Originally posted by: ankita_t
Hi,
Apologies for late reply and I hope you'll forgive me. Ok let me start the comment now else our gossip won't end lol... I quite like the idea as to how you detail things in a pleasant yet sensitive manner.
The beginning of the chapter itself left a mark on me when you portrayed the woven thoughts of Nandini being a number too. It was absolutely well thought and narrated. The dreary hopes of her were emoted with a lot of sensitivity and right balance. Hats Off to you !!!
The mixed and complexed feeling of anxiety, fear, inquisitiveness and helplessness that had engulfed the heart of Nandini was depicted in the utmost honesty by you.
I had asked you about the wine candle scene in our chatting session and was very touched to know you had thought of it on your own and you were a bit nervous with it. Well, I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you one thing- I don't know if you did it just as a writer, but it holds such a deep meaning not only in medical terms but also from a philosophical point of view. So, yeah you did a great job with that idea.
I am quite happy and contend to see you write like this and flourish more with every chapter. It flutters my heart with emotions and gets my eyes filled with tears of joy to see you budding everyday. Your story should be read by all and I'll appeal everyone to read it.
Your 'NEW LIFE WITH SHRINK' will give hopes to so many people who somewhere might be struggling from depression or are sad. So, keep on writing and show the world that candle light is enough to walk out of darkness.
Lots of Love
Ankita
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