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Posted: 9 years ago
frst I would like to comment abt d last chapter

last chapter? d last chapter? I can't believe this was d last chapter of my most favorite story on MaNan...

how I wish it shldnt end n bas update Aise hi read karti rahoo karti rahoo...

it was heck damn beautiful update..

MaNan frst night after their marriage, it was described most beautifully..so ethreal..

manik really cared n loved his wild lover nandini in all d phases of her maeried life including pregnancy...means right from zelofying her mood swings, physical changes, attending d classes wid her, taking her care in each n every possible way to accompanying her in giving birth to their child and actually feeling her pain...hell beautiful relationship of Manan ...i loved it to d core..

Adiva... so beautiful part of d last update...Manik n Nandini ki daughter..oh m g ...read karte hue bhi happiness feel hota hai...that part when she asked abt d manan game of night...Hahahaha that was so rofl..so cute part...Hahahaha...

I loved d manik...

I loved d nandini

I loved d adiva

I loved d last but not d least update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww alisha u need not thank me baby cox ur the best n u always write something unique which automatically drags me to ur story u hve tat magic in ur hands n jus wow n lovely...
This s one roaller coaster ride baby i rmbr the first update of dis story n felt my god its too bold n at same the wildness in Manan was shown so perfectly dragged me more to this story i love evry story u write but dis s very very close to my heart i dnt kw but i got attached to dis alot il miss dis story very much... Ur every story made me wait like mad i literally come n check evryday for ur story... N wild love tho dnt ask din meh evry two three hours i used to check n dis journey ended so soon its like it jus started yesterday n aaj it ended il misss dis very very badly baby... But evry beautiful thing comes to end same way n dis came to end wid such an awesome note two conolete wild starngers ended up wid a beautiful n comolete family filled wid love wah wah jus wow n awesome dear...

Evey update of dis story was blossful... Best part was jab Manik n Nandu spend time wid each pther after realsing thr live was best n they falling in love when Manik was in pune they forst touch first gorse ride forst kiss the peaceful night in thr arms n the way Manik gaij his trust n finally the way he fight for nandu n beg for her hand to nandu dad n thr wedding best uldates

The uodate which i dint like was jab Manan seperate hua thoda bura laga but it was needed to knownhow imp they both are to each pther sonthr s not even a single update which i dint like everything was jus blossful n perfectly penned down
U have writeen everything which s meeded baby thr s nothing i expected u jus fulfilled every wish so no complaints

I have one complaint tat pls write a sequel for dis pretty pls n jus waiting for epilogue pls do give dear jus waiting

Il miss dis story very badly n pls come up wid new stories n dnt stop writing pretty pls

Thanks for PM
Lots of love
God bless
Muaahhh
Pravallika
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dude!!! This seriously has been one of my favorites!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And this book ending, no actually... Already finished is so heartwrenching!! That I can't explain in words. So, seriously speaking this was one hell of a book! And there's not really anything which I didn't like about the book or wanted you to add into this. Every chapter was a bliss! A twist in each one of them. And yeah!!! The best part of the story according to me...my personaly favorite was when Manik left no table turned to convince Nandini and her father. He did every possible thing to make them realize of his true, unconditional love!! And I really appreciate his efforts and above all...your imagination!!
Great going! Lets head on for more!!!!stay blessed sweetheart and take care!! Byee
And yeah...do give an epilogue... If possible! Although the last chappy was no less than an epilogue!! But still write something if possible. Its totally on you. Byee!
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Posted: 9 years ago
an awesome story loved it so so so much, everything about it was wonderful
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update...penned it really well...will miss the story alot..!;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates
Superly great
But u didn't fulfil, well its now as hiw does it matter anymore, the story has already been ended
Thanks for your acknowledgement and appreciation
And thanks for the pm
Also think abt continuing my only love as its beeb really a very very long time now

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Posted: 9 years ago
Whole story was awesome loved it manan parenthood was awesome n manik worrying about his daughter growing up was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome!! This was so amazing... I can't believe it ended,I l really miss this ff 😭 Their daughter was really very cute... About the question: I liked the part when nandini realizes that she is in love with manik n not aryaman... The scene I liked the most is the one where she gave back to manik's ex-wife on their first meeting,maintaining her pride 😳 👏 I hated the fact that Manik was too insecure n inspite of loving nandini, he didn't trust her with his past n hide about his marriage... But I also liked the way he fought back to win her love 😳 I wanted Rishab story to b more explored with his gf n his anger issues... I also wanted Aryaman to apologize to Manik n nandini for his rude behavior...
But I enjoyed every bit u gave in the story,this is one of my favorites... Thanks for the pm 😊 😊
Edited by Sonalmanan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OK...finally it's came to end...😭...sad for it...will miss this story like hell...!!!
Last part was so beautiful... I liked every bit of it...😃 . Fir v if I have to make a list then it will b like...
1.birth scene and manik's pov...it was seriously amazing...😳.
2.Manik's possessiveness for his daughter... God he couldn't stand the fact that his daughter will love someone else rather than him... 😆...he is too cute father.
3.Family time and of course adiva's question about game...😉...it cracked me up badly...🤣.
Aur ek v part aisa nahi tha jo mujhy pasand nahi aya. I loved the whole update...😳.

Plz ho saky to just ek epilogue de do...bohat khus ho jaungi...😊.
Coz after Reding manik's possessiveness for his daughter I really wanna read a scene where Manik gonna find that boys r behind his daughter. I really wanna know his reaction. And it's a request from Alisha to Alisha...😃

Cont soon with more.
Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved every freaking bit of this update .
The way Manik said that it would be his baby in her tummy soon . Cute :D

'You are a beautiful fat bear' . Awww !
The best husband to keep up with his hormonal brat .<3

And oh yea , he changed his house . How thougtful .
I love this man .

The inside jokes . Nandini can sure ride horses and .. *cough*.. well Manik . ;)
I loved the name - Adiva .
Sure a cute girl . :*

When the story started , it was high on physical attraction and push-pull but you moulded it into a beautiful story , which had drama , passion , secrets , sorries asked , forgiveness and on the whole love !
Great job Alisha .
And congratulations on its completion . :D
Thankyou for the message
-God bles

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