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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys...

How are you all?

Sorry for the delay .

Coming back to the chapter, here it is...

CHAPTER -55

Shanti came to the guest room and said- Nandini Beta tum Jake ready ho jao Shaam ke function ke liye. Maine Parlour walo ko yahin pe bula liya hai. Wo log bas aati hi hongi jab tak tum Naha lo.

Nandini said ok and left.

Shanti asked Swati to take rest to which she obliged .

Nandini went to her room (MaNan room) and had a shower.


She came out wearing a simple pink salwar suit and was drying her hair when she heard a knock on the door.

Nandini went and opened the door and gulped down her saliva.

She saw a team of beauticians standing there with a smile on their face .
(Guys tell me honestly how many of you thought that it was Manik who had knocked the door?)

Nandini allowed them in .

Nandini selfthought - Omg. Ye itne saare beauticians ki kya zarurat thi.

Ek bhi to aasakti thi na makeup ke liye.

One of the girls( beautician) said - Ma'am aap bilkul bhi worry mat kijiye.Hum 4 hours me apko ready kardenge. Aap bas relax hokar yahan baithiye.

Nandini selfthought - What???4 hours???

Nandini sat down and the girls started the make up.

Nandini was checking the clock from time to time to see how much time was left.

Finally she heaved a sigh of relief as soon as the girls said - Done Ma'am. You can have a look at yourself in the mirror. Agar Kuch kami reh gayi ho toh bol dijiye .

Nandini looked at herself in the mirror.

She was indeed looking pretty.

Shanti entered the room and saw Nandini.

Shanti - Bilkul pari lag rahi ho. Nazar na lage tumhe.

Saying this she applied kala tika behind Nandini's ear.

One of the beautician - Sahi kaha Aunty aapne. Ma'am ko dekh kar to sir ke hosh ud jayenge.

We will now take your leave.

Saying this they went away.

Shanti - Nandini jao tumhari Maa se mil lo. Jab tak Manik bhi ready hojayega.

Nandini - Ji Buaji.

Saying this she was about to go when Shanti stopped her and said- Nandini... Tum party se Pehle Manik ke samne mat aana.

Nandini looked confusingly at Shanti.

Shanti - Riwaj hai Beta.

Nandini nodded and said- Ok Buaji and left.

Shanti self- talk - Maaf karna Bhagwaan. Maine Nandini se Jhut bola . Wo Kya hai na mai Manik ka reaction dekhna chahti thi jab wo Nandini ko aise dekhega.

Nandini went to the guest room where her mother was present.

Swati saw her and said- Nandu bahut pyari lagrahi hai meri bachchi. Kisi ki Nazar na lage.

Nandini - Maa aap bhi. Pata hai kitne ghante lage hai mujhe ready hone me. Pata nahi kya kya kar rahi thi wo sab Parlour ki ladkiya.

Nandini complained making a cute pout.

Swati - Arey bilkul Budhu ki Budhu rahegi tu . Beta aaj se aadat daal le in sab ki. Ab tujhe aise hi saj dhaj ke rehna hoga. Manik ke liye.

Nandini selfthought - Agar Maa ko pata chalega ki Manik ko mujhme koi interest nahi hai to unhe bura lagega. Isiliye mai unhe abhi nahi bata sakti.

Swati - Kaha khogayi?

Nandini - Kahi nahi Maa. Aap jaldi se ready hojao.

Meanwhile in MANAN room-

Manik got ready and was getting restless to see Nandini as he had overheard the beauticians praising Nandini's beauty while leaving the house.

He wanted to see her once anyhow ( He couldn't understand the reason but he just wanted a glimpse of Nandini)but Shanti was not buying any of his excuses to go to the guestroom.

Manik had to give up eventually.

It was 8pm and the reception party started.

All the guests arrived and were wishing Manik one by one but he was least interested.

His eyes just wanted to see only one person and that was Nandini.

His wait was finally over as Nandini descended the stairs.

Manik was astounded by Nandini's Beauty.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it .

Ignore the typos if any.


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Sarahpeyton thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys...

Here I am with another update.


CHAPTER -56

Nandini descended the stairs and Manik couldn't stop himself from admiring Nandini's Beauty till she was brought to the stage by Shanti.



Nandini was resembling a princess in her golden lehenga...

Princess of Manik's dream world...

Manik just couldn't take his eyes off her.

He was brought out of his Nandini land by someone who said - Bahut hi beautiful lagrahi hai na Nandini...

Manik lost in his thoughts said -Bahut zyada...

Person - Haan wo toh hai... But I think tumhe boldena chahiye Nandini ko...

Manik - Kya???

Person - Yahi ki You love her...

Manik - Haan mai bhi yahi...

Then Manik turned towards the person and found her smiling at him.

Manik - Aliya tum... Tum kab aayi...

(The person was none other than Aliya)

Aaliya - Bas abhi abhi ayi hoon mai jab tum apni better half ki khoobsurati nihaar rahe the...

Manik - No Aaliya... It's nothing of that sort... Mai to bas...

Aaliya started laughing - Relax Mr.Romeo mujhe sab pata hai. I can read it in your eyes. Kam se kam mujhse to mat chupao.

Both Manik and Aaliya began chatting and laughing on some silly jokes which didn't go unnoticed by Nandini.

As soon as Nandini reached the stage, Aaliya and Manik stopped talking.

This further hurt Nandini as she again felt that she came between Manik and Aaliya.

The guests started pouring in on the stage one by one to wish the newly weds.

Nandini faked a smile all this while as a lot of things were going on in her mind regarding Manik and Aaliya.

After completing the formalities of meeting the guests, it was now time for dinner.

All the guests were called for dinner.

Only Manik , Nandini were left on stage along with a couple of Manik's friends.

Manik wanted to compliment Nandini about her look but he wasn't getting any chance because of his friends and to top it all,Nandini was completely avoiding looking at Manik.

Now was the time for some music and dance.

Manik's friends took him along with them to the dance floor.

Nandini saw that Aaliya was standing alone,so she took this opportunity to talk to her.

Nandini walked to Aaliya and said- Hi Aaliya...

Aaliya - Oh hi Nandini... Kaisi ho???

Nandini - Mai theek hoon... Can we talk???

Aaliya - Ofcourse Nandini... Isme poochne ki kya baat hai. Bolo na.

Nandini - Aaliya mai ghuma firake baat nahi karna chahti. I'll come straight to the point. I m really sorry for everything...

Aaliya - Sorry ??? But why Nandini??? Tumne Kuch kiya hi nahi to y this sorry?

Nandini - For coming in between you and Manik. I know that both of you love each other aur mai beech mein aagayi tum dono ke.
But believe me Aaliya I never intended to... Agar mere bas me hota to mai kabhi...

Aaliya - Nandini relax... Tum ye sab kya keh rahi ho. This is not at all true that You came between me and Manik. Infact, I think there was nothing between Manik and me in the first place. We were just friends ... I mean I had feelings for Manik initially but eventually we realised that it was not love. And don't ever think that u came between us.

Nandini - But Aaliya...

Aaliya - Nandini... tum bilkul bhi mat sonchna in sab cheezo ke baare me. Manik sirf Aur sirf tumhara hai. Never ever doubt his loyalty towards u. I m glad that you shared this with me. Agar tum share nahi karti to sach kabhi pata nahi chalta tumhe. Aur Waise bhi... Mai itni hot hoon ki mujhe koi bhi ladka mil sakta hai. So don't think that I will keep sulking or worse snatch Manik from you.

Saying this Aaliya laughed and Nandini too joined her.

Nandini - Thanks Aaliya...

Aaliya - It's Ok dear. We are friends now.so no sorry no thank you.ok... Let's just leave this topic here itself. It's time to enjoy. Let's just hit the dance floor.

Saying this Aaliya took Nandini to the dance floor.

The conversation of Aaliya and Nandini was heard by someone who was standing behind them at a distance .

As soon as Nandini and Aaliya reached the dance floor, the music changed .

All the couples started dancing together.

Manik on Seeing Nandini walked upto her and forwarded his hand.

Nandini hesitatingly took Manik's hand.

Manik took Nandini to the centre of the stage and the spotlight fell on them .

Dekha hazaro dafa aapko
Phir bekarari kaisi hai

(Manik was just lost in Nandini's eyes)

Sambhale sambhalta nahi yeh dil
Kuch pyaar mein baat aisi hai

(Both of them moved to the rhythm of the music completely forgetting the others)

Lekar ijazat ab aap se
Saansein yeh aati jati hain

(Manik twirled Nandini twice and held her waist with his free hand)

Dhoondhe se milte nahi hai hum
Bas aap hi aap baki hain

(Manik's hand travelled to Nandini's exposed back and he slightly pulled Nandini towards him)

Pal bhar na doori sahe aap se
Betabiyan yeh kuch aur hain

(Nandini tried to move away from Manik but he held her hand)

Hum door ho ke bhi paas hain
Nazdeekiyan yeh kuch aur hain

(Nandini's back was facing Manik and Manik hugged her from behind while swaying to the music)

Dekha hazaro dafaa aapko
Phir bekarari kaisi hai
Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil
Kuch pyar mein baat aisi hai

(The partners changed and now Nandini was dancing with Raj and Manik with Nyonika but their eyes were fixed on each other.)

Aagosh mein hain jo aapki
Aisa sukun aur paaye kahaan
Aankhein hamein raas aa gayi
Ab hum yahaan se jaaye kahan

( The partners changed again and finally Manik and Nandini were back together)

Dekha hazaron dafa aapko
Phir bekarari kaisi hai
Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil
Kuch pyaar mein baat aisi hai
(Manik lifted Nandini and twirled around once with her)


Phir bekarari kaisi hai...
(The music stopped but both Manik and Nandini were lost in each other)

They came back to their senses after the guests cheered them with their claps.

Nyonika fumed in anger seeing Manik and Nandini dancing so close to each other.

She instantly left the party and went to her room.

Manik held Nandini's hand and took her to the terrace( their usual hangout place)

As soon as they reached there, Manik left Nandini's hand and said- I am sorry Nandini, mujhe tumse baat karni thi isiliye mai Tumhe yahan le aaya.

Nandini - Kya baat karni hai apko humse...

Manik - Bahut Saari baatein karni hai par mujhe samajhme nahi aaraha ki kaha se shuru karoon?

Nandini - Par usse Pehle Hume aapse Kuch kehna tha... Wo hum kehna chahte the ki ...

Manik didn't let Nandini finish her statement by placing his index finger on her lips.

Manik - Shhh... Aaj Kuch mat kaho... Just listen to me...

Nandini looked at Manik's finger and then at his face.

Manik - Nandini... You are looking beautiful...

Nandini lowered her head on this compliment by Manik. She turned back to leave.

But Manik held her dupatta.

Nandini turned towards Manik and said- Manik leave my dupatta... Let me go...

Manik - Don't go Nandini... Not this time.

Saying this he pulled Nandini towards him .

Due to the sudden pull, Nandini crashed with Manik's chest.


Nandini closed her eyes to feel the moment.

Manik - Nandini Ek baat kahu...

Nandini - Hmm...

Manik -

You know I never felt the way before with anyone the way I feel when I am this close to you.

I just want to capture this moment forever in my heart.

And never let you go away from me. Never ever...

Mujhe pata nahi ye feeling... I don't know what this feeling is!???

But if this feeling is what people call Love then yes... I admit that I am in love with you...


Done with another update...

Hope you guys like it...

Ignore the typos if any.

So guys... What do you think... Whatever happened just now is it a dream or reality???

If it's a reality, what will happen next???

If it's a dream whose dream is it???

And don't kill me for these questions. I know I m wicked...

Do drop in your comments

And guys, this update was written in a hurry so please forgive me if you find any mistakes, please let me know. I will correct them...

NeysaSingh thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update and I guess it's Manik's dream but please prove me wrong because I really want to see Manik confessing it and update soon eagerly waiting for it
RainFlies thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update

finally alya Nandini talk..

hope yeh koi dream Na ho
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Posted: 8 years ago
Are nhiii plz plz plz.. dream nHi Yaar.. humare Sapna pe paani Mat fekna.. 😆
loved the update amazing amazing amazing
❤️
syami thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow this was amazing
like finally nandu came to
know there's nth
btwn aliya and him
thx to aliya she
sorted big misunderstanding

hope nandu gives chance to him
Their moment were so cute
they danced and terrace talk wow
was much need so excited for
nxt part
shwetparth143 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
FINALLY MANIK CONFESSED HIS LOVE...NICE UPDATE
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I reas the full ff...pleaae update soon dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys...

I am back with another update of this story.


CHAPTER -57

Manik - Nandini... I love you very very much.

Do you love me???

Nandini couldn't believe what she just heard.

She didn't know how to react.

Whatever Manik just said was something she had craved to hear from his mouth.

The day had finally come when her wish got fulfilled.

God has finally given Manik's confession as an answer to all her prayers.

Nandini closed her eyes and thanked God several times to listening to her prayers.

Nandini had suffered a lot for so long and finally she was getting some peace.

Nandini selfthought - Thank you God for listening to my prayers. Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ki Manik ne ye sab kaha mujhse .

Is this all real or am I dreaming ?

No this can't be a dream.

Agar ye dream hua to.

Nandini didn't have the courage to open her eyes.

But she had to do this.

Nandini slowly opened her eyes and found that Manik wasn't in front of her.

For a moment her heart stopped beating.

Her greatest fear had come true.

She was just dreaming about Manik.

Nandini looked at the sky and laughed on her fate.

Her dreams were a shattered again.

Nandini was still complaining to God in her mind when she heard Manik's voice.

Manik - Nandini...

Nandini looked down and found Manik on his knees in front of her.

Manik had held a ring in his right hand.

Manik - Nandini tum upar kyu dekh rahi thi. Mai to yaha hoon.

Nandini - Manik aap neeche kyu baithe ho. Aur aap kab aaye?

Manik - What??? What do you mean ke mai kab aaya. Mai to kabse yahi Par hoon. Infact mai hi tumhe yahan lekar aaya tha. Remember...

Nandini then realised that she wasn't dreaming . Nandini mentally slapped herself for being so stupid to think that it was a dream.

Manik -

Arey yaar...

Itna soch kya rahi ho ?

I know what your answer would be?

But I still want to hear it from you.

Ab jawab de bhi do takay mai Tumhe ye ring pehna saku.

Or do you want me to sit in this position the entire night?

Ya fir tum mana karne wali ho?

Nandini didn't say anything.

Nandini was so overwhelmed with the sweet gesture of Manik that she had tears in her eyes.

Manik saw this and got up immediately to wipe her tears.

Manik - Kya hua Nandini??? Tum to kyu rahi ho? Kya Maine Kuch galat bol diya?

Agar aisa hai to I am really sorry. I never intended to hurt you.

Please stop crying.

Nandini - Mai ro nahi rahi hu... Ye to bas...

Manik wiped Nandini's tears and said- It's Ok Nandini. I think I shouldn't have hurried things up. But it's Ok . We will take it slow. I will take it slow. There is no need to rush. Take your time to give your answer.

I will wait for it . Aur Haan tumhara Jo bhi jawab hoga mujhe manzoor hoga. Ok...

Nandini looked into Manik's eyes and they shared a cute eyelock.

Their moment was disturbed by someone clearing their throat.

Manik looked at the direction of the person and found that it was Aaliya.

Manik - Aaliya tum???

Aaliya - Yes. Sorry to disturb you guys. But abhi mujhe Jana hai isiliye tumhe Bye karne aayi thi.

Manik - It's Ok Aaliya. U don't have to say sorry. Hum log to bas baat kar rahe the.

Aaliya hugged Manik in a friendly way and whispered in Manik's ears- Agar bas baat karne se yahan ka temperature Itna badh gaya hai to I can imagine aage kya haal hoga?

Manik gave a smile and looked at Nandini.

Aliya - Anyways Bye guys. See you soon.

And Haan Nandini now he is all yours. But I suggest you both have to wait till the guests leave.

And Aliya winked at Nandini and left.

Nandini to Manik- I think Aliya is right. Hume party me wapas Jana chahiye.

Manik - As you say. Let's go.

With this both of them went and joined others.

In the meantime, Nyonika was plotting with Soha on how to keep Manik away from Nandini.

Soha - Nyonika Aunty aap itna soch kyu rahi ho? U can use the same excuse which u used last time with Vivek.

Nyonika - Nahi Soha Manik won't buy that excuse so easily.

Vivek hamara business handle karta tha isiliye Maine use business emergency ka bahana banaya tha.

But I don't think Manik ko convince karna itna aasaan hoga.

Hume Kuch aur sochna hoga.

Soha - Agar Manik ko yahan se bhejne ke bajay hum Nandini ko hi kahi dur bhejde toh.

Nyonika - Matlab.

Soha - Matlab ye ki Agar Nandini Uske Maa ke ghar chali jaye toh???

Nyonika -Haan ye baat sahi kahi tumne. Pag phere ke bahane hi sahi Kuch din to Nandini Manik se dur rahegi.

Soha - Hmm... To aap Nandini ki Maa se abhi baat kar lijiye .

Nyonika - Ok let's go.

With this both of them too came back to the party.



Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.


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RainFlies thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
she was not dreaming... even i got sad by knowing it was dream but then next moment, he was in front of her and it wasnt a dream...thank god..

how i wish nandini bhi confess kar deti..i cant wait more now..its already so late..plz now dont delay manan togetherness..do it asap plz..

and nyo is here with her new plans..plz do smthing and let manik go with nandini

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