#4 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE (Link to next thread PG-1)

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#881

okay so here the journey finally comes to an end...whatever it is started it has to end it...

today is the day where 2 story which i read has ended...

this story was very unique from other stories which was the USP of the story...

this last part was very good...😊

today's highlight portion was manik playing the role of dai maa n helping nandu to give birth to her baby...

liked the name of baby girl...

n most hilarious part was mommy n daddy u wele playing last night witout meee... i heald mommy 'haldel manik'...heheee🤣...hehee

this was very cute... I've been waiting for you to wake up fol like a hundled hours!" HUNDELD HOURS...AWWW

scene/phase i liked the most...

when manik didn't gaveup on them n fight for her to come back n went at aryaman's home at nyt in rain on horse to get back her...this was very good...

even including jenny on their marriage...

their horse riding was also used to be veryyy good...

n today's baby birth scene...

scene which i don't like much...
I'm thinking.

wait na...I'm thinking...

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aaammm

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yaad krne do...
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🤔

aa gya yaad
manikz thinking in starting when he was trying to be hypocrite...he cannot be one woman man but expected from nandu to be one man woman...but I guess this was also needed in the story to distinguish btw two ppl thinking... so this is also not the one phase which i didn't liked...

..Lem me think once more..

..what could be next...

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I think rishab drama...but that also needed as thinking from brother's pov...

so there is nothing which i don't liked in the story...

n lastly u asked which part u didn't add which i wanted... so I wanted little more cute moments of the trio mommy, daddy n
adiva...

I THINK THERE WON'T BE ANY EPILOGUE OF THIS STORY
WOULD THERE BE ANY...???

Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago

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@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#882

Ohh my gosshhh

Cnt blve its d end...

Nooo

i loved it whole

Din like d part where...

naaa

Drz no part i din enjoyyddd

N this last one ws anzzznnggg

Evrythnn...

Super amazznnggg

Manik nandini n babyyy adiva...

Happyy family

Gt no wrds :) :)

Fabb stryyy :)

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Achiniti

@Achiniti

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#883

Beautiful journey of manan

Beautifully written

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#884

Omg incredibly beautiful mind blowing outstanding spectacular update

Manik love for Nandu is beyond anything in the world that he could let go just to be with her and he never in his life regret of being madly deeply in love with Nandu and now his daughter will experience the love and possessiveness of her daddy as he wont let any guy near his daughter

Loved the ending and thanks for pm

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manepallavi

@manepallavi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#885

awesome ending.luved d whole ff.it was awesome reading it.plz continue writing n cum up wid a new ff soon

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#886

cute n beautiful part

romantic update

never thought manik will be thinking like this ..." Before I know it she'd be a beautiful young lady with a lot of young boys drooling at her feet.

They'd have to go through me first and I would never let anyone of them touch even the tip of her finger. I always tell Adiva that she wasn't allowed to love any other guys but me. No crushes "

😃

u asked which phase I enjoyed most

the whole story I enjoyed like anything but my favrt phase was when manik s ex wife met nandini n she left him n went to her dad

I was waiting to read how s manik going to get his love back in his life

so yaaa that was my favrt part

superb story yaaar

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AngvilJesfer

@AngvilJesfer

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#887

Ohhh so its the end.

sad toh hu par koi baat nai

Every gud thing shud cum to an end na

N now coming to the update,

It ws penned beautifully

I must say ki u r so gud with wrds

Aww Manik cried wn he came to knw abt the pregnancy

he took care of her so well

N the birth scene... It ws too good

Adiva... Iske bare mein kya bolu?

She's cho chweet

Manik kabhi nai sudharogi na He n his possessiveness

Bt cant blame him he's so in love with this beautiful brats in his language.

Jst loved the update

Thnks fr the pm

Take care n keep ur pen moving

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Hema_

@Hema_

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#888

That was lovely ending to this story!!! Each and every chapter was perfectly written... One of my favourite was when Manik worked for their relationship to get his lady love back... "Adiva" sucha beautiful name loved their parenting part as well <3 Thankyou for this amazing story... Will be missed <3 <3

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SAIFAZMANAN

@SAIFAZMANAN

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#889

Suprbbb

Last part was amazing

This story was awesome... Loved it...

Cute family...

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avneetmalhotra

@avneetmalhotra

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#890

Awww awsme superb amezing wale ending n nandu give birth to there child in there bedroom that was interesting n adive wow what a cute name so BT little bit sad hamare itne aache wale story end ho gae BT koi ni every thing is going to end n I love the starting phrase of manan when nandu came Mumbai n she was behind manik that was amezing sooo all over it was an awsme wale story going

To miss it n plz do write it epilogue plzzz n byy sweety

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