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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely .really First outing was awesome I think you should write more outing scene . I am very exciting to read more Manan scene..
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was so lovely
thy sud spend some time alone
all thanks to navya
it was so awesome
to read some of their moments
can't wait for next chappy
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Hi guys...

How are you all.

Did anybody miss me or my story...

I am sure you did.

So here is the update...

CHAPTER -49

Manik and Nandini got down the car and went inside the house.

Nyonika was sitting on the couch and got up immediately as soon as Manik and Nandini entered.

Nyonika - Thank God tum log aagaye. Waise Bachche kaha hai?

Manik - Wo dono Navya ke sath uske ghar gaye hai .

Nyonika - Oh. Perfect. Nandini tum Chalo mere sath. We are going out.

Manik - Going out? Mom abhi abhi to hum log bahar se aaye hai. Aur apko Nandini ke sath bahar Jana hai. Thak gayi hogi wo. Thodi der baad me chale Jana. What's the urgency?

Nyonika - Urgency hai. Tu chup kar. Mujhe mat sikha.

Then Nyonika turned towards Nandini and asked - Nandini tum chalogi na mere sath.

Nandini looked at Manik and then at Nyonika.

She didn't know what to say.

Nyonika - It's Ok Beta agar tum nahi aana chahti to koi baat nahi.

Nandini - Nahi. Aisi baat Nahi hai. Mai chalungi na aapke sath. And I m not at all tired.

Saying this she looked at Manik and assured him with her eyes that she is fine.

Manik - Ok fine. Jao. But Mom aap log jaa kaha rahe ho?

Nyonika whispered in Manik's ears - It's a surprise for you . And I am sure you will love it.

Nandini was a bit away from them and couldn't hear what Nyonika said.

Manik - Mom ... You and your surprises. Let's see what it is.

Nyonika - Chalo Nandini let's go.

With this both Nandini and Nyonika left.

Manik took out his mobile and dialled Cabir's number.

Cabir - Hello Mr. Lover Boy... How was your date with Nandini.

Manik - Cabir yaar... kabhi to serious hojaya kar. Tell me about the deal.

Cabir - Oh deal. We got it bro.

Manik - That's great news. Thanks yaar.

Cabir - Oye. Chup kar. Ye thanks wanks mat bol .Ok.

Manik - Ok.

Cabir - Acha ek baat bata. On a serious note Kuch baat aage badi ya nahi. I mean you and Nandini...

A smile appeared on Manik's face remembering the time he got to spend with Nandini.

Manik - Yeah... A little bit.

Cabir - Oh . I see... A little bit huh...

I can see the smile on your face bro.That says it all.

Manik - Cabir... Shut up...

And Manik disconnected the call and went to his room.

Manik opened the cupboard to search something when he found the letter of Nandini's project of interior decoration.

Manik had no idea about the letter.

He looked at the date and found that Nandini had got the letter before their marriage.

Manik self thought-

Nandini ko ye letter bahut Pehle Mila tha.

But usne mujhe bataya kyu nahi is baare me.

Kahi use ye toh nahi lagraha hai ki mai iske liye mana kar doonga.

I have to talk to her about this.

If she really wants to do this, then why would I stop her.

After all it is her passion, her only dream.

I will support her in this.

Meanwhile Nandini and Nyonika went to the shopping mall to buy some dresses and other stuff for Nandini so that she can wear it in Capetown.

Nyonika selected some dresses for Nandini which were way too short than the dresses worn by Nandini.

Nandini's eyes widened at seeing the short dresses and she tried to protest but Nyonika didn't listen to her.

Nandini - Mom mai ye sab dresses kaise pehen sakti hoon. I mean ye bahut hi short hai...

Nyonika - Nandini Beta tum Cape Town me kya salwar kameez aur saree pehnogi... Nahi na. So stop arguing and take these dresses.

Nandini nodded and took the dresses.

Nyonika also suggested Nandini to buy some swim wear but Nandini said - But Mom mujhe to swimming hi nahi aati . To mai ye lekar kya karungi.

Nyonika - Acha. Ok then.

Nandini mentally patted herself for coming up with an excuse at proper time to escape buying that swimwear.

But Nyonika was 2 Steps ahead of Nandini.

Nyonika selfthought - Mai Janti hu tum bahane bana rahi ho . Tumhe swimming nahi aati hai na. Koi baat nahi. Manik tumhe sikha dega.

Nyonika bought the swimwear for Nandini without her knowledge.

Nandini and Nyonika then shopped for Aarav-Khushi and Manik.

After finishing everything they reached home.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

I know it's small but then you will be getting regular updates of similar length from now on. So I don't think anybody will be having a problem regarding the length of the chapter.

If anyone has a problem then feel free to tell me.

I am always up for suggestions.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.. Loved it.. Neyonika hi Manan ki naiya(boat) par krwaegi.. Hehe..
Loved the update..

N yes no issues with the length of the chps
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg update
Lovd it
Manik ke liye toh bht acha surprise hoga ye
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update...
Nandini & nyonika went 4 shopping...
Manik got d letter...
Nyonika's simply superb...
Manbir's convo was awesome...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice update. ... aur nyonoika nandu ko shopping par le gyi h ... its awesome. ... and manbir canvo is nice... and am okay with this chapter length. .. waiting for next update eagerly. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update really love this story very desperately waiting for update long wala plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hope those dresses will work atleast.
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER -50

Nandini and Nyonika reached home after shopping.

Nyonika was too tired and went directly to her room.

Nandini took all the shopped items to her room and kept it in the cupboard.

Manik was there in the room working on his laptop.

Nandini went to freshen up and came out of the washroom.

Manik was still busy in his work that he didn't even look at Nandini even for once.

This act of Manik bothered Nandini.

She had thought that they would get to spend time with each other now that the kids weren't there at home.

Nandini went to him and asked - Aap kya kar rahe ho itni der se. Mai kabse observe kar rahi hu ki apne ek baar bhi meri taraf nahi Dekha. Aisa kya important kaam kar rahe ho aap.

Manik looked at her and said- Kyu batau mai Tumhe. Kya har baat batana zaruri hai?

Nandini - Kya hogaya hai aapko. Aise kyu bol rahe ho aap.

Manik -

Aur kya bolu Nandini?

Kya Tum har baat batati ho mujhe ?

Nandini got confused hearing this.

Nandini - But Maine aapse kya chupaya hai????

Manik - Acha to tumne Kuch bhi nahi chupaya...

Nandini - Nahi Maine to Kuch nahi chupaya.

Manik - To fir Ye kya hai.

Saying this he showed her the letter of Nandini's assignment.

Nandini Was shocked to see the letter in Manik's hand.

Nandini -Ye aapko kaha se Mila??? Ye toh...

Manik - That's not the question here. What matters is you have hidden this from me.

Nandini - Manik aisa nahi hai. Mujhe laga ki ...

Manik - Kya laga Nandini ke mujhe kabhi nahi pata chalega iske baare me.

Nandini - Aisa nahi hai... Aap please shaant hojaiye. Ye letter mujhe shaadi se Pehle Mila tha. But now things have changed. I don't want to do that project now.

Manik - Nandini it's not correct. Just because we are married now it doesn't mean that you forget your dreams. I know that interior designing is your passion so you should pursue your dream.

Nandini - But Agar mai job karungi to Aarav-Khushi akele hojayenge ghar pe.

Manik - Nandini Ab wo log bade hogaye hai. Soon they will be joining school. So you can go for your job in the available Time.

Nandini thought that Manik is correct.

Manik - Nandini I don't want you to forget your dreams just for the sake of Aarav-Khushi. I want you to take up this job.

Nandini - Ok. Agar aap keh rahe ho to i will do this job.

Manik - Good.

Nandini smiled at Manik.

Manik - What? Why are you smiling?

Nandini came near Manik and kissed him on his cheek and said- Thanks. Ap sach me bahut ache ho.

Saying this she hugged him . Manik was shocked with the sudden hug.

He hugged her back.

Manik - Nandini you don't need to thank me for anything.

Nandini - I know. You are a real superhero.

Manik smiled hearing the word SuperHero.

Nandini broke the hug and said - Ek baat bolu...

Manik - Bolo.

Nandini - Please aap gussa mat hona kabhi mujhse. Aapke gusse se mujhe dar Lagta hai.

Manik - I promise mai tumpe kabhi gussa nahi honga.

Nandini - Hmm... Good...

Manik - Acha Waise Tum Mom ke sath kaha gayi thi?

Nandini - Wo humlog shopping pe gaye the. Aapko pata Hai Mom ne kitni Saari shopping karwai .

Manik thought to himself - Mom kabhi nahi sudhrengi . Maine mana kiya tha but fir bhi.

Nandini was non stop continuing with her talks about what all things they got for their vacation.

Manik held Nandini by her waist and pulled her towards him and kept his finger on her lips to stop her .

Manik - Shhh... Kitna bolti ho yaar tum. Thakti nahi ho kya.

Nandini looked at Manik's finger on her lips and lowered her head.

Manik lifted her head and brought his face close to Nandini's face and was about to kiss her but...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

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