MaNanSS:The Mafia and His Shimmer LinkToThread2/PG1/25th-March

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gurnam_kaur

@gurnam_kaur

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

I somehow learnt how to comment right here

So about the story line it's FANTABULOUS

Your concepts are so amazing and clear shot

Nandini's blind and you again left the update on a cliffhanger

And thank God you are back I was waiting for you like forever to update

And when I read your vacation note I was so upset but it's that everyone needs time to sought their life out and writing such amazing stories needs time and a clear mind so your decision to go on a vacation was correct

Love you loads

Keep writing such amazing ff's which keeps manan alive with us forever

Edited by gurnam_kaur - 9 years ago

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Awesome chp... Manik knows about her blindness n I don't know what he will do now ..

But for now the story kooks so promising... Loved the beginning

N nandu n rishabs bond was adorable... He wants to be a eye surgeon just to heel nandini

Thanxx for the pm...

Keep smiling.

Stay blessed

😊

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Awesum start dear..

First prt rckd...Entirely diff plot frm othr stories of urs...

Lvd it so much..Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Manik's intro was really sad.

He bcme d victim of circumstances..

He bcme rude n mafia by dis society,...

Manik attacked...He tries 2 escape n landed in nandu's house..

Nandu's intro was so emotional...

Bina dekhe voh apne chote bhai ko bada kiya..

Nandu rishb talks was soo fantastic...

Rishab wanna do evrythng 4 his sister...

Nandu identified manik...Do continue dear..

Eagerly waitin 4 nxt prt...

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fadhi_faiz

@fadhi_faiz

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Finally u are back... concept is always outstanding ... Manikwas a little rude.. but nandu was awesome when she snapped back ...

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

ofcourse he will accept her..

bcoz he is Manik and she is his nandu..

waise awesome n different story

loved it

update soonish😃

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

u have an amazing imaginating or i must say thinking poweer dear...how can u get such concept in ur head...u always amazed me with ur new story lines dear...a unique plot and thanks for pm dear...manan mind thoughts were humorous...waiting to know maniks reaction next...

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

I think mawara ko media bohot parent hai hehe cuz with this you had already given two stories of mafia...

But anyways looking forward for next update.. And yeah welcome back, feeling great seeing your update..

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Wowww beautifull
Wondrful update
Awesome manan meet
Lovd it
Continue soon

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Thanks for the pm
I so loved this story
It's pretty good
N m sure he won't kiss her.
Caus manik would never take an advantage of such type of situation