bhaiya" Nyonika said to vikram.

"mukti baccha mein two days ke liye delhi jaa rha hoon zra mere clothes dekh lena" vikram said lovingly to mukti and mukti nodded her head in yes and smiled.

Nyonika and mukti always took special care of vikram because in car accident he lost his wife. That's why abhi always called Nyonika his choti maa. Nyonika also love him like her own child. After sometime everyone went to dinner table and after dinner they slept.

Next morning mr.murthy has to go somewhere so he request manik to stay with nandini. manik was thinking that its not good to stay alone with nandini at her house in night so he was thinking to take her at his home. he knows that in noon no one was at home.

"look nandini main tumhe apne ghar leke jaa rha hoon.." manik said while nandini was sitting in canteen.

"itni jaldi maine to ache kapde bhi nhi liye abhi mein pehle shopping karugi...mere pass Indian dresses nhi hain" nandini said pouting her lips and manik looked at her confusingly.

"what Indian dress? Tumhe mere ghar pe Indian dress ki kyun zaroor hogi?" manik asked her in confused tone and nandini slapped her forehead.

"aap bhi na..itna bhi nhi samjte..aap muje apne ghar apne parents aur family se milwane le jaa rhe to muje thik dikhna bhi to chahiye aur papa bhi nhi hain to aap aise kaise kr skte hain?" nandini made a bad face and asked him.

"uff this girl...nandini main tumhe apne ghar chupa kr lekar jaa rha hoon taki kisi ko pata na chale k tum akeli ho aur tum mere safe rho isliye.. mere ghar pe kisi ko iss bare mein.. main pata lagne dena nhi chahta so come fast.." manik said and nandini sighed in disappointment and left with him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Manik take her in house from back side and they were going upstairs where nandini was watching all family photos which were hanging on wall.

"wow manik aap ki family kitni badi hai aww...I want to meet them pls at least muje photo mein to introduce karao na" nandini held his hand and pleaded him. manik grabbed her hand and dragged her in his room.

"nandini keep quite..kisi ko bhi pata nhi chalna chahiye k tum iss room mein ho..warna mujse bura koi nhi hoga" manik warned her.

"aap se bura to koi hai bhi nhi.." she whispered and manik turned and looked at her and raised his eye brow.

"what??" manik asked her and nandini nodded her head in no and manik went down to get lunch for them. when he gave plate of food to her she made a bad face and manik raised his eyebrow.

"yhi hain khane mein?" nandini asked him with puppy face.

"nhi actually Italian dishes banayi hain do you wanna try it?" manik asked her in sarcastic tone but poor soul take it seriously and nodded her head so cutely.

"yhi hain khane mein chup chap khao aur take rest.." manik ordered her and she immediately start eating her food. After lunch she slept for some time. Manik was thanking god that she didn't create any scene.

After day in night nandini was watching movie in manik's laptop. He was checking some files of some cases. Suddenly nandini looked at him and said "manik give me your phone na" manik looked at him confusingly.

"kyun mera phone? Tumhare pass nhi hain tumhara phone" manik asked her and she show her phone and said "I have my phone but I have no games In my phone pls i want to play games pls..."


"nandini mere pass bhi phone hai..you know but fortunately I have no games in my phone" manik said in sarcastic tone and again start reading his files.

Nandini was watching her movie when suddenly her eyes fell on manik. he was sleeping with file In his hand. She saw time, it was 1'o clock. She very silently put her laptop on bed and murmured "kya karun? Niche jaun? I badly want an ice cream...manik ko jagaun? Nhi..nhi he is seeping kisi ko uthana its not good thing main fatak se aati hoon ice cream lekar yes.." she without making sound goes out of the room.

She with silent steps went to kitchen and opened the fridge and saw that there were so many ice cream tubs. She picked her favorite ice cream and left the kitchen. She was going upstairs but she had no idea that malhotra's pet dog was sitting over there.

Nandini hardly climbed 3 steps when she was about to climb suddenly Lucifer opened its eyes and start barking. Manik was in deep sleep but when he heard lucifer's bark. He wake up from his sleep and looked at bed, nandini was not there.

"shit..this girl..." manik immediately ran out.

He saw that Lucifer was barking and nandini was trying to shoo away him. he came to Lucifer and patted his head and said "ssshhh..lucifer shhh...sleep my boy..sleep" he said and Lucifer immediately ran down to its place and sleep. Manik looked at nandini angrily and she mouthed sorry.

"manik meri baat suniye.." nandini was about to say something but manik came close to her.

"don't utter a word koi uth ke aaiye isse pehle in room now.." manik said sternly.

"but manik..sune to.." nandini wants to ask about Lucifer, that's it for manik.

"tum aise nhi manogi" he said and picked her up on his shoulder. Nandini was protesting. Suddenly all lights was on and everyone was coming out from their room. manik closed his eyes and murmured "shit". Nandini was struggling to get down. everyone was looking at her amusingly.

"manik aap ki family..put me down.." nandini said in excited to ne and manik put her down. nandini pushed him aside and rushed to them. manik turned and looked at them and faintly smiled.

"hello...everyone I am nandini murthy" she waved her hand to everyone. Everyone was thinking that she is his girlfriend except his father but he doesn't disclose it for security. Manik also came to her before she did something stupid.

"wo..wo...she is daughter of murthy uncle" manik said in low tone. Nyonika and mukti was so excited to seeing her.

"haan..hume pasand hain" mukti and Nyonika said without even thinking twice. Nandini's eyes twinkled like stars.

"sacchi.." nandini also asked with excitement. She was about to hug them but manik stopped her.

"nandini in room now.." manik said in stern tone but it didn't affect her.

"let me talk to them na manik ab kya darna jab muje in logo ne accept kr liya hai" nandini said so cutely that everyone was like awww... manik's father was controlling his laughter because he knew that nandini is so naughty kid and she is giving hard time to manik.

"nandini if you won't go in room right now I promise I will break my friendship with you in next second..." manik said in angry tone. Nandini looked at him and he with his eyes gesture her to go up. She looked at his family and waved bye to everyone and left from there.

Manik turned and saw that everyone was sitting on sofa and waiting for answer.

"what.." manik asked them with serious tone.

"don't you think you owe an explanation about nandini..matlab I am happy with your decision but you should tell me na that you love someone to main baat krti murthyji se.." Nyonika said and manik looked at her with disbelief look on his face.

"mom first she is not my girlfriend" manik said in serious tone.

"ohhh..." Everyone stretched that word.

"I am saying truth..i am on my mission..i can't disclose it now..." he again said but again they said ohhh...

"you know what you guys are just impossible.." manik said in irritation and left from there. Everyone laughed out loud on him and left from there.

"what the hell was that?" manik asked nandini as soon as he entered in room.

"what?" nandini asked him with so much innocence.

"why you went down without asking me?" manik shout on her and it made nandini scared.

"wo ice cream khani thi to.." nandini left her sentence in mid.

"you should ask me na..you should wake me up...na but no you just want to create trouble in my life na..wahan pr niche sab mujse hamare bare mein question kr rhe hai..just because you messed up everything, because you are stupid tiny head girl..." manik was shouting on her and she was looking down in fear because no one ever in her life talk to her like this.

"wo muje laga k..." nandini was about to say something but manik cut her off.

"what..kya laga tumhe...k tum aise mazak karogi sab ke sath...you know what you are nothing but a rich spoiled brat jis se sirf apni masti mazak se aur fun se hi matlab hai but let me tell you I am not one of you..you know what your father didn't teach you how to stay at someone's house..how to behave with everyone...job hi dimag mein aaya bas bol diya without thinking even twice..." manik shout on her and tears start flowing from her eyes...

"now go and sleep..because muje pata hain tumse baat krna hi bekaar hai.." manik said and slept on couch and nandini also slept on bed. She was crying bitterly. She was covering her mouth to stop her sob. She did something in her phone and slept.

Next morning manik wake up and stretched his arms and turned his face to look over nandini. he saw that bed was empty he thought that she must be in bathroom, he waited for 15 minutes but when she didn't come out. He knocked at the door but she didn't open it. Manik turned the knob and door was opened, he checked it no one was there.

Manik was now tensed. He picked up his phone from table. It was near his couch, he was about to call her but he saw that chit was under a flower vase. He opened it and read:

"I am sorry for troubling you and thank you so much for taking care of me. Aur I am not going to college so you don't need to worry about my safety because papa is already at home, in night I called my driver so he picked me up so once again thank you and bye.." manik sighed and he put it chit in his drawer and went to bathroom.

He went down for breakfast and Nyonika saw him and asked "arre..where is nandini? usse bhi bulao breakfast ke liye" manik sat on chair. "she went to her house in early morning" manik without answering more he start to eating his food.

Mukti was about to ask something but manik looked at everyone with angry glare so everyone keep their mouth shut and after that he left for his duty.

Nandini was sitting on sofa with her father. she was hugging him so tightly and he was caressing her hair and kissing her hair. Today she was missing her mom badly.

"I missed you so much baba..don't go anywhere without me ab se.." nandini sniffed like a kid and her father was like aww...

"awww...mera baby..mera baccha...meri princess...baba won't leave you alone promise.." mr.murthy said so lovingly. He passed his whole day with nandini to cheer her mood. he cancelled all his meetings and whole day he watched cartoon with her, they cook different dishes which was not eatable, they play games in garden. In night mr.murthy take her out for dinner and after lot of masti he tucked nandini in bed and kissed her forehead.

Next morning nandini was sitting with navya in classroom. When manik entered he saw that nandini's eyes were red and puffy and she was not even smiling, he was feeling very guilty. He came near them and wished them. in response nandini just faintly smiled.

Whole day nandini was just doing her study. When manik was about to tell her sorry after college she left with her driver. Days passed like this manik was missing her but nandini was not giving him chance. After week a girl invite whole class in her birthday party. Manik don't want to go but nandini was going so for her safety he also went to party.

So how's it???

Long..longer..longest..

Now what will happen in party stay tuned...

Next ek kasak..

Love you all...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Awesomeee amazinggg suprrbbb prt
Nandu manik ko hard tym de rhi hai aur manik apni feelings ko...hope so party mein hi kch ho jaye manan kareeb aa jayein...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Maniks family is crazy
Poor nandini
She is so sweet but manik shouldn't have said that in anger
Now let's see how manik will manaofy nandini
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Really love this story
But plz update sooner

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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Awww..that was soo cute..
Nandu is too cute...
N manik is angry hulk..
Update was superb..
Lvd it...
Nxt update jldi dena plz.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Amazing update muje Nandini ka e naughty ness bohoth acha lagtahe. Manik ushe kitna data ab guilty feel karo.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Awesome update

Nandu is so naughty and cute

And manik family is also nice and crazy and loving

Nandini is hurt and sad because of manik word
He said to much

Wanna see more maniks family and nandini movements and masti

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
mindblowing update...
manik family is amazing n crazy...loved his family...
nandini is cute...
nandini first meet with family is too funny...
manik family will surely pamper nandini lot in future...
manik is so much angry on nandini...n shouted on her ...
feeling bad for nandini...nandini n her father scene is lovely...
nandini is angry on him n not talking to him...
ab dekena hai manik nandini ko kaise manata hai...
loved d update...


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Posted: 8 years ago
soo sooo sooo cute Nandini

she is so innocent and lovely..really kya hoga nandu ka? use pyaar hua to bhi Manik jaise angry hulk se..he scolded her too much..he shldnt have question her upbringing..

she was in so good mood that his family accepted her but he made her cried..punches on faces of Manik..

Plz do smthing and let Manik pamper Nandini just like her dad pampered her full day..that part made me feel good sply when they cooked inedible dishes ... hahaha

lovely update

Plz update fast

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