#9//The Ex's At War// Link of Thread 10 (RECTIFIED) on Pg 1

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

It was heart jumping update...
Kaddu baby rockzzz 😆
She is so cute...
Hmmm Manan... Poor Manik
Nandu is to confuse..
Furious Manik is so romantic hahaha..

Rewa is back mazza aayega..

Thank u
Keep smiling

Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Awesome as always...
That was too cute of Manini to call the mehendi design as worms...
And Manik and his crazy ideas to declare to the world...
I guess Manini is really very fond of Rose's bum, that whenever and wherever she get an opportunity she puts some thing on it and this time it's haldi...
That might be so embarrassing and so much of fun...
Shit and that asshole women is back...
Nandini's baseless rants made him come to conclusion and he finally got to know te truth...

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

Aap never failed to make me smile😊

Manini,, and rose ki part to mai bahut enjoy ki

Bechari nandu,, ab kya karegi

But manik ko pata chal gaya. Thodasa!!

At least REWA PE dought aa gayi. Hena ??

Aap q ruki is waqt??

Mujhe jaanna hai aage kya hoga?😕

Thoda aur dete to aap ko kya hoga??😕

Sunday tak mai kese wait karooo😕

Sumana ji. At least juldy promo deejiye!! Munde nai hoga!!

Itny din kya hoga?? Kese karegaa eh dono

Eh sub soach soach ke maine saari nails with fingers kha rahi hu

So juldy promo deejiye

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#454

Its pure bliss to read about the family time of these three! Hayee And the visuals you manage to create with your words, every single time, be total LOVE! ❤️ Hahaha and Manini thinking mehendi as "wolms"😆

That was a very sweet MaNan moment! Oh and such a one track mind Manik is😆 It was so good how you had penned down Nandini's inner turmoil! You always nail that! :D Poor Nandu. Such a fix she has been thrown into. But I totally felt sorry for Navya! Manik would have left her jobless just coz his romance was being bothered! 🤣

And yet again Manini be the boss!! What a kickass rockstar! 😎😆 But srsly she called the haldi as potty!?😆😆 Good lord!😆 But damn she is such a villain to Rose! Cute one at that kay!😆 Now I srsly wanna see her rot Rewa too!😆

And Manik like always is smart!! I did want him to know everything on his own which he was highly capable and yooo!! Now that he also has got super close to getting it out of Nandu's mouth I can't wait to see how he is gonna handle the situation!! And some classy band bajaoing of Rewa please!😃😆

This update was a perfect combo of everything! Totally loved it!! Thanks a ton for this! Now like always I can't wait for the next update!! Eeks!😃😆

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aarvi-manan

@aarvi-manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#455

waoo yar nice update...but kya yar bich me hi chod diya...manan ki conversation start hi hui thi or tumne break lga diya...

now plz update next part soon...

waiting

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skheena444

@skheena444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#456

Great update but can u plzzz update twice a week.ur stories r great m addicted n m sure whoever read it theyget addicted to it

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#457

hey thanks for the pm...

enjoyed the update very much...

loved the morning scene where manik was waking up nandu n manini was stuffed into her mommy...so cute, lovely n blissful scene...

manini baby isshh besttt...
she thought on her mommyz hand thele ale wolms... awww cho chweet of hel...

n then she found same on her hand...n didn't liked the smell of it... tried to get rid of it by washing her hands...awww baby...

this wasn't enough of her so she got to see potty on mukti...lolzzz but after that her doubts got cleared she toh enjoyed playing like holi by applying on her daddy n mommy...

this doesn't stop here... she wanted to take revenge from her Navya aunty but hel loshh aunty came in between n then... it was so funny... n maniniz gyan to her was dammnnn cute... "Sholly Losh aunty...I will clean it...Mommy shays we should be elp othles when they need ushh",...$UPER CUTE...😊

manik tried to figure out why nandu was behaving so different... she was saying to him to stay away from each other for 15days...n here manik cant stay away from his life his nandu n manini not even for 15seconds...

n he asked her was she was on her dates or pregnant... heheee...he looks so adorable...

then came rewa...huhhh...manik tried his level best to not show his anger infront of her when she was blabbering...

manini drained out manikz battery... but this tym it help them from parting away as manik took nanduz cell n with that he got little hint ...at that he couldn't join the dots but decoded the puzzle in the end...

manik wanted to dance cozily with nandu...awww but poor nandu couldn't help it so she went away n manik finally succeeded in finding out the reason behind nanduz restlessness...

NOW MANIK WILL SORT OUT EVERYTHING as now he is also aware of rewa's intention...

Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago

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aishaph

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Posted: 9 years ago

#458

awsome update
love manini
she is so cute
poor rose
manik is so intelligent figure out everything so easliy
thanks for pm

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kemotors

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Posted: 9 years ago

#459

Sholly for commenting late..Do u knw MaNan BOOKER PRIZE awarded is declared by me 4 u ..yayyy clap..After chapter 21 dis one is my favorite..i thoroughly enjoyed it..Do u knw whenever ex's get updated it wil brng 100 watt smile on my face..yesterday i was drooling over my phone and laughing ..my mum scold me for laughing like a maniac.."eee potty"..dat kid i luv her sho muchhh..U R My favorite and best MANAN WRITER..luVV U sho muchhh.keep going..best of luck..see u on next sunday...byeee..one more thng manini-Losh aunty combination is very gud..