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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Wow awesome Amazing outstanding update...

Wont be able to put it in words..

It was soo beautiful...

Cant say a particular scene as whole update was ma fav...

Manan were soo wow...

And mao u were amazing...

Luved it to the core..

Cant wait for nxt update..

Update soon...

Love you soo mch Mao ur the best..

I LOVE YOU❤️

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Nice update

Paragliding wow that was super loved it they r sooo cute together

Manik ka birthday party nd alll his mates wer nice to her but that soha felt like killing her

Finally they confessed

The scene I liked is the paragliding nd wen manik gav her the ring that was beautiful

Continue sooonnn

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RUBI

@bluelake99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

no scene s better than the Confession nd their Special Love Making nd the aftermath .. ❤️

beautifully written hon !! 👍🏼 👏

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@bluelake99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

bt there s a question ,, sry 2 interrupt ,, bt if manik s street child ,, dont knw abt his parents ,, how he knw d birthday ,, i mean celebration nd all .. 😕

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devilkhushi

@devilkhushi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Awesome update loved it so finally manan is one I hope nobody will separate them ever please let nandini have her eyes back let manan life a happy life with manik fully fine n happy

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Aditi jain

@kewlgirl

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#206

the best update of this ff

such a cute start

n ended with hot n passionate romance

loved it throughout

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: kewlgirl
the best update of this ff
such a cute start
n ended with hot n passionate romance

loved it throughout

No doubt the best update of this ff...

by the way unressed on pg 28

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monstermanik

@monstermanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

wonderful updates..loved it

manik slid her mumma's ring ...
that was my fav scene...

confession was beautifully penned down...
last part...tooo hottt...

cont soon

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#209

That was so good... Amazing... So much was happening... And loved it how Manik was taking initiative to fulfil her wants. Her dreams... May it was just paragliding.. But actually going n doing for her makes it all the more special

N friends she introduce krwana always shows the seriousness of the relationship... N actually could imagine nandu looking like a doll in a prom dress...

N confession n romance to has to be the best...

But seriously the whole update was just mind blowing... Among the finest chpt you've written...

My fav moment has to be the ring scene n Manik backing of coz he doesn't want her to regret tomorrow morning...

Thank u for this quick n etnaaa long update

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

😊👏