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Cute_Kavya

@Cute_Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#891

Hey mawara update was nyc wid full of emotions i too cried when they both were seperating yrr nandini ne love k prof mein manik se dur jane ka manga,both are equally hurted nandu ko ek mauka dena chahiye usne manik k pyar ko bhi jutha kaha :'( :'( nw waiting for nxt part thnx 4 pm

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Prashi26

@Prashi26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#892

This was really a very emotional update!

I am still crying over it!

Starting was so beautiful!

Don't know what's going to be next!

You seriously expressed every emotion very good!

The separation was very painful for both of them!

Do continue soon!

Thanks for the pm!

Keep writing!

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#893

Sorry for late comment

Was stuck with studies

And update was so emotional and lovely

It was awesome and loved it to the core

Literally crying now

But manik ko ye pehle hi bata dena chahiye

At least she might have listened to him

And haa he deserve this for hiding things from her

And haa she will come back to manik soon

As she can't live without him

Continue soon

Thanks for d pm

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Pravallika69

@Pravallika69

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#894

Sorry for being late
So emotional n u literally got me in tears the way their morning started n the way manik was not wishing to go
Too much emotional the prologue s completed aab
Dint expect dis to hpn but yes he lied atleast he would have said her the truth earlier n she compared hi love as lust
Dis s soo heart wrenching n hurting
Ur update have always the power to make me happy n cry n u got tears in my eyes
Jus speechless wanna n say more but no words jus emotional update
Shit manik fainted aab yeh kya hai cliffhanger pls update soon can't wait

Thanks for pm
Lots of love
Pravallika

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fireflies333

@fireflies333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#895

such an emotional update!!!! true love never fails

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lissy16

@lissy16

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#896

i am crying...😭
please update fast..

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GAYATHRICR

@GAYATHRICR

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#897

Itna emotional update. Sab kuch katam hogaya. Bechara Manik he didnt get time to explain himself. Update soon.

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tiya09

@tiya09

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#898

Oho manik truth has come out.. Both r in so much pain ..can't see them like this ..plz do something.. Make them together.. I knw this not a simple story..but I have Faith on u ..update next part soon . 😊 ..keep smiling 😊

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Cooki

@Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#899

It's so heartbreaking & emotional update dear..
Nandini was trusting him so much & just bcoz someone told her something, she didn't even give chance to him for justification..
But she is also right at her place...
How can she just make peace with the new found info like that only!?
Aryaman got punches from manik..
He was so scared...
What did nandini ask him to prove his love!??
& he obeyed her..
Everyone was telling him to stop her...
But he couldn't..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..