Kaise Mujhe...:The Perfect Mismatch-A Manan RomCom Ch21-A B(@119 122) - Page 66

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi55


Thanks for ur praises dear...it really encourages me.

Next update gonna be full of drama as they r stuck and there is great chances of their kiss as they kiss in most unexpected situations.

Oh wow.. M soo excited now.. Kiss In Unexpected Situation. . Its gonna be fun.. M Eagerly Waiting !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi!!
Acha progress hai story ka .
Naa fast hai na slow hai.
I think this is one of the few romcoms on this forum.
Naa serious drama hota hai naa hi boring hota hai.
No bitching and bickering.
No crying and floods and overflowing.
Ek lighthearted refreshing saa feel hota hai story me.
This is what is your story in a single line.
Ek breezy romcom .

Sorry yaar even though you pm me I was unable to comment.
Exams tha yaar.
Now I have read all your updates and I must say there is a lot of improvement in the way you write and tackled the story.
Comedy ka dose har update me badta hai.
Daily life se connect kar sakte hai tere story.Real lagta hai.

Ek advice hai if you want to take you can take it or otherwise reject it.
Ek twist de sakti hai to do.
Kuch masala bhi to chahiye na.😉
You are free to accept or reject it.
No hard feelings associated.

And lastly,
Comedy is the USP of your story make sure you include it in updates.
Aur haa story ko kabhi slow mat karna.
Slow ,snail paced romcoms boring hote hai.
Readers will lose interest in them.

Keep writing.
ALL THE BEST😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago


Very beautiful update. ..

Both are teasing. ..

Thanks for sharing this.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum update

Waiting for the next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: potterhead1234

Hi!!

Acha progress hai story ka .
Naa fast hai na slow hai.
I think this is one of the few romcoms on this forum.
Naa serious drama hota hai naa hi boring hota hai.
No bitching and bickering.
No crying and floods and overflowing.
Ek lighthearted refreshing saa feel hota hai story me.
This is what is your story in a single line.
Ek breezy romcom .

Sorry yaar even though you pm me I was unable to comment.
Exams tha yaar.
Now I have read all your updates and I must say there is a lot of improvement in the way you write and tackled the story.
Comedy ka dose har update me badta hai.
Daily life se connect kar sakte hai tere story.Real lagta hai.

Ek advice hai if you want to take you can take it or otherwise reject it.
Ek twist de sakti hai to do.
Kuch masala bhi to chahiye na.😉
You are free to accept or reject it.
No hard feelings associated.

And lastly,
Comedy is the USP of your story make sure you include it in updates.
Aur haa story ko kabhi slow mat karna.
Slow ,snail paced romcoms boring hote hai.
Readers will lose interest in them.

Keep writing.
ALL THE BEST😊😊


Thanks dear for ur praises. I m really glad to hear ur response and about the twist even I was planning one soon the curtains will be revealed in one or two updates till then u enjoy... their full on drama and nautanki.

Stay tunned tunned and Keep Commenting with Love...Prachi.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

hey my stress buster cum gf howw r u???

sorry lassst chapters pe commwnt nahi kar payi my net was not working...abhi bhi phone se reply kar rahi hoon...looka like my stress buster is little bit upset ...and kisne kaha k we are not liking the. flow of the story..i love it baby doll...i.was to waiting for the update...

itna maja ata haia mujhe tumhari story padne mein sare din ki stress tiredness ek dum shoo ho jati hai...ur story makes my day always...

mannik aur nandu ki cute fights always adorable...

don't u dare stop writing...plsss honeypot

and now coming to update...it was superb just like u..

😉

manik and nandu going to a museam...ab yeh soha kaha se tapak padi beech mein...

nandu ko manik.ki sis bana diya...soha ki.upar wali building i.mean mind bilkul khali hai lagta...renovte karna padega... 😆

jealous nandu ...and manik enjoying...wah...

now its turn of manik to get jealous...nandu ko to bada chidq raha tha ab kya hua...hahhaha...my jealous babbies...

i.hope dono.jaldi se apni feelinga realise karle...

thanku so much because your story always make me smile...and believe me this is not an easy task to makke someone smile easily...but u r pro in it i think...god bless u...
.
may u get all the happiness and keep spreading happiness...

now u to smile my gf...and after reading my comment i hope u will have a sweet smile on your face...thatts what i want...keep smiling baby doll...take care and update soon...i will be waiting...love u lots... 🤗

After reading ur comment...I m more then fine. Who says u need a bf to make u happy... believe me If there are gf like u...Bfs are not needed. Ur single comment made my day.
Love u and I m eagerly waiting for ur next comment.
With loads of love... Prachi.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagupur



Very beautiful update. ..

Both are teasing. ..

Thanks for sharing this.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.



Tysm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_Queen

Awsum update

Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Thank u...will update in an hour.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: candy39

<font size="7">Awsomeee</font>

<font size="7">Waiting for next</font>
<font size="7">Plzzz</font>
<font size="7">Don't stop writing</font>
<font size="7">Your story really</font>
<font size="7">Awsomeee😭😭</font>


tysm 😊 I won't stop.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nandininiti

amazing chappy
manan were funny and cute and adorable too
manik was making nandu jealous now he was jealous coz of aryamann
waiting for next
update soon


Thanks and ur wait is over dear. So comment soon .

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