MaNanSS:The Mafia and His Shimmer LinkToThread2/PG1/25th-March

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0Nivida0

@0Nivida0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Mawara u nailed it girl...congratulations...u did it again..wow amazing update...n in this whole update Nandini is d hero..i salute her..inspite of being blind she is such a content n happy soul..i luv d kitty part..okay so mr Malhotra in d first meeting itself want to kiss his shimmer...dude get a grip of urself...waiting for next update eagerly continue soon..take care

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Woewww

Hats off mawara sooo damn interesting concept yr

A mafia n a blindy

Seriously never imagined manan as this

Eagerly waiting for next part dear

Do pm me next part pretty pretty please
Vidhi

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analaxmi23

@analaxmi23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

awesome update dear

poor manik he have no one for him

proud of nandu

manan first meet

i think first manik will go away from nandu because his doesn't want to hurt her

but he will retourne because he love her soo mmuch

plz continu soon

take care

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@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

wow. first chappiee aa gyaa. wow. soo that was one of a beautiful concept. . Nandini is blind. but she is a confident girl. manik is mafia... interesting. . n rishu n nandu. bro sissy ka bond was just fab. . both loves each other very much. .. likedd it .. loved their first meet.. amazing. .. totally awesome story.. missing ur all stories . waiting for next thanks for pm... Stay blessed Love Geet

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Wowiee!!
Super awesm chappy..
u knw U r very good in writing POVs..
Dis chap ws lyk a package..
Emotional, cute, sweet, funny, romantic, action..
evrythng ws jst superb..
loved it..
N I think Manik will back-off thinking he is lyk taking advntge of her..

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Awesome update. Different and interesting concept. U penned it beautifully.Manan's intro and first meet were well written. Loved nandini and rishab's bond. They are the cutest. Their sacrifices for each other was amazing. Manan's pov was well penned. Manan's convo was mindblowing. Now manik got to know about nandini. Eagerly waiting for his reaction. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.love to read more

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Stay blessed😊