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Zara Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#461

This is soo freaking awesome!

I couldn't get over this!

Trust me i couldn't!

Sooorryyy for this chotu comment!

Meri behen hospitalsied hai and i am reading this chupke!

U can never imagine that spott man!

Manini babyyy:-)

She is totall loveee yaa❤️

A complete bundle of joy and cuteness!

Continue soon!

Will be waiting!

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Sehjal

@Sehjal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#462

Wow yar just superb.

Manik got to know the real reason.

Its awesome dear.

Loved it.

Stay bless nd keep it up.

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mickeym

@mickeym

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Posted: 9 years ago

#463

Beautiful update dear ..Manini baby is so cute ..now manik knows everything ..hope he will find a solution ...

And that rewa is back ...huh

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#464

Awesome update. Nandini's hurtful state was well written. Manan and manini's moments were adorable. Nandini's attempts failed to convince manik.haldi part was amazing. Lol poor rose.manini rocked rofl🤣.manini's words about help was phenomenal.u nailed it. Manan's moments were amazing. Omg manik got to know about wat nandini was hiding. Wat rewa is back .eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.this story is getting interesting. Love to read further

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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Fatheen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#465

Haaaye update was wonderful. . Sorry for not commenting last time .. was hell packed with the assignments ..

Nandu's reactions and her situation was described wonderfully. . Manik is so smart .. he found out easily but as usual nandu will lie and everything wil go up side down .. and u being the unpredictable writer pata nhi kya kya hoga .. but I'm sure about one thing .. that it will be interesting to read ..

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#466

Hey dear awesome update

Thanks for pm

It was lovely update

Full of emtions

Mannine is cute pie

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#467

awesome update

loved it

it was fab

full of different kind of emotions

manani loved her

and manan confrontation

continue soon

thanks for d pm

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#468

Awesome update.

Loved the morning sequence,the way Manik z waking up Nandini. Caring Manik. Manini, she thought that mehandi z worms. But she saved Nandini from Manik's further questions.

Manini always able to finish the charge n Manik's mobile.

So Manik come to know about the problems n AURA. Good, I really don't want any sacrifice things to happen. So finally Manik talked to cabir. And I got the idea of Nandini's weird behavior.

So Rewa z back, Manik got an idea about her evil plan. I loved it when he said her that she is also with them .Rewa got little scared when he said to arrange a meeting with her boss.

Manini, she thought that turmeric paste z potty. But loved the way Nandini made her understand that it is turmeric. Rose, manini's little mistake made her embossed. Loved the way manini tried to elp her. Hooo how can someone so cute.

Manan talking, the way Nandini z trying to control Manik's anger. Trying to hide the Aura thing from him,it was nice. But Manik z Manik, he knows her very well. Finally he managed to spill the truth from her.