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abhilashaS thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
no no no di my exams are almost over only 1 paper bacha hai and now pukka i will comment regularly...i swear plz gussa mat ho aap meri fav writer ho and about the question u asked plz start with nandinis pov
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pls don't make ur commenters suffer bcoz of the silent readers
And pls don't take it wrong but just bcoz ur other ff's got amazing response doesn't mean this will also get the same response
If u want u can pm the next updates to ur commentors
I always comment for the updates most of the time I read it on watpad so I comment on that site
And if I read it in the forum I comment her sometimes I do that twice for single update
And I really love ur writing n ideas
They r somewhat new and really interesting to read
And for the next update I want nandini's POV coz no else can understand the pain better than the one who suffers
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okaayyy!
Read this in a go!
This is pazza(crazy)

Well Mawara di mai latee hun and i am really sorry for that!
Pehle exams mein busy thi ab time mila toh i am commenting!
Kal meraa result hai dua ki guzaarish!

Mafia and his shimmer
Thesee days i love mafia
All thanks to dilwale!

U always come up with such good stories!
Wonder log respond kyun nahi karte?
Next time joh comment kare na unhe chappy pm karna
Saaron ke dimaag thikane lag jayenge!

The prologue
Manikk and his shimmer
His breath with hers!
U always manage to wreck a havoc in my thoughts!
Andd then kyaa nandini ko sach pata chaljayeega?
Unhee judaa toh mat karnaa
Khair i love to shed tears for manan and i happily shed each day!
It will be really interesting to click that up!

Manik ko kisne shoot kiyaa?
Aap use aage marnewali ho
Ya shall i do the honours?

And he lands up in nandinis cottage!
Rishab is actually soo sweet!
He always makes me smile!

MaNan always have a connection!
Nandiniii caring for a stranger who she doesn't even see!
This has to be the cutest!

Manik cannot reject her for her blindness
Itna bharosa hai mujhe aap ki parwarish par dida!;-)

The judaai was damnn
I had thosee tears in my eyess!
Pataa nahi how do u managee to do that
Andd i love u for that>3

Manik smoking cigarettes
Meko woh khusboo boht acchi lagti hai
I am the only onee who likees that smell!

See rishab again managed a smile across my face
He does those cute antics! Neccesary!

Well cabir is my fav cupid!
He can manage manik and his senses!
Alwayysss i lovee the cupidd cabir!

Manik waiting for his bella to cross the path
And she sensing it like alwayss!
Well this has to get an oscar!
Kasam se no jokinngg!

And then the their peace finding scene
Finally i smiledd woh bhi hugee walii!
And uspee zyadaa can't give description
Kyunki mein speechless hun didaa!

The church scene was cuter than cutest!
She prayedd for soo longg
Itnaa kya maangaaa usnee?
Manik ke liyeee? Mere result ke liyee?

All the works by u are pazza(crazy)
Even i know a bit Italian!
Alll the besttt for everything!

Continue soon!
Will be waiting!

Lots of love
Zara😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear plz don't be sad🤗
We love ur stories😃
They r really amazing👏👍🏼
Nandu's pov will be more apt😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
PLZ dnt think you write bad infact ur writing is awesome i love
all ur ff soo plzz dnt dought ur abilites bcoz of some people

who dnt care about ur i to love ur ff vryyy much..

And start ur nxt chapiee with nandinis pov.

But plzzz dnt stop ur ff plzzz request...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear
dont feel like that
you and your all stories are awesome
you are fab writter


n ha
start next with nandini's pov
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! Mawara dear.. U rckd it yaar...
I knw i ws hell late...vry vry sry dear 4 late commnting...
Was stuck vid wrk..hope u understand...

Cumin 2 update, it was marvellous...
Ni wrdz 2 say..really spectacular... Lvd it 2 core ma dear...
Manik followin nandu since 10 days...
Inspite of no vision nandu felt manik's presence...
She came 2 knw already abt manik followin her...
Really nandu s awesum...really luvd it...
Manik cudnt ctrl ven nandu were gng 2 hit by a truck..
Finally manan confrontation...omg!! Dat wad fantastic.
Finally nandu lost her ctrl... She thought manik didnt kiss her bcz she s blind..nandu s vry much angry on manik...😉
Lvd d way manik make her undrstnd d reason...
She dnt wanna manik 2 leave her...poor nandu..she didnt evn knw who actually manik s..feelin vry bad 4 manan...
Omg!! Nandu askin 4 manik 2 kiss her..
Manan kiss ws so passionate n pure bliss...
Really hotness overloaded.. Nandu agn asking him 2 kiss her.
Shckd 2 c dis bold version of nandu..it was mindblwng dear..
Lvd d way manik used 2 callin nandu bella n shimmer..
Kuch toh spl feel ho rhi vhi sunne ke baad...
Manik's italian s awrsum ...
Manik s tryin his max 2 stay awy frm nandu..bt his mind s not allowin 4 dat... Lvd d scene wen nandu askd his 2 hrs 4 her...

Manik confused on wt 2 wear..?? Shckin..😲
Hahaha..cabir teasin manik..it ws so awrsum...
Manbir talks as alwys suprb...lvd it so much...
Nandu rahul scenes was so cute..lvd d way she bhvd vid rahul...
Manik admirin her...fabulous...
Great manik malhotra in church 4 first tym...manan momnts in church was so spectacular... He respects her devotion...
Lvd dis version of manik vry much n it ws really surprisin also..
Den manik gvin surprisin 2 nandu...dat was awesum...
Nandu s vry much hpy dat sum one did lyk dis 4 her 4 d first tym in het lyf...nandu s vry much hpy vid manik...
Hope yeh happiness short lived na ho...
Manik askd nandu abt her blind tale..waitin 4 nandu's ans.
Do continue dear...u nailed d prt...it ws awesum..
Waitin 4 nxt prt mawara ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mawara... How cud u say lyk dat???😡😡
How cud u doubt on ur abilitiy of writin...
Sach mein feelin vry angry on u 4 sayin lyk dat...😡😡
V knw u r an awesum writer...
Dnt b dishearten on low response dear...
Nw itz xam tym na..may b evry1 s bsy vid studies n exams ..
V trust u n ur writin...so b cool n calm...

Cuming 2 opinion...i wanna nandu's pov...
Isse bettr kon bta sktha he uss dard ke baare mein...
Wanna nandu's pov as d tale...
Do cintinue deat..waitin 4 nxt prt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
HI MAWRA !...
DON'T BE SAD WITH THOSE WHO DONOT COMMENT ...BE HAPPY WITH THOSE WHO COMMENT REGULARLY ,,,JUST LIKE ME ,,,I ALWAYS COMMENT ,,,BCOZ I KNOW IT VERY WELL THAT U R WRITING IT FOR UR READERS ,,,BE HAPPY WITH WHAT U R GETTING ,,,,,DON'T UNDERESTIMATE UR ABILITIES FOR THE RESPONSE U GET ,,,KEEP ON DOING UR WORK THE WAY U DO ,,FABULOUSLY ...
DON'T STOP UR STORIES FOR THOSE WHO DONOT COMMENT ,,,,IF U DO SO THAN WHERE R WE AT FAULT ,,THE READERS WHO READ ,,LIKE AND COMMENT REGULARLY ...IT WOULD BE TOTALY UNFAIR FOR US TOO ,,,BAKI SAB DO IT AS UR WISH ...
COMING TO THE QUESTION U ASKED ,,,,SO AS NANS IS BLIND IN THIS FF ,,,,SO I WOULD LIKE TO READ IT IN (NANS PROV) FIRST ...
TAKE CARE ,,,,ALLAH HAFIZ ..
Edited by tamzzee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyy yur ffs are amazing plz don't think like that well plz continue in nandini PoV it's better I mean she is blind so she can express emotions soo yaa n hav a good day dear 😊 😊

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