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Sonu137

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Heyy

Both the updates were amazing!!

Rishab knew about manik but he gave him a second chance !!

Thank god rishab understood the depth of their love!!

Manik really cares for him a lot!!

Nandini sold her ring to help manik and he bought her ring back wow!!

And the paragliding scene was my fav!!

Wow that was superb!!

And maniks bday and he introduced to everyone as his girlfriend!!

Ufff again soha !!

But thanks to her atleast they confessed their feelings!!

And what came next was their love!!

Awesome updates

Thanks for pm

Take care

Keep smiling

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Awesome update. Way u penned was commendable. Hats off. Manan's moments were beautiful.nandini's cute antics were mindblowing.paragliding part was amazing.u nailed it. Rishab trust manik so much.manan's bond with rishab was blissful. Night club part was fabulous.wow Nandini enjoyed alot.Manik's birthday part was superb. Manan's confession was phenomenal.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.this story is getting interesting. Love to read further

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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Prabhleen Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

It was toh so cute Update ...
Finally they confessed their love to each other ...
Amazing Update ...
Loved it ...
Continue Soon ... 😳

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Zoha Sadaqat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

u write exceptionally well dear! this was warm, heart felt and breathtakingly beautiful

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ROOP0605

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

Amazing

Outstanding

Mind blowing

Eagerly waiting for next part

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

very beautiful update yaar...my fav scene was their confession and the rain...paragliding scene was beautifully penned dear... She want an essurance for manik that she is maniks girl...thats y she instigated the monster in him ... Totally an eventful update ...paragliding,confession and their love making...thanks for this lovely and long update dear...

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Swift007

@Swift007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

What an update

Paragliding scene ,confession was my fav

It was very good

Totally an unexpected update

Loved it

Continue soon

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

So beautiful.. I want to read it again..
Everything was just pure bliss.. my favorite part was Ofcrse the confession,,in rain.. woww. N d many things..
I loved it

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humerashaikh18

@humerashaikh18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#329

Hii...read all chapters in one go luved the story line its an awesome story...from where u bring so much brains dont know mashallah...may god bless uh...n abt update it was amazing specially confession part but nandu ko pata chalega manik ke bare me to pata nai kya hoga...cont soon waiting for next part

Stay blessed

Keep writing always

Take care

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aishaph

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Posted: 9 years ago

#330

such a beautiful n unique story
loving it very very much
awsome update
very long
loved it
paragliding scene was my fav
nandu was enjoying the moment just like a free bird
second fav was confession
will be waiting for next update

Edited by aishaph - 9 years ago

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