Hi!!
Acha progress hai story ka .
Naa fast hai na slow hai.
I think this is one of the few romcoms on this forum.
Naa serious drama hota hai naa hi boring hota hai.
No bitching and bickering.
No crying and floods and overflowing.
Ek lighthearted refreshing saa feel hota hai story me.
This is what is your story in a single line.
Ek breezy romcom .
Sorry yaar even though you pm me I was unable to comment.
Exams tha yaar.
Now I have read all your updates and I must say there is a lot of improvement in the way you write and tackled the story.
Comedy ka dose har update me badta hai.
Daily life se connect kar sakte hai tere story.Real lagta hai.
Ek advice hai if you want to take you can take it or otherwise reject it.
Ek twist de sakti hai to do.
Kuch masala bhi to chahiye na.😉
You are free to accept or reject it.
No hard feelings associated.
And lastly,
Comedy is the USP of your story make sure you include it in updates.
Aur haa story ko kabhi slow mat karna.
Slow ,snail paced romcoms boring hote hai.
Readers will lose interest in them.
Keep writing.
ALL THE BEST😊😊