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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved how manik made her understand
flashback was hilarious
nandu is crazy
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Wow awesome update...
Finally Manik convinced Nandu for music ...
Flashback was soo hilarious...
Luved it to the core ...
Manan were soo awesome...
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Waiting for next...
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Amazing
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hey guys here is the next chappy...hope u all like and and i am introducing some new charecters also ...lets seee if u like them or not...agar spelling mistakes ho toh maff karna and ya comment karna mat bhulna...😉😉

tridha choudhury as ruhanika moorty (ruhi)nandinis little sister


harshad arora as aditya raichand maniks cousin brother



surbhi chandna as trisha maheswari manans lady dabang college friend


happy reading...!!




Chapter 27-

After a few days...

Manik is doing pushups with only his tracks on and bare chest while nandini is sitting on this back with a white towel wiping off his sweat time to time along with counting ...

Nandini- 98...99...100!! Wow mr.malhotra aap toh bade strong nikle ...I must say I am quite impressed with you... (Naughtily)

Manik-achha ...aisa kya...(.lying on the carpet below them and shifting her on top of him from his back and kissing her palms and gazing at her with eyes full of love as always)

Suddenly nandini becomes lost in her thoughts...and Manik sensing her turmoil asks her...

Manik- kya hogaya mere baby ko...? why so lost...? (pushing some of her tresses behind her ear)

Nandini-Manik wo...

Manik- bolo baby...u know na u can share anything with me...

Nandini- Manik...kal na raksha babdhan hai...and har sal ruhi mujhe rakhi bandhti thi ...par ab...(having tears in her eyes)par ab I don't even know ki where is she ...kahan hai,kaise hai...kiti ganndi behen hun mein...ussne mujhpe itna trust kiya...log aapne bhaiyon ko rakhi bandhte hai thinking they will protect them aur ussne,ussne mujhe bandha aapni badi behen ko thinking ki I will protect her humesha ...bu...but I couldn't ...i failed her...I failed as a sister...(sobbing badly)


Manik- shhh...pumkine...aisa nai hai...u r the best sister any sister can have and rahi baat ruhanika ki toh...

Nandini- toh...?(sniffing)

Just then the door bell rings and manik smiles widely...

Nandini- bolo na toh kya...?

Manik- nandu I think humein neeche jana chahiye I have something for you...(smiling widely)

Nandini- kya manik...?(cutely)

Manik- see for yourself...

After wearing shirt manik and nandini both went down hand in hand as soon as they entered the lounge they saw the whole family assembled their while a girl sitting facing her back towards nandini with long jet black tresses with light curls...wearing a sleevless light pink frock with boots...



As soon as they entered everyone looked at her smiling when the girl turned around...and nandini was shocked at her place...she was none other than ruhanika moorty...nandinis little sister...yes nandinis has a sister...

Instantly nandinis eyes were flooded with moisture and same happened with ruhanika too...

Ruhanika- akka...(emotionally)

and she runs towards her and hugs her while nandini stood motionless not knowing how to react as after so long she gets to see her sister,hug her ,hear her voice and for a elder sister trust me its pure bliss...

Ruhi- i...I missed u so much akka...kahan chale gaye the aap...uss din meine aapko kahan kahan nahi dhunda...when I came back from the trip...u were gone...i thought I will never see you again...

Finally nandini responded and hugged her tightly and both the sisters started crying on eachothers shoulder...

Nandini- ruhi...my baby I missed u too...ruh tujhe idea bhi nahi hai how I have lived these 5 yrs accepting the fact that I will never be able to see u again,never be able to hug u again...i missed u soo much...

Ruhi- mat ro akka...plz...I know everything now...jiju told me everything...i am so sorry mein aapke saath nahi thi uss waqt jab aapko meri sabse zada zarurat thi...i am soo sorry...

I instantly looked at manik and he just smiled at me in assurance...and I was more that amazed...as what is this man...how can he sense my thoughts,my termoils without even me mentioning it...its almost impossible...he is not human...infact HE IS MY GOD...from now if anyone asks me wether I have seen god then I will say yes I have ...and my god RESIDES IN HIM...

After some time...

In manans room-

Both the sisters are sitting on the bed and talking as they have a lots to catch up ...the whole 5 yrs actually...to be more precise...

Ruhi- akka you don't have ant idea how much I missed u...and u know jab mein trip se ghar ayi tab chacha chichi they told me ki u ran away with someone...i couldnot believe my ears ...as I now u in and out ...aur agar aisa koi hota toh u would have said to me...they kept saying stuff against u but I refused to accept...phir one day after I returned from school...i heard that they were talking to some one about someones marriage when I heard clearly I came to know ki wo meri shaadi ki baat karrahe they ...I was devastated...I wouldn't know ki what to do ...,where to go...but then only one name came to my mind and that is manik jiju...without giving a second thought to it I ran away from there that night and came to jiju...told him everything and he helped me akka...wo mere liye bhai se badh kar hain...when chacha chichi came to forcefully take me u know what he did he protected me like a father...usske baad jiju ne unhe dhamki di ki to leave me alone as I was under age and if they try to force me into marriage he will file an FIR against them they got scared so they left...and this was not it ...u now what he did next...as he didn't want anything to harm me and he knew ki chaha chichi kuch na kuch zarur karenge...he filed for my custordy to become my legal guardian...and did not leave any stone unturned until I was safe with him...

Nandini now was overwhelmed after knowing that what her life has done for her in these past 5 yrs...she had no words ,nothing to express how greatful is she to him ...except for giving herself completely to him...

Ruhi- and u know akka, that day aur aaj ka din...jiju ne mujhe kabhi kisi cheez ki kami mehesus hi hone nahi di...koi bhi cheez mere maangne se pehele hi mere saamne hoti thi...bhai na pampered me like his own daughter...aur unhone mujhe kabhi amma appa ko yaad karke sad hone ka moka hi nahi diya...

Nandini was hearing all this in completely aww and with tears of happiness as well as sadness .Happy as her sister was safe...and sad as she was not with her when she needed her the most...

Ruhi- akka plz...don't cry na...now bad times are over now only goodi goodi time...plz smile...(wiping of her tears an gesturing her to smile with her fingers)and FYI for your kind information I am a doctor now... infact a neurologist...bhai ne mere padhai mein koi kasar nahi chodi...

Nandini - (finally smiling) achha wo sab chod yeh bata ki mere behen itni badi hogaya hai she is a doctor that to a neurologist and moreover she has grown into such a beautiful and intelligent lady so any boyfriend ...

Ruhi- kya akka...mein aur boyfriend plz...and aap mujhe kya bol rahe ho mere overprotective jeju...kisi bhi boy ko mere aas pass bhi bhatkne nai dete...aapko pata hai university days mein unhone mere peeche 6 boduguards ko lagaya tha...omg...I used to feel so weird sometimes ...as they used to follow me like my shadow everywhere except for malhotra mansion and washroom in the college...uff...bhai bhi na kabhi kabhi bahut zada hi kardete hain...

And nandini burst into laughter hears his heroins "mahan" works...

Ruhi- hawww akka aap hass rahe ho...yaha bhai ne mujhe forever single rakhne ka pura plan bana liya hai aur aap ...very baad akka...aise toh no guy will ever come to me...not even for talking...

Nandini- achha ruh tu pehele toh manik ko bhai hi bolti thi phir jiju kab se...?

Ruhi- wo di from past 2 yrs as eventually I realized that bhi has feelings for u so isiliye...

Nandini- manik ne tujhe roka nahi..?(surprised)

Ruhi- nai...as he said I can call him what ever I feel like...and mene unhe pehele hi bol diya that ki I will toh call him jiju only...no matter what...and he even never argued about it...he is the best jiju...and I am proud of myself ki mujhe un jaise jiju mile jo mujhe aapni daughter ki tarah treat karte hain...and takes care of my everything like a father...(smiling widely)

Nandini- manik hai hi one in a million...mein toh shayad aapni jaan dekar bhi usse kabhi repay nahi kar paungi...(emotionally)

Ruhi- oh ho...akka aap toh phir se depressed wale mode mein ayagae...come on cheer up na...and abhi toh aapko sirf aur sirf music, aur jiju pe concentrate karna hai...nothing else...and mujhe bhi aapni bhanji ya bhanje se milna hai so u two better hurry...

Nandini looked at her hell shoked ...

Ruhi - kya...yeh shocked expression kya de rahe ho...aapko kya laga mujhe pata nahi hai...toh madam aapko bata dun meine Australia meinne aapki news dekhi hai theek hai...and aabhi toh I am just waiting for the grand wedding...ufff...phir aap dono ke chote chote babies honge I will play with them oooh gosh I am so excited...

Nandii was giving tough compiion to the tomatoes by now...

Nandini- hatt...! Shaitaan...(blushing)

Ruhi- oho akka blushing and all han...(teasing her )

Just then manik enters...

Manik- who is blushing bhai koi humein bhi batao...

Ruhi- woo...(naughtily)

Just when she was about to spill the beans nandu jumped in...

Nandini- ku...kuch nai...wo hum bus aise hi baat kar rahe the...(glaring at ruhi)

Manik- achha...ok then aur tu...(pulling ruhanikas ear)

Ruhi- aaa...jiju lagta hai na...

Manik- tujhe Australia kya bheja tune dekh kya haal bana liya hai aapna han...kitni dubli hogayi hai...

Ruhi- hawww bhai...dubli...which angle se ...infact I think I have put on some weight and I need to reduce...

Manik- chup...!bilkul cup koi reduce weduce nahi...tu ab yahi rahegi no more Australia...and I will make sure ki tu apne original chubby avtar mein wapis ajaye...mere nazuk se behen ka kya hal bana diya hai in australia walon ne...(hell worried)

Ruhi- offo...bhai...(flustrated)

Dining area-

Everybody is sitting together to have their breakfast...

Geet- hey bebeji mere bachi kitni dubli ho gayi hai...ruhi tujhe waha nancy theek se khana nahi banake deti thi...aaj mein usski class lungi phone pe...

Ruhi- oho...kya karun mein aap sab ka...uff...aur nancy she is a very gud cook kyun aaplog uss bichari ke peche pade ho...bhai kya kam the ki ab aap bhi suru hogai badi ma...

Ruhi calls geet badi ma and maan bade papa as they actually behave with her as if she is their own child...

Ruhi -achha jiju kal raksha bandhan hai toh chalo na shopping pe chalte hain...

Manik- ruh abhi...but nandu ki tabiyat abhi puri tarah se theek bhi nahi hui hai...

Nandini-(excited)manik plz na...chalte hain...and kal rakhsha bandhan hai and kitne salon baad I am going to celebrate it with my sister plz...dont say know mein bilkul theek hun...plz...

Manik looks at her smilingly and agrees as it's the first time after everything that has happened that nandini was genuinely interested in something and excited ...her eyes were twinkiling with the happiness...and that's exactly what he wanted to see...

Maan- achha aab tum sab ja hi rahe ho toh mein security company ko inform karta hun they will send more bodyguards...

Ruhi- ufff nooo...phir se bodyguard I am sick of it...aap toh lagta hai ki they will even follow me inside the washroom...(making faces)

And all burst into laughter...

Outside the mall-

Everybody are holding shopping bags except nandini even nandini tried many time to insist manik to give her some bags but he was adment on his place he keeps walking guarding nandini geet and ruhi along with the body guards...when manik sees any boy looking at ruhi he removes his jacket and makes her wear it forcefully as she is wearing a sleevless dress and ruhi makes a face...while nandini just giggles watching his overprotectiveness...

Just the manik gets a very important call...so he excuses himself for just a minute...informing geet and ruhi and goes to a side to receive it while the ladies wait there and geet and ruhi are busy discussinjg something with nandini listing to them when they don't notice a persone comimg towards them...and to their badluk even the bodyguard has no clue about it...

He calls nandini...

Man- excuse me madam...(with is hands behind his back)

Just as nandini turns around the man brings the thing which he was hiding behind him in the front and is about to throw it on nandini when suddenly nandini is pulled aside by someone...by pushing the man

Girl- nandini...!!!

And and both fall on the floor with a thud making all shocked as soon as the man gets pushed the thing which he was going to throw on nandu falls down and the place it falls down it burns totally and leaves a big hole...destroying the tiles of the floor...it is nothing but ACID...

Nandini is scared to death by now geet and ruhi immediately rush toward s her while hearing nandinis name manik leaving his phone rushes towards them...and the man tries to escape when the girl who saved nandini stands up and runs behind him and cathches him on time and starts beating him with her chappal...

Girl- kyun beh...meri dost pe acid phekega...aaj toh durga ma ki kasam mein tujhe zinda nahi chodungi...agar meri chameli (nick name of her chappal)se tujhe mar mar ke teri chatni nahi bana di toh mera naam bhi trisha maheswari nahi...

Man- maff kardo madam...

The bodyguard s come and hold the culprit while trisha is full on busy doing her assaults on that bas***d...when she realizes that nandini need her more than this jerk...

Manik is hugging her as she is still a little shocked and continuously saying claming words to make her normal...when trisha come s nears her...

Trisha- nandini tu theek hai na...tujhe kuch hua toh nahi...

Manik- baby u alright na...plz kuch toh bolo...(hell worried)

Finally nandini looks at her and then at manik and nods...manik shighs in relief...manik makes her stand and they go to a caf to sit and calm her down first...

Caf-

Manik makes nandini drink water while rubbing her back to calm her down...

Manik- u ok...ab theek lag raha hai...

Nandini nods...

Manik turns around to trisha...

Manik- trisha thanx yaar...thank u soo much tune aaj jo mere liye kiya mein zindagi bar nahi bhul paunga...agar aaj nandu ko kuch hojata toh ...(choks)

Trisha- manik tension mat le and rahi baat nandu ki toh iss baat ke liye tanx bolne ki koi zarurat nahi...aakhir dost dost ke kaam na aya toh uske hone ka kya phaida...

Manik- lekkin phir bhi yaar...I am really greatfull to u...accha yeh bata tu toh US mein thi na kisi project ke liye so achanak yaha and shivaay nahi aya...

Trisha- issi liye toh mein india ayi hun...tang aagayi hun iss roz roz ki kheech kheech see...ufff...mein kuch bhi karun toh problem...I mean agar black coffee ko kali coffee bolun toh ussmein problem,kuch bhi alag pehenlu toh problem...matlab wo toh chalte phirte problems ki dukan he tum ye samajh lo...i mean kali coffee ko kali coffee na bolun toh kya bolun ab safeed coffee toh nahi bolsakti na...

Manan burst into laughter along with geet and ruhi...

Geet - bilkul sahi kaha trisha...u know kabhi kabhi maan bhi na bena wajhe mujhpe chilane lagte hain ek dam dusht danav jaise...

Manik- di ,trisha agar aaplogon ka mere bhai aur mere dost ke bare mein beaching khatam ho gayi ho toh trisha...i wanted to know ki tumhe kaise pata chala ki that guy was going to attack on nandini...

Trisha- arre wo mein coffee shop see nikal rahi thi tab meine tum logon ko dekha ...so I thought ki lets say hello and mil lete hun...isiliye mein tumlogon ke peeche peeche aagayi and then out of nowhere a man came infront of me and started moving towards nandu and I saw ki he was holding something in a glass container behind his back jis mein se dhuan nikal raha tha I got suspicious isi liye I waited and the moment I became sure of his intentions I reacted...

Nandini- trisha yaar I am happy ki mein tujhse mil paye after so many years...

Trisha hugs nandini...

Trisha - hand wo toh theek hai lekin don't think ki thank u say mein chup ho jaungi sajhe mr. manik malhotra...i toh want a full family dinner...

Manik- trisha yaar meine kab mana kiya...

Nandini- ya chal na aaj ghar pe sab milke chota sa get together karte hain...

Geet- and han don't worry uski sari taiyariyan mein karlungi...

Ruhi- and trisha di we have lots to catch up ...

All agreed and left for malhotra mansion...

Edited by abhilashaS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love it...
Love their bonding...
Manik is best...
But but who the hell that person is...
Please don't hurt my Manan...
Continue soon..
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Maza agaya thanks for PM's
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Wow...
Awesome...
After long time...
Amazing new charactrs..they r soo cuteee...
Waiting eagerly for next👏⭐️😉
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Wow awsme update nanadu ki sis aa gae n manik n family me isko liye kitna much kiya h n na due pe attack who is he BT thank god she is safe nw
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nicee update. cute update. liked it... Manan moments bhot beautiful the.. lovely . . aww nandu ki sis to bhot adorable h ... I luv her.. manik really treat her sis like his sis.. Thank god nandu bach gyi.. uski frnd ne baccha liya. But fikvaya kisne ?? Waiting for next update eagerly. Thanks for pm .. Keep Smiling ..
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hey guys i am here as promised for a spicy afternoon update...ok so first let me clear something that after this mein rahoon ya na rahoon is next...but it will take some more time...as its a little passionate chaper...so...anyways so this update is dedicated to my lovey reader...


i was very busy yet i gave yup my whole yesterday for this chappy so hope u guys enjoy it...this chappy is not edited so theremay be spelling mistake...so plz pardon for that...

happy reading...!!


#3595 words approx.


Malhotra mansion-

All are sitting in manans room.nandini leaning on manik while manik is holding her hand with one hand while stroking her hair with the other... and trisha and ruhanika with one pillow on their laps...

Manik tells everything to trisha and trisha is shattered to know all this she gets so emotional that she instantly hugs nandini ...

Trisha- nandu...tu...i am soo sorry...I am so sorry ki jab tujhe sab se zada aapne friend ki zarurat thi mein nahi thi...I am soo sorry...(sobbing)

Nandini- nahi trishu...its ok...but ab toh tu yahan hai na...i am very happy...i missed u soo much...

Trisha- I missed u too baby...

Manik- oo hello kya...tune khali ussehi miss kiya ...and what about me yaar...

Trisha- aarreee oye hoye...tujhe kaise bhul sakti hun aaja mere nandu ki heroine...(and hugs him too)

After breaking the hug...

Trisha- waise nandu tune kya sahi naam rakha hai yaar...matlab manik ki personality ko pura suit karta hai...ye toh hai hi. .. (gives a pause and looks at nandini while nandini looks at her) heroine !!! (they both burst into laughter giving a hi-fi to each other)

Manik- arre yeh achha hai yaar mein akela aur tum dono...its not fair...(faking anger)

Ruhi- arre bhai aap akele kaise mein huna...aapki behen ...(literally jumping on him)

Manik- aab hui na barabari ki team...mere bhehen hei aab mere saath aur mujhe kisi ki bhi zarurat nai...(hugging ruhi)

Trisha- achha ok ok fine..!! abhi lets not just start this fight waise manik... cabir aur navya kidhar hain...

Manik- arre wo log aaj subha hi ek buissness trip ke liye nikle...aur dadi ko ngo ke kaam se Chandigarh jana pada...and befor u ask about bhai aur di...so let me tell u ki bhai kisi kaam se shimla gaye hain and di is in her clinic ...

Trisha- ok...i see...

Manik-aacha waise tu aaj bhi waise hi hai jaise college days mein hua karti thi na...ek dam chant ...uppar se...gusse wali...

Trisha- oye tu meko kya bol raha hai...aapne college days bhul gaya kya...angry young man...sirf nandu ke saath hi tu kabu mein reheat tha nai toh u would literally set the whole college on fire for small small things...

Ruhi- hawww bhai...aap aise the...

Trisha- aur nahi toh...tujhe pata hai...ek baar nandini ko ek ladke ne college mein line mari thi ...toh humare manik malhotra the great ne u wont believe kya kiya...

Ruhi-kya kiya...?

Trisha- inhone...bade hi saaf niyat ke saath aapni sharifi dekhate hua uss bande ke pant se 1 meter lambi china bomb ki ladi attach ki aur usse jaladiya...

All burst into laughter...

Ruhi- hawww bhai aap ne aisa kiya...(laughing like a maniac)

Trisha- wo bichara itna dar gaya ki wo college ke pool mein hi kud gaya phir baad mein usse yaaad aya ki usse toh tairna hi nahi aata...(laughing)

Manik- hand toh...aur waise bhi wo koi bichara wichara nahi hai...usse meri nandu ko cheda toh kya mein usse chod deta...mera toh buss chale toh mein usska keema bana ke kutton ko khiladeta...

Trisha- shant gadadhari bheem shant..!!

Then they notice in all this one person is quite and lost somewhere...and that is nandini...

Manik- nandu...kya hogay...(rubbing her arm lightly)

This brings nandini out of her trance...she looks at manik and shakes her head as nothing.but manik very well knows that all this is because of the incident in the mall which happened this morning...so trying to cheer her up...

Manik- acha theek hai theek hai bahut ho gayi yeh sab baatein lets eat ice cream ...aur aaj hum sab meri nandu ka favourite black current khaenge...

Trisha- arre...manik tune toh meri muh ki baat cheen li...

In the living room-

Everyone is eating ice cream ...while manik is making nandini eat ice cream with his hands just the way she likes...

Trisha- hayee...nazar na lage tum bdonon ko...waise nandu...

Nandini looks at trisha...

Trisha- yeh...yeh kab hua I mean...college days mein toh aisa kuch nahi tha and ye alag baat hai ki hum sab ko dekhta tha but itna bada drastic chande..i mean...wow..

Nandini realizes what trisha is trying to point out and starts blushing...

Trisha- omg..!!!!dekha dekha dekha...(and rushes to nandini and holding her chin examins her)ooo god ...like seriously...meri...jhali nandu,jo jhagda hote hi aapna sara gussa sales boys be nikalti this...,choron ko kutton ki tarah dho dalti thi...,din bhar nautanki karti reheti thi...wo blush karrahi hai...wo bhi ek real girl jaise...

Nandini-tri... trisha tu kya bol rahi hai mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aaraha...(hiding her blush)

Manik- oye tu meri nandu ko tang mat kar...nandu tu ice cream pe concentrate kar iski bakwass sunne ki zarurat nahi...

Ruhi- hawww akka...trisha di zara mujhe bhi toh batana mere akka ke karnamon ke bare mein bhai mujhe bhi toh pata chale ki ghar par shant ,gaye jaise dekhna aur bartav karne wali meri akka asal mein kaise thi bhar...?(naughtyly)

Nandini- trisha...no...tu kuch nahi bolegi dekh...(showing her finger almost threatening her wich ofcouse didn't affect her even a bit)

Trisha- mein batati hun tujhe ruhi ki teri akka kya kya kaand karti thi college days mein...matlab bap re bap...kio isska chehera dekhkar turant dhoke mein aajata tha ki yeh innocent hai par usske peeche ka bhayankar chehera sirf mujhe manik ko aur cavya ko hi pata tha...ufff...ek bar kya hua...

Flashback-

Nandini- manik plz na...(whining like a kid)

Manik- nandini no means no...ek bar boldiya na...nahi...

Nandini- par manik yar plz na this is my 19th b day plz...tum aise nai karsakte mere sath...its so unfair...(turns her head around while folding her hands over her chest)

Manik- nandu yaar tu kuch aur maang le I promise I wont say know but not this yaar ...plz...

Nandini- nai meko yahi chahiye...i don't know anything...(pouting like a angry bird)

Actually from past 1 hour they were arguing over nandinis wish for her b day.and her wish was that she wanted to go to a pub ...She wanted to experience it once in her life...where as soon as manik heard her wish he started yelling his lungs out ...saying she has lost her mind...and now she was hell angry and she was sitting on his cars bonnet with foled legs and full on angry bird wala look while manik was trying to convince her to change her wish...all this drama was going on from past 1 hr in the middle of the road while the 3 idiots were sitting inside the car they were so bored that trisha was literally on the verge of drowing off while navya was looking at the drama like it was her fav tv serial going on...

Manik- nanu no means no do u have any idea ki kiss type ke log hote hain wahan...!!whanan kya sab chalta hai...what ifd kisi ne kuch kardiya...ya no no no no...no ways u r going anywhere near a pub...i cant take any risk with u...

Nandini-manik mein akele ladki nahi hun jo pub jati hain and mere saath toh tum sab hoge na especially tu bhi toh hoga na mere saath phir ...

When finally trisha lost her cool...

Trisha- guys stop it...!!!ye bheed bakri ki tarah beech sadak par ladhana bandd karo...either kahin chalo warna plz mujhe kripya karke iss bhuke insaan pe rehen dekhayeye...jo peechle dhai ghanton se tum laogon ki bakwasss sun raha hai...

Nandini- dekha tumhari wajhese kitna time waste ho gaya...heroine agar tu seedhe seedhe mere baat maan leta toh itna time waste na hota...

Manik- what...!!!nandu wo mein tere liye bhi toh bol sakta hun...

Trisha- shut up ...shut up!!! Both of u...agar 5 min ke andarmanik tune car start nahi ki aur mujhe kuch khane nahi mila toh meri chameli ki kasam mein tum dono ki yahin paka kar khajaungi...

Manik &nandini- par...

Trisha- ok...!!!fine nandu tujhe pub jana hai na...theek hai manik hum pub jaaa rahe hain...

Manik- par trisha yaar..

Trisha- manik...!!!kuch nahi hoga tu hai ...cabir bhi toh hai na humare saath...phir...?so chal abhi drive...

Manik- par...

Trisha- manik...!!!!

Manik- fine...

Pub fire and ice-

As soon as they enter the pub they see people dancing crazily ...some drinking some making out...and few creepy ones were looking at nandini checking her from top to botton...and as soon as manik saw this he was again back to his over possessive mode...

Instantly manik was holding nandini close to him as if she is a kid ...and opened his jackect...and gave it to nandini...

Nandinis attire-


Manik- nandini isse pehene rakhna ...

Nandini- what the hell manik...ye kya hai...(in an annoyed tone)

Manik- kya kya hai...if u want to be hear u have to wear this coat samjhe...

Nandini glares at him while cavya are seriously trying to control their laughter...

Manik- ooo kya yeh glare kya de rahi hai ...darta hun kya...aur waise bhi no ways mein tujhe aise andar janne dunga...u r wearing sleevless and that to backless...no bloody way..!!!these boys ..the way they r looking at u...

Nandini- hand toh ladke hain...unki fitrat mein ghurna hai...wo log gay nahi hai ki ladki dekhkar nazrein jhuka kar chalejayenge...

Listening to this cabir and trisha couldnot hold on anymore and burst into fits of laughter...

Cabir- oooh god nandu...gud one...!!ha ha ha...(with tears in his eyes due to over laughing)

Trisha- cbi officer manik malhotra ji agar aapki inspections khatam ho gayi hon and traffic police ke tarah mere nandu pe rules ka pahad todna complete ho gaya ho toh kya hum andar shalein ya yahin khade khade sari raat guzarni hai...

Manik- hand theek hai theek hai...buss ek minute...

Manik moves toward nandini and adjusts his coat on her once again and buttons it fully not even leaving a single one only to find a fuming nandini by now...

While the other keep laughing...

Finally they enter the pub...and everyone is busy in dancing when nandini feels thirsty...

Nandini provo-

pyaas lagi hai kya karun nahi agar iss heroin ko bata toh phir se peecha karte karte water counter tak bhi chala ayega...aiyappa yeh manik bhi na kabhi kabhi bilkul appa jaise behave karta hai...ek dum chipku...

When everybody were busy in dancing nandini quietly sneeked out and walked towards the bar counter...where hard drink ,softdrink...and even water was kept on the counter arranged properly in glasses...

Nandini was so engrossed indancing that didn't notice this and instead of picking up the water glass she picked up the vodka glass...

Mean while on noticing nandini is missing manik paniced and started searching the whole pub for her including cabir when as soon as everyone started hooting manbir turned around and...

Cabir- oh boy...(shocked)

Manik- kar kya rahi hai yeh pagal ladki...!!(shocked)

Nandini was standing on the bar counter ...facing her back towards them...in a sexy pose when the music started playing and she started singing...

Oh come to me
na na na na..
I came to see
Na na na na..

And then she turns around and her hair are moved away from her face by a small gush of wind...



Then she starts moving her hips with the music in a sexy manner...and jumps off the bar counter...

Manik- nandini...!!(and rushes towards her but she again starts dancing)

Honthon pe beimaaniyan
Karle karle, thodi nadaaniyan
Honthon pe manmaaniyaan
Karle karle, thodi nadaaniyan

gesturing her lips wiping of her gloss in a hot manner while the boys start drooling over her some try to touch her when manik pulls nandini towards himself...but nandini is nandini she starts dancing around him...

Mujhe aadhi raat ko sataane lage
Mujhe apne saath tadpaane lage

moving around him lighty moving her hand on his shoulder from behind then she goes away feeling her touch missing manik looks around only to fing her dancing on the dance floor carelessly

Tu aaja paas, ye bulaane lage
Tujhe chhoona chaahe
Mere ye, mere ye, mere

nandini feeling hot tries to open the coat but manik doesn't let her but still nandini does that pushing him away...she removes her coat in a seductive way and throw it somewhere in the corner doing the signature step...gesturing her lips while sawing her hips...

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pal-pal tujhko karte miss
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
I know you want my baby lips

Na na na na..

manik rushes and picks up her coat while a boy is trying to get close to her...trying to hold her from her waist before he could do so ... manik rushs towards nandini and pulls her away from that boy...

Hello-hello bol ke
Baby lips khol ke
Harqataan kare naughtiyan
Missing tenu whole day
Love you menu bol de
Adaavan teri hegi naughtiyan

nandini again seductively dances around manik and pulls him towards her by his collar...singing while maniks hols her from her waist supporting her so that she doesn't fall...

Meri khwahishon ko talab hai teri
Aa qareeb aa, ab kar na deri
Meri khwahishon ko talab hai teri
Aa kareeb aa, ab kar na deri

Tere faasle muje jalaane lage
Raftaar saanson ki badhaane lage
Tu aaja paas ye bulaane lage
Teri baat maane
Mere ye, Mere ye, Mere..

Then pushing him again does the signature step...

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pal-pal tujhko karte miss
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
I know you want my baby lips

Na na na na..
Oh come to me
na na na na..
I came to see
Na na na na..

Everyone is engrossed in dancing while nandini dances crazily around manik ...and also forces him to dance with her ...and manik to dances with her...

Dil baarishon mein tarasne lagaa
Teri pyaas mein ye dhadakne lagaa





Dil baarishon mein tarasne lagaa
Teri pyaas me ye dhadakne lagaa



Tere haath mein haath jo aane lage
Mere soye armaan jagaane lage


Tu aaja pas ye bulaane lage
Tere hona chaahe
Mere ye, Mere ye, Mere..

She again does her signature step...gesturing her lips while sawing her hips...

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pal-pal tujhko karte miss
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips
I know you want my baby lips

then manik goes and picks her over her sholder walking out of the club while nandini keeps babering...god know what what level things...and cavya and trisha r laughing to no extent...

Nandini-na nan na na...oo come t o me...(sawing her legs)manik...mujhe neeche utaro...abhi...

Manik- chup ek dam chup...

Theya ll come out pf the pub to the parking lot...which was thank fully sunsan otherwise nandini ka drama dekhkar koi na koi to mental asylum mein call kar hi deta...he he...

Manik makes her sit on the cars bonnet ...

Manik- now sit here and don't move...

Nandini- don't move...(mincs him)

Manik- bair- pani ki bottle dena...and navya andar car ki kit se hangover ki mediceins dede plz...

Navya nods and goes to bring it from inside the car...

Maik- ab tu kya khade khade aise ghur rahi hai...yeh sab tere wajhe se hua hai...I swear trisha I will kill u...look kya halat ho gayi hai usski...

While nandini is babbering like an idiot...

Trisha- aree par meine kya kiya...meine thodi usse bola tha ki nandu ja mere bachhe ja pani ke jagaha jake vodka peele...

Manik- chup kar...!!tujhe toh mein baad mein dekhunga...

Cabir gives nandini the bottle...

Cabir- nandu ye le jaldi se ye pani peele...

And god know nandini thinks of what she immediately stands up on the bonnet ...

Manik- nandini abhi ke abhi neeche utar gir jayegi phir chot lag jayegi...

Nandini-chup!!bhaiyu u are sambha and I am gabbbar...ok now follow me...

Cabir and the others were trying hard to control their laughter...

Nandini- aree oo sambha...kitne aadme the...?

Cabir- do the sarkar...

Nandini- cheee bhaiyu aapko counting bhi nahi aati see I will teach u ...(counting on her fingers)

4 people hain na bhaiyu...so say it chaar...

Cabir- ok ok...mere syaapa queen...i mean gabbar ji...chaar the sarkar...

Nandini-hmmm...gud...

Manik- nandini buss ab bahut ho gaya chalo neeche utro...

Nandini- kutte...!!!

And everybody s eyes almost come out of their sockets ...even manik is shocked at his place...

Nandini- mein tera khun pi jaungi...!!!

And everybody burst into laughter whilemanik is still in shock...and with this nandini faints and befor she could fall manik catches her and hols her in his arma close to his chest...

Manik- trisha ki bachhe mein tujhe chodunga nai...

Trisha- oo hello meine kya kiya...ab wo filmy dialogues mak tera sar kha rahi hai to issmein mere kya galti hai...!!

Manik- teri hi galti hai...u are the bloody person who is reaponsible for all this tere wajhe se meri innocent nandu aise baatein kar rahi hai...tu hi thi na jissne usse aise ajeeb ajeeb films dikhane leke gayi thi...ye usse ka asar hai...now see kaise ut patang cheezein bol rahi hai...

Trisha- wa wa wa...matlab tujhe toh sirf mein hi milti hun blame dalne ke liye...matlab teri nandu ki toh koi galti hi nahi hoti haina...

Present-

Everyone is dieing laughing almost...while nandini is hell embarresed...

Manik- oyee bus bus ab mei nandu ko koi nahi chidaiga...

Just then geet enters...

Geet- oho aaj toh sare yahin bethe hain ...bhai kya baatein ho rahi hai zara humein bhi toh batao...arre trisha itne dinon baad...!!

Trisha gets up and hugs her...

All settle down and start talking...

Geet- achha trisha aap akeli ayi hain...shivaay kahan hai...?

Trisha- naam na lein un bagad bille ka...unhi ki wajhe se toh mein india ayi hun...ufff din bhar tadi marne aur mere har chezz mein nuks nikalne ke ilawa unhe koi kam nahi ata...kanje ankon wale bagad bille kahin ke...

Geet- phir se aap dono mein jhagda ho gaya...ufff kya karun mein aap dono ka...(laughing)

Trisha- aap kuch karein na karein mein toh zarur karungi...ek bari mere samne toh ayien ...apni chameli ki kasam unki ye tadi marne wali zuban ko see dungi...hmmh..!!

Everyone laughs just then...there is a sond of some choppe...everyone goes out ...only to find a chopper land in the malhotra premises...

The person comes out of the copper as soon as it lands and runs his hand son his hair in style...and he is none other than shivaay singh oberoi...

Shivaay-bhabi...how r u...(touching her feet)

Geet- mein theek hun aap kaise hain...and aane aisa kya kiya ki trisha phir see aapse naaraz ho gai...

Shivaay- ooh god bhabi I swear meine kuch nahi kiya par ye trisha...isski toh aadat hai har cheez pe over reat karti hai...

And trishas mouth hangs open...

Trisha- mein over react karti hun...koi baat nahi mr .oberoi ...aj sab pata chaljayega...

Shivaaye goes to manik and hugs him ...

Manik- gud to see u buddy..

Shivaay- long time yaar ...

Then he looks towards nandini...

Manik- yeh nandini hai...she is my girlfriend...

Shivaay- hello nandini...nice meet u...

Nandini smiles...

They all walk inside the mansion...

All are sitting when geet leaves to arrange some snacks in the kitchen ...when manik excuses himself and goes to the kitchen and explains everything about the mall incident to geet...

Geets eys become watery and soon she starts crying...

Geet- ooh god nandu ...nadu kaise theek hogi aagar yahi sab aise baar baar hota raha toh kaise...

Manik- di we have to think of something...

When they hear someone clearing his throat...

They turn around to find shivaay ...

Shivaay- ummm I am sorry but I was here for water and I overheard your conversation...

Manik- no buddy why r u saying like this man...u r family...

And manik explains everything to him...

Shivaay- ooh god nandini has gone through soo much...usse dekhke kaoi bhi isska andaza bhi nahi laga sakta...I must say she is a stong woman...welll as u said ki we have to heal her then I guess I have an idea...

Manik- rally what is it...

Shivaay- umm lets plan a outdoor more like a friends and family holiday...she will get distracted from all this,she will feel stress free...plus we will share family time which she craved for in these years...

Geet- yeh toh badi acchi baat kahi aapne shivaay...par hum jayenge kahan..?

Shivaay- ummm how about austrailia?its very gud for family holidays...

Manik- great then...I will arrange everything...

In the living room-

Manik- guys guys guys...listen up...I have an announcement to make...

Everyone look at manik even nandini...

Manik- so we have decided that its quite tensed up here...this year ...has not been so happening for us...(looking at nandini while nandini smiles faintly)so to let all the worries and tension go ...we need a holiday hence humne socha ki why not plan a family holiday trip...and waise bhi new year eve is coming so why not start a fresh...with new hopes and new beginnings what say..?

Ruhanika- cool jiju...ita an kickass idea...I toh totally love it...

Trisha- arre wah...very gud manik waise were are we going...

Manik- we have decided austrailia...

Trisha- omg Australia ...yeh bada maza ayega...mein toh surely wo karungi..wo kya kehete hain usse...bun...buj...

Shivaay- bunjee jumping...

Trisha gives a stirn glare to shivaay...

Trisha- hand wahi wahi...

Manik- ok guys so...its final then ...um hum parso niklenge...let me inform everyone so that they come home by tomorrow...achha abhi dinner mein time hai so...everyone apne rooms mein jaakar rest karlijiye...directy dinner time pe milte hain...?

Everyone agrees...

Shivaay- hand yaar waise bhi I am very tired...come trisha baby...

Trisha- ohh baby really u r sooo tired...theek hai phir...i am also tied so ek kaam karte hain...aap aaj sofe pe so jayein...sari thakan mit jayegi...(sarcastically)

Shivaay- what..!!!u cant do this...

Trisha- ooo I can BA BY...(smiling)

Shivaay- aare trisha yaar tumhe pata hai na ki mujhe tumhare bina neend nahi aati ...this is so unfair...

Trisha- wo aapko talk back karne se pehele sochna chahiye tha...uff I am very tired so gud bye everyone dinner pe milte hain...

Saying this she leaves leaving a devastated shivaay...while the other die laughing at his situation...hmmm women are indeed something...if they can make u smile and make your heart flutter ...they can also make u cry and suffer to infinity...


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