MANAN FF~ I WILL MAKE U FALL FR ME~(chapter 12) pg 72 (pm later)

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😆Hello everyone...how r u all doing .??
😊
I don't know how many of u know me..so just to give a short Intro..
I m Neetu..😊
Hmm..this is my third story in the forum and I m kind of nervous cause its my first Ff ..
And then I m quite unsatisfied with the response over my previous works...so this time I m gonna continue only when I get good response...😕
So here is the prologue...


~~PROLOGUE...~~

Dad..plz I said na that I just can't marry her..and its my last decision...
BUt y manik...what's wrong in her...she is a beautiful lady..she has her own opinions towards all the things just like u...she holds that aura around her that she is an independent girl ...she is just perfect...what do u think that lacks in her..??
Dad I m not saying that she lacks something...intact she is a perfect girl and whoever she will marry will be the luckiest person...what I m saying is that I m not the one fr her..I don't deserve her..
manik..I know what u deserve and what u don't...and once I have said that u r going to marry her that means u will have to..don't u regard me as your father..??
plz don't say like that..u know that I mean u as my father when I call u dad...and even she is gonna reject this proposal of marrying someone like me...
{ before dad could speak they heard a determined voice }
appa..I m ready to marry manik...!!!
***-_ **** *^^^^ **** **** ****

So guys did u like the prologue ??
What do u think who is the girl and y is manik not agreeing to marry her ??
Plz do give or feedbacks...
Lots of love..
Neetu..😛



~~INDEX~~
PART 1 (A/B)

PART C

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4574913/manan-ff-i-will-make-u-fall-fr-me-chapter-12-pg-72-pm-later?pn=8
PART D/E


CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5-------PG 30

CHAPTER 6(A/B)--PG 35

CHAPTER 6 (C)-----PG 38

CHAPTER 7(A)------PG 43

CHAPTER 7(B)------PG 48

CHAPTER 8--------PG 50

CHAPTER 9-------PG 58

CHAPTER 10-------PG 63

CHAPTER 11-------PG 65

CHAPTER 12-------PG 72


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priyasmiley thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo fr new story
nice start
itwas nandu i may think
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyasmiley

congo fr new story

nice start
itwas nandu i may think
continue soon

Thank u fr commenting...😳😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new story
Manik don't want to get married to that girl, which I think is 'Nandini'. But why??
Nice start
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowooo superb amazing interesting ff plz cont soon thanks for pm😛😆😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amzing story
Plot is very interesting.
😉
Jaldi jaldi update dena...
Umm that girl is obviously Nandini...n maybe Manik is refusing coz he has someone in his life..ya he has his dreams...or duniya ki sabse purani story...Maine uss nazar se kabhi dekha nai tumhe.. 😆
But I highly doubt that it is the 3rd option. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manancrazy_95

Congrats for the new story
Manik don't want to get married to that girl, which I think is 'Nandini'. But why??
Nice start
Cont soon


thank u so.much fr commenting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the new story...
awesome prologue..
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazingg
Continue soon


will try to update soon if the response is gud !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali3010

Nice prologue
Continue soon :))


thank u dear/...

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