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Dua Arafat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#841

That's not fair😡

OK FINE! I will not ask for anything now...

You will not see my face on any thread of yours😭

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#842

If is not working properly, 1 update uske baad chalna band.. so..,but manik's point of view is much better..after that nandini's..

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#843

sorry sis...
for not responding before...

i was really stucked somewhere very badly...

but all chapters were fabuolous...

just mind blowing nd very beautifully penned down...

every emotions in every chapter touch the heart...

i think nandini's pov will be better in nxt chapter, after that manik's point...

waiting for nxt update...

Tussi naraz naa hoo...

continue soon...

stay blessed...

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Friendsforever9

@Friendsforever9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#844

U r superb dear

I think nandini's point of view will be nice

As its her who is suffering

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Love_Queen

@Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#845

I think it should be nandu's pov nd pls don't b disheartened dear

Waiting for the next update
Update soon

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siyaaaali

@siyaaaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#846

Hii don't say like that... U r amazing writter...

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Cute_Kavya

@Cute_Kavya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#847

Hey mawara dnt doubt on ur abilities
jaisa tum soch rahi ho aisa kuch nhi hein so plz dnt do that tum awesome writer ho yeh hum sab ko pta hein aur tum ho ki khud pe shak kiye jaa rahi ho wo bhi due less response huh
aur manik k p.o.v se hi start karna nd ya daat ne k liye sorry

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#848

Hey don't question your abilities. As I've always said you can't force people just ignore them but in that process never question whether about your writing skills.
I would like it from Nandini's POV as she is going through it.
A certain section could have Manik's POV too.

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RainFlies

@RainFlies

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#849

hey Mawara, how can u feel that u r not a good writer? u r amazing dear...

i have read all ur stories...n i m really loving this too...

dont b dishertened yaar..think abt loyal readers who love ur story...

and i really dont know what shld be there in next update, maniks pov or nandinis pov? but i trust u... u r awesome n u will come up wid bang... u decide...

and keep updating the story...plz dont stop