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Posted: 9 years ago
Woh woh woh!! I jus read the story! It was just soo awesome! Totally different yet interesting!
I love manbir in this! And their amazing language! Kudos to you for such a different concept!
That kiss was something manhh! That chap was amazing! I love the fact that she knew he used to follow her! Awe these two are love! I even love the story title! Cute just like your story!
And you don't need to doubt your abilities girl! So many stories and all different frm another! U rock already!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz mawara di don't think that u r a genius u r awsm writer I'm FAN of ur.. Plz continue plzzz..n what Will u ri8 I m happy I know whatever u ll write for sure I'll love
nubula thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear don't feel like that.
you write fabulous and you are just amazing writer.
so plz don't think like that.
and I think nandini's pov will be good.bt we will always love and support you whatever you will write.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank You for the support! Maybe it's my fault I was expecting too much one of the reader said it right it's not necessary that all my stories get the same response! Sorry for troubling you all dil say sorry! Please 'don't' comment and 'don't' hit the like button. Hath jood k maafi..
Her you go with the promo..

Promo

"Shut up! Just shut up! God! Oh God! You..! You are a Mafia? A killer? A bloody killer..!" He was shouting all the time pulling his hair. "I was such a fool! We were fools! We trusted you man!" He yelled again and slapped me.



I didn't had any answer...



"My di is in love with a wrong guy!" Suddenly he again shouted and my eyes snapped up to his face. He sat on the footpath..



Love? Sh!t..! Nandini..! Oh no she won't be able to bear my reality..



"Rishu!" I pleaded and sat in his feet.



"Please! Don't..!" Rishab was crying now..


"Listen to me!" I begged and he look at me with sad eyes. "I am not denying my reality! But I had no agenda to hurt you both! I love you both equally! You both mean world to me yaar!" I was trying to explain myself when something wet trickled down my cheeks.



Tears...



"Bada Bhai mana tha tjy yaar..!" His lips were trembling with sadness and despair..
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manik11 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii baby... amazing promo ...so rishu ko sab pata chal gaya... waiting for update... continue soon...
shwetparth143 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for update...


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desperately waiting for ur another stories...


ab to update kar de yaar...


bahut looong waiting ho gayi hai...


pls pls pls pls pls pls
AsthaVerma92 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww such a cute beautiful promo
analaxmi23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super promo dear
Rishab know evrythink
I Hope he will understand manik
Plz continu soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shit rishu got to know everything about manik but how...I hope he don't keep manan apart

And I guess my comment made u sad but cheer up yaar...and srsly if u wanna know how many ppl r actually reading ur story n commenting then trust me update ur next part through PM...and PM only to ur commentors
In this way u will get to know how many r actually appreciating ur work
And sorry for my bad comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
please update soon dear... lovely promo ...
waiting for the chapter egerly...
god bless u...😛

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