MaNan SS//Dirty Deals//LINK for Thread 2 on Pg 1 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Caught you. Well I thought it was obvious but not many readers read your intro well it seems. Nandini is Nandini M Malhotra. That could be Murthy Malhotra or Manik Malhotra. So he is her husband.
Secondly, this is SS unlike Lips don't give 17 chapters. There is something beautiful about stories that are short and crisp. Like 'Their happily ever after' or 'Our chance at love'. Since you are one of the best if not the best writer in this forum, I am sure you already know that.

Also pls stop this assault, the more you write the more I will have to stay back in this dying forum.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
well
it surely is intense
m liking it already

but didnt get the plot clearly
😕

is she married with some one else ?

whatever it is
m eager to read more...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Wowww

Such a different concept

Congratulations on ur new story

N nandu husband
Wat r they talking about
Confused

N eagerly waiting for next part dear

Do pm me

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Wohooo

And what a start? ??

Loved it just. But chotu sa tha. But problem. I just loved the start.

So they are husband wife?? ? Sound interesting.

I am very happy girl. Cause just now I read another story of urs. Believe me ur every work just make me smile , cry.

I am so much attached to ur story. . . . . . U don't know sumu. Love u.

Heyy about this dirty deal. . . . I just love the 1st chap. Waiting for more. Continue soon.

Love
Tanaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
That is sounding really interesting...
Is she his wife?
She seriously hired foons to hurt him..
And I liked that Manik's dialogue jakham bhi wahi de aur dava bhi wahi lagaye...
Both has mysterious character..
Will be looking forward for the story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
thank you for yet another mystery which will make me beg for the weekends to come😭and about the story..confused,as expected..maybe her husband wants manik to be with her..goddd i started guessing already..update soon..waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Sumana Thks for the PM
NOW THIS IS SOMETHING NEW
NANDU IN A DIFFERENT AVTAR.
HIRING GOONS N ALLL .
SHE IS MARRIED TO MANIK RIGHT ??????

THORA CONFUSION HAI SUMANA.
I KNOW U WILL CLEAR IT OUT DHEERE DHEERE.
SO EXCITED TO KNOW WHATS IN THE PACKAGE.

NANDU MALAMH BHI LAGA RAHI HAI , UFFF!!!!!
CHOT MANIK KO LAGI HAI DARD NANDU KO HO RAHA HAI.

WOW PASSIONATE KISS KARVA DIYA. LOVELY.
AND SHE CANNOT SLEEP WITHOUT HOLDING HIS HANDS .

NEXT UPDATE KABH DOGI
SORRY TUMHE TANGH KARNE KE LIYE ..

NO HURRIES DEAR TAKE UR TIME
JUST KIDDING .
WILL BE WAITING
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Wanna read more n more of it...they know each other so well...she can't sleep without him...she has a husband too... There is a lot of stuff to know...n i'm waiting fr next part desperately... Cont. Soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Awesome chappy

There are some doubts but I guess it will be cleared very soon by further updates

Thnx for pm

Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome. Nice concept. Feeling bad for manik. Awww poor baby. 😭 😭

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