MANAN FF~ I WILL MAKE U FALL FR ME~(chapter 12) pg 72 (pm later) - Page 45

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
thnk god mr murthy is not dead😃
manan were so relieved😃
but who called manik?
and what manik is hiding from her?
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmm...After long time reading your story ...
It's really amazing ...
This is full of mystery ...
There are many points which touched my heart ...
I really appreciate your work ...
You write sooo beautifully ...
The flashbacks are shooo wonderful ...
I just wanted to keep reading them ..
because I was reading the flashbacks ...
I completely forget the present track and was busy in imagining those ... 😳
They are too beautiful ...
then actually after reading flashbacks ..when I came on present track ...I got too curious to know the secrets ..and these mysteries haye. ..It kills me ...haha ... 😆 but I love mysteries ...waiting for it to be revealed ...I know it won't be soon revealed but it will ...so waiting ...

Thank you for continuing your work ...
You are one of my favourite writer ...
Sorry for being gayab and not commenting since long ...
but I was seriously not reading any stories and when ever I am getting time ...I am reading it ..and when I saw your stories while surfing I just started reading ...
Thanks for all those pms...
Sorry for any word that hurted you ..
will try to be regular ...
Keep up your writing skills hamesha. ...
Thanks ...

Lots of love ,
Ekta ...
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update.
Hope manik vl soon found her father
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god ye kya ho raha hai😕
Bechari Nandu.
Can't bear all of this na...just Manik.is there with her😃
Jaldi all goodie goodie karde haan😉
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional and mysterious story..
I love this kind of plot...
Nandini was so numb and shattered...
Manik knew that her father is in danger..
What is wrong!??
What r the secrets that manik and Mr murthy is trying to hide!?
Whose body is that!
Where is Mr murthy????
I liked the concept very much...
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 11
KUCH ISH TARAH.


IN HOTEL ROOM

Nandini was standing near the window and was seeing accurately nowhere outside the window...it was already night and the weather outside was very cold..it was snowing and the sparkling light bulbs glowing outside was making the environment beautiful...looking at such weather anyone would have forgotten their miseries...but nandini's case was different..the ever so bubbly chirpy girl who had a beautiful life with her father which was made much more beautiful by manik at a time was now colourless..simply lifeless as she had lost both imp pieces of her heart...!! Her father was missing and her husband.her love..her life was missing too...though he was with her but still she felt he was far away from her...!!!

Nandini was thinking about manik and his unusual behavior from last week...the person who was once a open book in front of her was now just impossible to understand...she just couldn't digest the fact that manik didn't love her..cause she can clearly see the love he has for her and her appa...the way he consoled her in hospital was not just because she was his best friend..!! And then manik's unusual behavior of hiding things with her...!!

The way manik was secretly involved in his phone...from the afternoon she had noticed him lost in his thoughts...nervous whenever his phone rang...going in a corner to talk..avoiding eye contact with her..this was so not manik...and she knew something is fishy...!!! And right now her problem was which way should she think..!? She should concentrate on finding her appa or solve the mystery that manik was hiding..!! She knew its going to be very hard days for her...but she do have belief on her aayiaappa...she knew everything is going to be fine soon...!!

Her trance was broken by a.touch in her shoulder...she turned to see manik standing behind her with a questionful eyes...
"Tum kya soch rahi thi Nandini?? Dad ke baare main?" Asked manik to which Nandini just nodded her head...!!!
Manik opened his arms wide for a hug and Nandini looked at him in confusion...manik raised his eyebrow asking what ...Nandini just sighed and slowly went in his embrace clutching his shirt tight...and manik too encircled his hands around her waist and pulled her closer to himself as if trying to bury her in his chests.. !!!

"Nandu tumhe tension lene ki koi zarurat nahi hain...main dad ko kuch nahi hone dunga..I promise..main unhe dhund nikalunga...!!" Said manik in assuring tone and kissed her hairs..Nandini slowly raised her head to see in his eyes and said "tum nahi manik...hum dhundenge unhe...hum dono Milkar...!!"

But before manik could reply his phone rang...he broke the hug and when he saw the caller I'd his face went red in anger...and nandinj just looked at him in confusion...manik without looking at her said in a small tone " Nandini tum dinner order karo..main abhi aata hun..!!" Saying this manik went outside in the garden leaving a confused Nandini behind..!!

Scroll down for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART B

IN THE GARDEN

"Teri himmat kaise hui mujhe call karne ki..?!!! " yelled manik in hatred...!! "Abhi to sirf Maine call hi kiya hain...aur tu janta hain ki agar tune meri baat nahi maani toh main aur bahut kuch karsakta hun.!!" Replied the person from the other side with the same hatred...!!!
"Tu Manik malhotra ke hote huye kuch bhi nahi karsakta...jab tak main jinda hu main tujhe mere family ke sath kuch nahi karne dunga...samjha tu!" Anger spitting with his words to which he heard from the other side ."tch..tch tch...manik malhotra...tu kuch bhi nahi kar payega mujhe rokne ke liye..yeh jaante huye ki Mr.murthy ko khatra hain tu unhe bacha nahi paaya...toh. ab tu kya karsakta hain...much bhi nahi..ha ha ha !!"

"Ha jaanta tha main pehle se hi ki dad ki Jaan ko khatra hain..aur nahi protect kar paya main unhe...lekin!" His sentence was left incomplete by a loud noise..he turned back only to see a broken vase beside a shocked face who was froze in her place ...and the sight was enough to stop his heart beat...there she was Nandini standing right in front of him with a teary eyes and he knew this time she have heard everything...!!! He was about to say something but before he could Nandini ran away from there towards her room ..!!
Manik quickly cutv the call and ran behind her all the time saying her to stopp...!!!

Nandini was about to close the door of her room but manik came in nick of time and stopped her from closing the door and entered inside...!! Looking at him Nandini turned to ho to the washroom but manik quickly got hold of her wrist "Nandini plz..ek baar mujhe explain karne ka mauka to do..!!

" kya explain manik...tum mujhe iss baat ke liye kya explanation de sakte ho..!! Mere appa ki jaan khatre main thi ...aur yeh baat tum jaante they...lekin tumne mujhe batana jaruri nahi samjha !! Aur abh natija yeh hain ki appa kahi nahi hain...!!! and tum mujhse yeh expect karte ho ki main tumhe explain karne ka chance du.!!?" Yelled Nandini all the time crying but the anger visible in her eyes made manik scared fr a while and he just couldn't see in her eyes..he kept silent with his head hung low...!!

Nandini came close to him and raised his face making him look into her eyes.." bolo manik main sun rahi ho.. I am giving u chance to explain me..so common say me tum itne din se mujhse kya chupa rahe ho..aur kyun chupa rahe ho!!"

"Main yeh nahi bata sakta .."said manik in a slow tone..to which Nandini just looked at him in disbelief..!! "Tum mujhe abhi bhi yeh nahi bata sakte...tumne mujhe samaj ke kya rakha hain manik...!! Woh mere appa hain aur tum mujhe nahi bataogey...!!! Tum mujhse pyaar karte huye bhi mujhse kehete ho ki u don't love me..!! Aur u still expect me to understand u..!!
All this while Nandini was constantly crying and pushing him backwards by hitting in his chest but manik didn't react at all..he just kept mum which was infuriating Nandini to the levels of infinity...!! Manik slowly. Raised his hands and calmly cleaned her tears lovingly..and nandu thought he would open up but she was wrong..!! " plz don't cry nandu..your tears make me weak !!" Said manik in a low tone to which nandu looked at him with hurt eyes..!!

"Manik agar mere tears tumhare liye precious hote toh tum mujhe kabhi hurt nahi karte..these tears are given to me by u..sirf aur sirf tum ho mere dukh ke wajah...!!" Saying this Nandini slowly went towards the bed and pretended to sleep...!!! Leaving a shattered manik behind who had been shedding silent tears all this while...!! He sat in the chair beside the bed and wrote something in the diary and slept in the chair itself keeping his head in the table..!!!

Next morning..

Nandini woke up with a headache and puffy eyes due to constant crying at the night...as soon as she opened her eyes she saw manik sleeping in the chair...looking at him she just sighed...!!

She stood to go near him and slowly caressed his hair and said in the defeated tone " manik..tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte na..u don't trust me..isiliye toh tum mujhse baat share nahi karsakte..!!"

But then her eyes fell on the diary...she slowly picked it up not wanting to disturb his sleep...there it was written.

KUCH ISS TARAH TERE PALKE MERI PALKO SE MILADE..
AANSU TERE SAARE MERE PALKO PAIN SAJADE !!
KUCH ISS TARAH...

reading this few tears made its way from her eyes and she slowly carssed the writings with her fingers...her trance was broken by the ring tone of manik's. Mobile..she picked it up...and went to the balcony.. she had a doubt that the phone call was of same person wwith whom manik was talking last night...but before she could pick it up ...
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Hi guys...how are u all doing!?
I know I am little late but I was waiting for the 40+ likes which I got really late..so if u want an early update u have to like the updates guys..!!
And I know the story is going very slow..but I assure u guys now I will give fast updates..!! And I just hope u guys are liking it...
Kuch zyaada exaggerate toh nahi kiya na Maine.??
And those lyrics is of the song by atif aslam and I am really sorry if the lyrics is.wrong..!!
And I am sorry Maine comments nahi ppadhe hain...but I promise I will read them tomorrow and reply to each one of u..
Do like and comment
Lots of love
Keep smiling
Neetu...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Hope manik will share everything with nandini. ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was quite twist wala episode..

I liked d twist..

manik.snatched d phone right?

I hope nandini attends d call n gets d clue abt d reason behind maniks behaviour.

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Manan hug was nice...
finally Nandu came to know abt Manik hiding something...
She was soo shocked and hurt...
Manik was soo helpless to see Nandu like this...
Now whose call is this...
Waiting for next..
Luved it..
Update soon..

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