#7//The Ex's At War//Ch21-Pg116 n NOTE-Pg144 n LINK FOR THREAD on PG-1

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591994

@591994

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#961

Loved the update...like finally they talked about it...i just everything just don't get dampen the very next day by some or other misunderstanding...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

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nita24

@nita24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#962

Hey update was awesome
They make love
amazing written each n every emotion
Countine soon
Tnx tc
Keep smiling

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Hetal.D

@Hetal.D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#963

Abhise hi sorry coz I won't write a long comment...coz my words can't describe ur update.it's penned sooo beautifully. Dis was very much needed for Manan n u did a fab job.venting out ur frustration n pouring ur heart out means u hve hit d top n its a must.awesum to say manik should grounded to his wife's frustration without loosing cool. Happy thy r healing each other.keep giving us such wonderful updates. Tc

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oaoa

@oaoa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#964

Finally they talkedd!

Amazing update!

Waiting for the next oneee, update soon.

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mmnn

@mmnn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#965

Finally...finally...as expected Awesome update.

Each and every emotion of m & n you wrote so perfectly...

love love this update...

thank you once again for this wonderful story

waiting for next update..

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#966

Awesome update
U portrayed manan's feelings so beautifully
Eagerly waiting for next update
Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed 😊

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Ky2_best

@Ky2_best

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#967

I think we shouldnt ask u for updates soon bcs it makes it difficult for u to write... Ive read impulsive and the chap "the awaited night" was far better written than this.. This chappy looked more like they do it everyday.. Didn't want manan to reunite this way :(( thought it would be longer n more well described but i guess u have lots to manage so its okay :))

nonetheless It was such a beautiful update finally mananare back..! Beautiful :) glad they buried all the hatches.! Finally would get to see happy manan.. And yes manini would be the happiest of all now to see her parents back together :))

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Swift007

@Swift007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#968

It was awesome

They sorted everything

Fight and fights but al last they cleared everything

It was amazing

Even the random moment was good

Waiting to see everybody's reaction

Now that Rewa will stay away from Manik..

Update soon

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#969

finally I'm back at home from my cousin sis marriage...

now i can do lamna wala comment which i wasn't able to do last week...though i just did small sa comment...

now coming to chapter... from title itself i was happy though i got d hint from promo only that NOW FIREWORKS WILL HAPPEN..when he saidlet me heal u tonight ...❤️...😊

manik was so flabbergasted to see nandu doing something like that...
n nandini ne apni saari badhas nikal di manik pe...

jo jo uske maan , dil mein tha sab gussa nikal diya manik ko...

baat itni badi ban gayi bcoz of these two impulsive souls...agr ek baar baat kr lete apne ego ko side rakh kr toh nobat yahan tk ni pohanchti ...

pr agr baat krte toh prob ni hoti n agr prob ni hoti toh hamari writer kaise yeh story likh pati..heheee

manik throwed themselves in pool...🤣 🤣...hehee..on d way nobody hd guts to stop manik...lolz...rather those waiters were enjoying...
manini hoti toh woh bhi enjoy krti just like their beach patch up whn he fall on nandu n people clicked their pics

very cool way to cool a person 🤣

n aftr that her punch n slaps n his kisses n kisses... awww that was very sweet...

at that time also she was thinking of not hurting him at that position where blood was oozing by her punch...n scratching him at his back by manicured nails so that at least he doesn't get infected... awww

loved d way manik called nandini as Baby..❤️

n then their room fight n romance started...

n thank god at last she talked to him about that night were rewa came n said about DAD...n finally he was relieved n came to know why she was behaving like that...

n that dad comes out b manikz dad...n everyone must hv thought about rewaz dad n something related to business stuff not about their relationship bcoz that toh doesn't even exist...

manik also wanted desperately to come back to his family his namdu his manini baby...n his dad didn't talked to him after that...awww

really liked one more new name of rewa...VIXEN ...that she is...

scene which i like d most...when she told him to remove his wet clothes n his reply
Listen you need to open it fast before you catch a cold...do u know cough might congest ur chest", he tried to be overtly informative and I could just laugh at his lame excuses and I teased him more nodding my head in a no. He huffed in annoyance and got up peeling out his shirt and vest as if they were on fire n fell back on me. He cherished the smile on my lips n d glow that enlightened my face in the dimly lit room...

loved d way nandu started feeling guilty n crying after seeing manikz scratched back ...

this was also very cute...😉 It was difficult to differentiate who borrowed from whom, Manini did the exact same thing whenever I held her close to my chest, the difference being she was the baby and this was the father of my baby...

n when he asked 4 d permission n loved d way she granted him by making him win his bet by giving him his 7th kiss...awww that was also very cute...😊

n i just hope after this night they r not back to square one...i.e. not patching up

healthy fighting z okay...like nok jhok...

loved d part...😊
continue soon...

Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago